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I just realized Weiss Schnee's name is literally White Snow....
6742585 All of the characters are based off of fairy tales, Ruby: Red Riding Hood, Weiss: Snow White, Blake: Beauty and the Beast and Yang: Goldilocks and the Three Bears.
@ Qrow: So how are you going to have RWBY get around their now limited supply of Dust seeing as it doesn't exist in Equestria.
6742638 You'll see.
I think your original idea of RWBY arc is done before the next member JNPR gets a bit of spot light, or perhaps you could do chapters as they are relivent, sometimes its better to break up the slower pace chapters or such, its up to you on how you space and break your what will seem to be connected multiple stories, apart.
I am very interested on seeing your story unfold.
6742659 it really isnt that hard, there are quit a few substances in equestria that could have similar properties.
6742676 I have a plan for handling Dust.
Poor Yang! I'd bust a tree myself if i lost one of my siblings!
Why does she have to work off the damages she caused when she had no control over what happen? It seems stupid and pity that one tree she purposely knock down I get but the others were out of her out control. I've seen how big their apple orchard is you could literally build ten houses on it its large.
Honestly I like having a JNPR chapter at the end of each arc. Gives everything a nice flow to show whats happening back in Remnant while RWBY are getting back on their feet.
"Ooh, another chapter! Wait, I've already read it in editing..." Oh well, still great the fourth time around...
Huh? The Apple family seem rather cold hearted in this story. Except maybe Apple Bloom.
(folds hands before him and leans forward)
Tell me more.
I'd say one JNPR chapter after every 3 RWBY chapters. I WANNA SEE RUBY!! ....or Blake, I'd be happy with Blake.
I think three RWBY chapters for a JNPR chapter seems like a good balance,![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
unless you have more than just the mourning in Remnant,
in which 2 for 1 seems less nerve racking.
Keep up the good work.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
It's probably best to have an arc of JNPR after an arc of RWBY. It's generally a bit easier to keep the reader focused on one area of a story until it's done before moving on to another.
6742679 KO AWESOME chapter though I like both ideas so why go with two chapters of Team JNPR or just go with the second option, anyway hope the next chapter will more awesome than the last. Also what would Uncle Qrow and Winter will take of their families death?![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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I think the harsh reaction to the loss of a few trees is out of character for the Apple family, especially considering that Rainbow Dash is still alive. Applejack is an understudy for the element of generosity and her family is just as amiable as she is.
Rather than make a schedule, you should just write something about JNPR whenever you have something relevant to write.
6743181 We'll find out whenever we get to Remnant.
6743131 There will definitely be more than just mourning. I have all of Volume 2 to cover, after all!
6743062 Just gotta wait until their arcs! I wonder what they're up to?
6742960 Well, this is the story all about how my life got flipped turned upside down...
6742906 Are they coming off that way? The only one I meant to come off as cold was Mac, and that's only because he's a bit too protective.
6742895 Hey, you still get early access!
6742873 That's my original train of thought, but then I realized that Flickering Flame doesn't have a lot of... I dunno, action? There's events happening, but it mainly focuses on Yang's presence in Equestria and her depression over Ruby's death. If I break it up with a few JNPR chapters, we can move along the Remnant plot and get some action without making it feel out of place in Flickering Flame.
6742777 The Apple Farm struggles to stay afloat, as evidenced by a few Season 1 episodes and Super Speedy Cider Squeezy 6000. And not only have they lost a few trees, there's also a pretty sizable crater in their land that needs fixing. All of that combined with the regular money needed to feed them plus Yang now, bills, and I'm assuming that Equestria has taxes... They really can't afford to fix all of that unless they have Yang as unpayed help. Add to the fact that they don't know what happened. For all they know, Yang could have chosen to jump into their farm. Yang herself doesn't remember what happened just yet, either.
All in all, it's just a bad situation for everybody.
Thanks for the comments, everybody! It helps keep me going.
6743225 You see, JNPR has a plot of their own. If I don't focus on them for a bit, we'd be seriously behind and need to shift focus away from Equestria to play catch up for awhile. If I focus on them too much, RWBY gets left in the dust and the main plot of the story gets lost, you know?
6743237 That's why you should keep your options open rather than commit to a plan so early. If you need 3 chapters of JNPR to line them up, write 3. If you only need one, only write one.
6743255 Hm... I think I'll just test the waters. Next chapter'll be JNPR, and if we need it, there'll be a second one.
6743267 That's good news for me; two of my favorite characters are part of JNPR
yes!
6743233 KO awesome and hope to see Jane and Pyrra find love for each other.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Also have you seen the new RWBY episode yet awesome isn't it.
6743334 Like I said, I don't plan on actually pairing them together. There will be teasing moments, but they won't both be saying "I love you".
And I have seen it. It was indeed awesome!
6743304 Indeed!
6743286 Which ones? My favorites are Weiss and Doctor Oobleck.
6743233 Hmph. Well, until then, you did a much better job with the prologue. What made you go with RWBY and MLP?.....make more soon please!
6743394 Simply because both RWBY and MLP mean a lot to me. I was in a bad place after my stepfather died, and both shows helped me keep going. So, when I was considering writing a RWBY story, MLP just kinda popped into my head.
And rest assured, more is on the way!
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I like Weiss, Pyrrha and Nora, in that order. I like Jaune half of the time. (When he's being the heroic normal guy and not the stupid comic relief)
I mean, I get where he's coming from, but Big Mac come on, bad timing man.
After reading these 3 chapters in succession while still remembering the original two chapters, I must say, this is a grand improvement! I liked the way the fight scene from the prologue is broken into flashbakcs, and the story flows much more nicely. I didn't find anything off with the characterizations, so that's always a plus!
This story now deserves to be in the feature box, and I will be facing and tracking!
Kick butt, Qrow!
The tree punching scene and the dialogue that followed really tugged at my heartstrings, because I can relate to it alot. Especially tonight.
Also the second option, with the question you asked.
Keep writing my friend.
At some point, someone is going to have to explain how and why RWBY are on Equis and not in their graves on Remnant.
6744207 Basically, they still have bodies back on Remnant, so their corpses were buried. I'll be going into the specifics of their crossing over in a later arc.
6743356 KO sorry and hope the next chapter is more awesome.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Awesome work so far! Can't wait for the next chapter!
6745584 I'll fix these ASAP! Thank you!
Jaune is going to be crying in the JNPR chapter. I'm calling it.
Hmm.
Interesting. I can see how the writing has improved.
Honestly, though, I like the reference to Red Like Roses.
6750532 Thanks! Fixed.
SOMEONE FIND THAT SAD GIF OF THE LITTLE KID ASKING FOR SOME MORE SOUP!!! BECAUSE THAT IS WHAT I AM FEELING!!!
Yang and Big Mac.....meh, I'd ship it.
6755593 Well, that's a crack-ship if I've ever seen one.
You know, it wasn't until your little cheat sheet in the prologue that I noticed how hard RWBY cribs from HunterĂ—Hunter.
This is neat even though we don't know what's up with the other members just yet. I think the tactic of spending a few chapters at a time on one character will ultimately work out for the best from a readability standpoint, but it makes the waiting kind of vexing.
Conversely, I kind of don't even care about what JNPR is doing. This just isn't their story, and the prospect of spending a solid chunk of time on them when there are four fascinating "first contact" stories to tell just doesn't sit well with me. Were I in your position and dead set on covering them, I think I might try sprinkling it in bits and pieces at a time at the end of every other chapter or something, and only hit key points of that whole thing whilst leaving most of it up to imagination.
6758989 That is a good point...
Honestly, the JNPR stuff isn't required to be shown, but I do have stuff planned that will ultimately need them in the story. Your idea of having them at the end of a chapter could work...
I'll think on it. Thanks for the comment!
6761690 Indeed!
Though you must remember, Yang is currently suffering from depression over the events leading to her arrival in Equestria. So she may not be the same Yang we know and love.
good chapter, can't wait for the next... whenever it comes
Is anybody else seeing the cover art weirdly? It seems to fuck up around Blake and Yang.
Excellent work! Personally, I wouldn't mind seeing a JNPR chapter. Keep this up! I look forward to more of this!
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Eeyup, it's German.