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No, I meant work.
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If it was going backwards, then Blake would have been second. RWBY -> YBWR.
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Two outta four so far.
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That would not be ideal.
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I've honestly never heard about that legend. Interesting!
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Doctor Oobleck is very picky about how he's addressed. He insists on being called Doctor rather than Professor, even though there's not much of a difference for someone in his position.
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Captain Butch Flowers from Rooster Teeth's Red Vs. Blue is the basis for my character, Captain Flowers. I can't say much else without spoiling RvB.
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... I've never heard it said like that.
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Could be. We'll just have to wait and see!
Nice to see the third arc coming so soon after the second final.
So Blake landed in the Everfree forest. Well at least, as mention, her guerrilla life among the White Fang would be very handy in this environment.
I really appreciate the little details that causing her PTSD. This was something I expected for her to happen and you didn't stuck to the fire only.
Also props to your friend Soren for his work on this chapter.
Mistakes found :
its
Its
and it’s now emerging friendsits
You know, she's in for a surprise as soon as she notices the moon, which should be easily seen...
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Blake's in the Everfree, which in this story has thick coverage of leaves and branches. Blake can't see the moon from her position right now.
I like how different this arc starts out. Blake being all alone again is kinda like where she starts the show character-wise.
what Blake guessed was it’s next meal
It’s eyes glowed a sickly green color
and it’s now emerging friends
Blake instead to take a quieter approach
1. Its.
2. Its.
3. It's.
4. Blake instead opted to take a quiter approach.
This looks good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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No, I think this was right the first time.
9326930 ? That, doesn't sound quite right. It's like saying "I instead to be corrected."
I honestly can't have it sound right even when saying it aloud. Anyone else got a second opinion?
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Oh, wait. I kinda derped. I thought you were correcting “quieter” to “quiter.”
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Ahh, no problem.