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Yay
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I think you mean .
Ooof. That claw's gotta hurt. At least Fluttershy is here to help. Looking forward to next chapter, and Flutters' reaction to Blake.
Not bad. I bet Fluttershy was a bit scared by the battle but hopefully she will be able to help Blake out and they can strike up a good relationship.
Oh my... I hope the Timberwolf doesn't regenerate. Fluttershy can talk down dragons and manticores, but I don't think she can do anything with something as seemingly unfeeling as one of those.
On closer inspection, it turns out that I completely forgot that Blake fought multiple Timberwolves last chapter, and thus shouldn't have had much trouble in this chapter.
Uh. Oops.
Oh well. Not much I can do to fix it.
Good to see it's still going.
9506910
being tired, insufficient food/something being in it, because she had a fight beforehand; there can be a number of factors that could lead to that trouble. it's not that big a problem, I'm sure.
Thank goodness Fluttershy was nearby.
Blake has quite the survival skill. Her talent to built a mud house remind me of those kind of videos.
Excellent!
9517807
It's just that the first part seems weird to me. It's the civilians part. Why not just say people?
9518132
"people who have sworn their lives to protecting the
civilianspeople of the four kingdoms"using people twice in one sentence, so close together, doesn't work.
9518642
Fine, have it your way.
9506910
It was honestly fine until the end bit with the “never heard of such a grimm”