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I think those renegade Gaurd are going to regret messing with Weiss. Now that Flowers is helping protect her she is going to be quite safe.
Put me down for two of the perpetrators who set it up to have the names Locust and Felix.
This was a fantastic chapter. Luna and Celestia own up to their mistakes, and Weiss makes a solid connection. Not a friend just yet, but a connection. Weiss also seems to heading towards successfully summoning Grimm through her Glyphs a lot faster than the show, which is neat. Weiss deserves that bit of happiness.
If that Flowers pony is anything like the Flowers in RvB, then something bad is going to happened. I can feel it. Nice to see this back, by the way.
Worth the wait.
Luna and Weiss bonding was magnificent and you place the song at the right moment.
I can't wait to see Flowers get found out. When is Yang going to meet up with Weiss? Also when are Ruby and Blake going to make it in?
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Flowers is smart, and dangerous. Something big would have to happen for him to be found out >:)
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Thank you! The Luna/Weiss scene was one that I've been dying to write for a long time.
Knowing when to place the songs can be difficult. "Mirror, Mirror" being Weiss' theme song made it perfect to use to introduce the second arc, but Yang got to use "I Burn" in the climactic battle against the manticores. I couldn't not pass up the chance to use another song in the arc. I'm lucky that both "Mirror Mirror" songs can relate to both Weiss and Luna!
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Indeed. I wouldn't say that this Flowers is the same as the RvB Flowers, but they both have one huge similarity that will become obvious soon.
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Weiss gained her summoning powers in a time of great stress in Volume 4, as she is being held captive by her own father. With Weiss being unable to leave the castle, and all the other stuff plaguing her right now, it seemed a perfect time to move that particular development up in her timeline. Not a lot of development was given to Weiss between the middle of Volume 2 and the middle of Volume 4. So I think it makes sense she would gain her summoning a bit faster, here.
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Flowers may be protecting her, but he is no friend. Look back on his scene with the Princesses, and the way he needlessly killed the surviving guard.
Also, damn, Locus and Felix. I kinda regret not putting that in! But really, if there are counterparts to them in Equestria, I think they'd put up a bit more of a fight.
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Well they could still make an appearance and a good way for Flowers to have some “fun”.
Well just becuase they have vastly different personalities doesn't mean they couldn't form a friendship. Look at Wolverine and Spider-Man, they may not like each other that much but they do have each others backs when they team up together.
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Maybe Yang showing up would work?
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Could be. You'll just have to wait and find out!
It is nice to see this story back up and running again. Then again it is my fault for losing track. Wgere in the MLP FiM show timeline does this story take place exactly? I mean you had Prince Rutherford apear here so it must be around Season 5 or after it.
Will anything from the current canon of MLP post Season 5 apear in this fic? I ask mostly bevause I trying to guess where Ruby and Blake could potentially end that would suit them and yet have them still be at odds like the other two were.
It be interesting if Ruby apeared in Griffonstone amd has to contend with those Grouches, annoying Gilda,( who is slowly trying yo change the town for the better), weirding out Greta, and TOTALLY befriending Gabtielle aka Gabby.
Though the rest if griffions' cynical amd greedy natures is perfect counter to Ruby's optimistic attitude and heroic ideals. Almost near Roman Torchwick levels self preservation survial outlook he presented from Volume 3.
Though if did not end up there the other option was that she would end being found by Daring Do. Who would be curious if her yet annoyed of her overly peppy and idol like worship of heroism. Making Ruby realize how fantady and reality of being hero differ greatky than she thought.
Another interesting option is to have appear in Starlight's village Our Town. If in before the Mane Six get there she would be in a stressful and mentalky challenging afair with these Equalist ideals and wanting free them from her grip. Heck she even help show Starlight not just how wrong she is but more importantly WHY. Perhaos even reforming her eariker than in canon.
If after wards she coukd relate to a town full of ponies who lives and ideals were broken by Syarlight's twisted delusions and recovering from ferling so lost. Feeling have to find themselves after being been through awful ordeal jusy Ruby was.
As for Blake, I was thinking of her of either turning up in Kludge Town, ( staying with Capper and drawing paraells to Vacouo and their accepting of other races, but their way of life being shady), Albyssia, (because cats) (though is seems a bit too far), or even Mount Aeris in that they are a revovering nation that suffered before and are learning to trust foreigners again yet some are still haboring mistrust yet again simlar to Menagerie for Blake.
There she slowly befriend Princess Skystar who woukd remind her if Ruby, but feels desoerate for change and companionship.
However Queen Novo islolationsit and distrusting attitude would remind her if Faunus's attitudes regarding authority's restricting control and similarities to early White Fang ideals.
Though a better possible counter proposal would the new Changeling Kingdom. Given they are also a race that were considerdd bad and are trying change from their past selves.
Thorax attempts to reform reminding if her father'sattempts and the rouge changelings bring that if the White Fangs sipporters that have yet not sided yet, but still cause stagnation. Again like Menagerie.
Sorry for the length I just had some guesses or suggestions on where things could go from here for thise two. Majority depends on where this fic takes exactly. Geel free to ignore this. Regardless, I look forward to your next chapter.
... I don’t know how to feel. Im starting to get bored. Which is bad, but I can’t really say it’s this arcs fault. I think that since we know Flowers gets out fine cause of “I Burn” it leaves a dread in the air, but also lack of investment. Cause i know he doesn’t get caught and everything is dandy. A chunk of the mystery magic is gone.