Page generated in 0.02 seconds
Total duration
868 users online
1,131,367 hits today, 2,107,360 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
o/
I sense captain Flowers isn't exactly who we think. After all, Weiss just made a lot of noise and he was supposedly just outside....
That RvB reference was nice.
Nice work!
Agent Florida?! Does he use an axe?
Oh My God I took an announcement on April 1st seriously and actually thought the story was canceled... I feel so stupid right now. Well at least that means this story isn't dead
Discord Is making a scary amount of sense here
I agree with Discord in that ponies scare too easily and that they're no different from the Flower Trio when it comes to anything that isn't a pony.
KO awesome chapter, Weiss seem to be getting along with others like Discord though it will still take a while for her to fully adjust the new world she's in.
Nice to see you and this story back.
I think you did a good job writing Discord here with his goofy antics and his awareness of the multiverse when talking to Weiss.
I would say it's Celestia that is more or less out of character, having gone overboard in my opinion to organise a meeting with the other species about one alien as far as they know without having full grasp of the situation. Also shouldn't there be other tribe like the dragons, the Buffaloes or the Saddle Arabians be present if it's considered a world crisis?
Nonetheless it's still a good chapter. Keep going at it and as always we will wait patiently till next chapter.
her
YAY, new chapter just as I caught up!
media.8ch.net/file_store/thumb/77b886ee1e229863c4bc1eabddf28e432260f68de322eec69e54b49f952ec6da.png
I had forgotten about this story. Glad to see it's not dead.
I am a bit confused as to how nobody else has seen or heard of the other humans yet, because. Well. Yang lived with Applejack for a few days, right? There's no way that the other Mane 6 didn't hear about it.
8360496
It's not dead until I am.
8360462
Hoorah!
8360357
Corrected.
And honestly, I knew that meeting scene would be crap - I just needed to show off how paranoid Celestia is in this story. I will attest to the fact that Celestia is OOC, but there's a reason. One, I'm not very good at writing her. And two, well, there's an alien. An alien that could kill a hundred ponies and not be fazed. I'd be a little paranoid in that situation.
8360353
I wouldn't say she's "getting along" with Discord. But he's not even the worst of her problems.
8360331
Mob mentality is a bitch.
8360309
I even italicized letters that read "april fools"! Well, hope you liked the surprise!
8360284
I wouldn't rule it out.
8360277
Thank you!
8360273
Expect to see more of it. Flowers first appeared in the I Burn epilogue and will be a major factor in the story.
8360262
Nah, look at how happy Flowers is to have the job. He probably thought she was having a party or something. Probably.
8360258
8360667
The first reason is Yang’s chapter is happening concurrently with this one. So Celestia is not aware of what Applejack has discovered.
Is anyone taking bets on how long Captain Butch Flowers/Agent Florida is going to last? Or if the rest of Project Freelancer will be showing up?
8360667
This Arc takes place before Yang wakes up on the Apple farm. And wherever the others ended up, there's a reason they haven't been outed.
8360679
I thought that name sounded familiar! Sadly, I don't really remember anything about Agent Florida. Texas, Maine, Washington, York, and the Dakota siblings (twins?)I remember, but it's been years since I watched Red vs. Blue.
8360670 That sounds about right. I've also read enough fanfics to know that ponies are more xenophobic than they let on, no thanks to Twilight and Shining Armor's grudge against the changeling race for what one changeling did, Zecora's debut episode, Spike's existence and the collective ignorance of everything that isn't related to ponies, willing or not. Also, they're afraid of the black form that changelings have been born with, so Thorax's new form is pleasing towards equine eyes but hurts the eyes.
8360849
All you need to know is Washington and Carolina are alive and with the Reds and the Blues, Tex was an AI the entire time, Church is also an AI, and every other Frelancer is dead. That about covers it.
8360894
I think the last thing I watched was Carolina taking Church/Alpha with her to find the director of the Freelance Project or something, and Wash took Church's place on the Blue team ages ago
8360924
then you probably know that the Director was named Leonard Church. The big reveal is that he is Carolina’s father with “Tex” being her mother. After this season it has been about hunting down those that have stolen Project Freelancer tech and are using it for their own ends not the betterment of the galaxy. Heck the best hands for anything Freelancer are the Reds and the Blues hands, and that is saying something.
8360943
Did not know or remember that, actually. Again, been years since I watched RvB
As soon as Luna spoke his name, I thought "he wouldn't..."
Then Captain Butch Flowers had to open his mouth. Well, let's hope Weiss gets her hands on some Aspirin, and that it has the same effect on pony Florida.
8360670
I fully understand being less comfortable writing a character you don't know very well, since at the beginning of your story she still wasn't flesh out that much.
Your second reason brings out the problem: You put yourself in her place. You might be terrified of an alien crash landing to Earth, but here we're talking about Celestia. She is considered an immortal goddess, though personally I doubt she is, but she's nonetheless a powerful being capable of moving the sun and the headmaster teacher of a school of magical prodigy. Along her side there is her sister who's almost as, some would say even more, powerful as her, Cadance with her husband who was the Captain of the royal guard and the most gifted in shield defence and Twilight, who I suppose is an Alicorn since Prince Rutherford is present, who is the embodiment of magic. In addition you can count Discord, while unpredictable and wouldn't mind the chaos, he won't stand the ponies be hurt to a certain degree, because in his mind dead ponies aren't fun.
This is a serious cast of power house against, for now in the knowledge of the ponies, one alien. You can still argue that their is the threat of the unknown, but unless the sight of a giant space ship looming over their heads their is little to panic now. Though I think I wouldn't pass Celestia wanting to be cautious and prepare for the worse in any case.
By the way, would Twilight be knowledgeable about what are the new arrivals? Equestria Girls being now confirm canon with the main show would say yes, but I realise you haven't distinctly indicate where in the timeline the story flows. Though Discord being reform and the presence of Prince Rutherford would tell we are at least during season five.
8361099
You're correct in that I am putting myself in Celestia's shoes, though I do this for every character. It just comes off more with Celestia, I feel, because.. well, to be honest, she really doesn't have a lot of character in the show.
I can assure you that Celestia will develop more as the arc goes on, and more of the current situation is revealed.
You may not have liked it, but I think it works well. Weiss, for all her bluster, never struck me as the "Ice Queen" she's made fun of for being. There's a lot of dere under that tsun, so it's really cute how she thinks of her team first when no one is looking. I hope she finds out soon that they're around.
And there's Discord, being helpful. What a swell guy!
Honestly. I really liked this chapter. Shes pissed at herself for being so childish and yet, the child in the group would have IMMEDIATELY opened that door and had so much fun with the ponies. Yang would just roll with it, and Blake wouldnt know whether to be happy or sad. Since shes free from humans but now shes alone.
I quite like this story and am BEYOND FUCKING EXCITED that you wrote another chapter. I about shat bricks when I saw it and dropped everything. XD
Keep up the good work! I love this story. And don't beat yourself up over your writing. If your audience loves it, then you must be doing something right. ;)
CHEERS
So I had my suspicions.
Basically all the places Ruby could have ended up fall into one of two categories. Either somewhere where she was spazzing over the cute locals (who were decidedly unhappy about this) or she was going to wind up in one of the most dangerous parts of the world and have to fight her way out. I just wasn't sure which.
And then Flowers happened.
So I'm calling it right now; he's a changeling, Ruby's at the hive, and Chrissy's in for a very rough time.
8360262
Captain Flowers is gonna overdose.
👀
Suspicion rises.