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Damn... you really hit on the old heartstrings!
Weiss and Luna? AWESOME!!! also
RED VS BLUE REF! *Hugs*
Looking forward to the next arc.
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As long as he dodges Flowers's fate we should be good.
Also totally agree with you Luna and Weiss are a great pairing. Makes me wonder who Blake will be paired with?
What's up with that Flowers guy? Is there a reason he is acting so suspicious?
KO awesome chapter, Yang got off the hook and can safely say she's going to be just fine. Hope Weiss is doing well wherever she ended up.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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So we have Flowers/Florida. Now, what of the other 49?
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He's probably looking to recruit a bunch of less-than-average IQ people for a pointless war that is actually a simulation to aid in the training of elite soldiers. Or something like that. :^)
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Maybe Fluttershy? *ahem*Bumblebee*ahem*
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We can guess that the other 46 are all doomed. With the remaining three dealing with a bunch of rejects who somehow are able to become a fearsome force.
7552833 I'm assuming that's a reference to Red Vs Blue which everyone is saying this guy is from, I wouldn't know. You know who he does remind me of though, Roman Torchwick, god I hope it's nothing to do with him.
I wonder if this Flowers shares the same weakness as the other. Also, I am curious about his full name, simply because what would pair well with Flowers in a pony naming sense.
Yang was lead back to
1. Led.
Nice closure for Yang and shame on me I didn't tilt on Captain Flowers name.
Pairing Weiss and Luna interesting. The fact that her full name means snow white might remind Luna about her old friend Snowdrop.
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I saw Captain Flowers and the way he spoke in the chapter, and I had to wonder if that was the REAL Captain Butch Flowers
7552835 I could see Blake winding up with Fluttershy. Another possibility, though, is Twlight. Because reading.
*eager awaiting of the next chapter... INTENSIFIES*
7552777 Hmm... That would be tricky... Who would we know that would be like an outcast? Hmm... Thorax maybe? Nah, too soon
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Trixie maybe? Or possibly Glenda?
Oh my God, he's going to die!
I hereby dub the Luna/Weiss ship White Moon.
7552973 That depends. Is this the Trixie from season 3 after Alicorn Amulet or season 6 after Starlight is redeemed?
Do I already know what you have planned for Mirror Mirror?!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Probably not but who cares, WINTER IS COMING
7553062 Hmm... White Moon...
Luna is literally a princess and Weiss has been called a princess several times. Is there a way to play off of that?
7553215 Well it was this or Frozen Moon but that's too cliched, Winter's Moon would just indicate Weiss's older sister, Snowy Moon might work.
7553210 Not so much Winter, but yeah!
7553180 This is after Crusaders of the Lost Mark, so Starlight is still evil but Trixie has been redeemed.
7553113 Luna needs a big ol' hug.
7553062 I ship it! Time to add the Romance tag.
7553005 Quick, find the Asprin! Oh, wait....
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7552951 Good guesses, you two!
7552944 *Writing Intensifies*
7552889 Am I the only one who was never a fan of Snowdrop? Seemed too "You shall CRY!" for me.
7552878 Fixed!
7552868 Probably still Butch. There's not enough room for two Flowers' in the multiverse.
7552864 I suppose Flowers is basically RvB's version of Torchwick. But yeah, Captain Flowers is directly based on the Red Vs. Blue character.
7552859 Dude, don't give away the plot of the story!
7552835 Bumblebee is so overrated. Weiss/Jaune FTW!
7552833 Dude, don't give away the plot of the story!!
7552827 Dead.
7552804 I hope Weiss is fine, too!
7552803 You'll have to stick around and find out!
7552777 I know where Blake is, but you don't~
7552768 Me too.
7552747 Roses are Red, and Violets are Blue, one day we'll cruise down Blood Gulch Avenue...
7552716 I try.
7550374 Lookkit you, you were right!
Damn, that's a lot of words.
7553336 7552777 I suppose I should actually get back to working on Blake's arc then, huh? Qrow, you still got the page I sent you or do you need me to send it to you again?
7553398 Still got it.
7553442 Mmk, I'm working on it now if you wanna pop by and say hi.
7553336 Cue obligatory Musical reference:
7553336 Fairy snuff.
I can't wait to see Weiss in this, you got Yang well, able to stand alone but also by effect takes the burdens all for herself, and rarely lets it go. So yes you're very interesting.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
Gentle breeze guide your path, a warm smile welcome your return.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Nice Captain Flowers reference! Seen Season 14 of Red vs Blue yet?
Also, Hype for the next chapter!!!!
Good job, I did expected Blake next but this is nice. Though my only complaint it was too long if there is a bigger story for the girls after all the introductions. You may not get to them in time if it takes eight chapters for each character.
7554351 The arcs aren't introductions. They are their own stories, just focusing on different RWBY members. There is a greater plot in mind, but I'm working closely with my editor Soren Mercer to get arcs Three and Four out on a much faster timeframe than One was and Two will.
7554331 I have! Flowers is one creepy bastard.
Wow... i never realise the connection of loneliness between luna and weiss....
I blame weiss coming off as a combination of Seto Kiaba and Lucy from Fairy Tail... or Zuko from Avatar series...
This whole Arc has been pretty great, and this epilogue wrapped it up quite nicely. At first I was kinda sad to hear the announcement that Blake's arc would be delayed, but now I am very exited to see what you will do with Weiss. If the end of this epilogue is any indication Luna is going to be one of the major players of this arc, and it will be great to see what goes on with that.
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Yeah! You would not have guessed unless you saw Season 14!
I knew he was familiar! I even imagined him with his exact voice!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
Hope you pull an "accidental" Church on him.
On that thought, is this going to be Red vs Blue level of complexity?
7559230 Ha, no. Though things certainly won't remain simple.
7559300 Glad to hear that.![:coolphoto:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/coolphoto.png)
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A few things to ask you:
1) How did you understand what I meant about complexity?!
2) Do they have aspirin in Equestria, and will it kill that weird Flower?
3) Will RWBY have to kill someone or something like the Director?
7559350 1. Because I'm a big fan of RvB. I've spent meany hours going insane over trying to get the canon into a comprehensible timeline.
2. They probably do have Asprin, but I doubt Flowers will fall just yet. He's got a lot to do in this story.
3. I'm not telling~
And Flowers is just pleased as punch to be in this story
Sorry bro. The Ponies are WAY too dickish and corrupt. They all treat Yang like a criminal and don't give a shit about the law. Downvoted.
7562119 While I am saddened that you don't share Yang's opinion, that was entirely my point.
Yang didn't kill the poachers because she emphasizes with them - or at least their comradeship with each other. She saw her sister die and didn't want to bring that type of pain on others.
At least, that's what she tells herself. The question is: would Yang have killed them all if Apple Bloom wasn't there? Who knows.
7562253 It would have been the best response. The leader was going to MURDER an innocent filly and none of those monstrous, morally bankrupt, criminal scum were going to do anything to stop it. Tunny and Rainy SEEMED nice, but they were just as guilty as their boss. They were going to let him go and murder a child. That action alone dubbed them as monsters.
I was mainly refering to the other Ponies being dicks. Applejack only cared about her sister while the fucking guards tied up the alien that rescued her sister and almost died doing it. Twilight just fucking stood there with her figurative thumb up her ass watching all this happen and did nothing. Hell, they probably could have fucking executed her on the spot and she wouldn't have done shit. Then that one ass-hat goes and just fucking disregards the law and basically says, 'Huh, sucks to be you with no rights. Oh well, I'm sure as hell not going to do shit about it, despite the fact that you just got the living shit beat out of you saving a child.'
I'll admit that he was understanding about why she did what she did, but his utter disregard for everything else just pissed me the hell off. And, of course, Twilight STILL did absolutely nothing. Not. A. God. Damn. Thing.
7562476 All very valid points.
The poachers were all criminals, yes. Culus especially. But Yang, despite being absolutely justified in wanting to kill them, would have done so in front of Apple Bloom.
Also, is Twilight doing nothing? Sure we don't see it, but I highly doubt she's doing nothing.
7562546 Well she had a perfect opportunity to do something, and did not do anything. As readers, we can only see what is written. I am venting because the blond Human/TANK we all know and love is getting shafted by everyone and everything around her. Her treatment by most Ponies thus far has been nothing short of abysmal. I will keep reading, but the Downvote stays unless/until the Ponies start acting like Ponies and not a bunch of xenophobic bigots.
I do hope Weiss, Ruby, and Blake are having a better time. I could see Weiss getting along with Rarity very well... unless one of them goes full-on whiny wench on the other.
7562741 Well, I hope I can turn your opinion around with the next arc!
7564891 I do as well.![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)