Celestia is a young little filly whose parents died horribly, who works as a gravedigger, who thinks she's an adult and who believes she might be able to raise the sun if she tries hard enough.
This madmare is also responsible for the life and well-being of her little sister.
This can only end well, right?
(A parody of the brilliant short story "To Try For the Sun" by Rune Soldier Dan)
... This story is as subtle as a sledgehammer....
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strangely enough I liked it. Was excellent the first 1/4 and still held up after that....not sure if that makes sense...
I laughed.
6625658 *gasp* It's you! Can you sign an autograph?
But seriously speaking, I really enjoyed your story. You juxtaposed adulthood and childhood really well and showed the heavy burden of the first and the naive but hopeful optimism of the latter. The writing was solid and fit the overall mood. You deserve every like you get.
Write a sequel or I'll parody your other stories. ;)
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Thanks.
What did I just read?
*edit* Wait, how is Rumble in this??
6626921 He isn't. I just like having him there at the bottom of the description staring at Celestia and Luna in confusion.
Good gods above, what the hell did I just read?
IVE NEVER READ ANYTHING FUNNIER
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Erm... Okay...
The real masterpiece here is the coverart. Do you do commisions?
6630336 Sure, I do them all the time and get around 4000 € a month.
Do you want to know my secret? I use Paint.
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I laughed again.
Brilliant!