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dramatic_spoon


Comments ( 21 )

I have no idea what I'm doing any more.

6620061 rainturner ? No that's rubbish hmmmmmm what's a name for this ?

6621743 not bad

You know this is a clop that doesn't piss me off

So good job for being able to do that

This is the first fic to ever feature this ship.....i hate thi ship now

*fires cannon and sinks ship*

TWIDASH FOREVER BITCHES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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You might not want to look at the rest of my stories then...

Time Turner would be great at Cinemare Sins. *Ding*

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Eh.
I still haven't watched their review for Fury Road.

That was both awesome and hilarious. First we see how a lot of actual first times happen between a young couple, then we have Dash's parents show up. What's worse then parents wanting to kill you for sleeping with their daughter? Parents who don't really care all that much and so don't have much hesitation discussing it out in the open over a meal.

Man I really like this ship

This chapter is better than the first, that's for sure, but damn does this lack feeling.
And feelings, too! I thought these two were just like classmates that could barely stand each other, and then I remembered they were a couple. Why do we spend so much time in the kitchen? Why Time Turner? Why are the parents back so soon? Why does almost every single sentence have an ellipsis in it?! This kinda felt like it was written as a chore.

But there are good aspects as well. This is full of that awkward teenage foreplay and sex we all love, and this

Dash’s eyes shot open as something moist and war stroked her nipple

had me dying :rainbowlaugh:

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Eh, First time writing clop, so I figured it would be awkward.

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tbh it's not that bad for your first time, not sure why it's getting the downvotes though.

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The ship involved, the fact it's awkward teenage first time sex instead of gratuitous porn-style, my writing style...

Really there's any number of reasons.

6625818 You say eh a lot... Are you Canadian?

Only Cinemasins is allowed to talk shit about Mad Max. Turner, you are dissapoint.

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I was bitten by a maple syrup-infested Canadian when I was visiting.
I'm from Hawaii.

6629009 Sorry, we do tend to do that whilst we ride our mooses into battle against the godless communist bastard children.

Canada, fuck yeah!

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6630481 And depending on where you live in Texas, you have: Good 'Ol Boy, Valley Girl, Yankee (that's right, all y'all sound alike or similar enough), Creole, Spanglish, and in the center of military city San Antonio we have mutts who combine all those traits. :eeyup:

Also, first thought at this fic:

I liked it. It was short and awkwardly saucy. Awkward for them I mean.

Something/10 would read again.

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