Don't Wanna be Wrong.

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Time Turner and Dash have been going pretty steady, so It's time for him to ask her something important.

...Assuming he doesn't chicken out.

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dramatic_spoon

dramatic_spoon #1 · Apr 19th, 2015 · 2 · ·

Short version.

I took a fiction writing class during the fall of 2014.
My Brony friend took the class several semesters before with another friend, and he basically wrote his MLP fanfiction for the class.

As a result, there was a new rule that said no Fanfiction.
Not that I would have done it anyway.

so I wrote this.
Originally, it stared David Smith, Roxanne and Skids the Dachshund.
...Who were not so subtle stand-ins for Time Turner and Rainbow Dash, as written in "The Ballad of TIme Turner and Rainbow Dash".

It got fairly good reviews from my classmates, who loved it.

I do want to say it seems really stupid to be calling them "Time Turner" and "Rainbow Dash" as humans.
I'd have preferred to leave them as David and Roxanne.

Not so New Brony

Not so New Brony #2 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

Huh, writing fanfiction for an assignment...that's a new one on me though I can guess why the rule was put in place.

Politicalunrest2400

Politicalunrest2400 #3 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

Official Review: "I Don't Wanna Be Wrong"
Link: I Don't Wanna Be Wrong
Description: "N/A"

Human, Rainbow Dash, and Time Turner have something to discuss about ... living arrangements.

7/10 For Writing Style/ Skill: Very good quality writing. There are just a couple of small transition issues that make it a bit jarring when the setting changes, but besides that this story is very good quality. I would suggest adding perhaps a bit of dialog while they are running, or a bit more explanation as to what was happening when Dash first started pulling Turner through the crowed. These type of transition issues are common with short fics like this, its just the nature of the beast.

4/5 For Family Friendliness: With some mild language, I would more then suggest this cute slice of life fic to any adult fan who likes Rainbow Dash, and wants to see her in human form.

Comment: I really liked this story, though I had a bit of a hard time seeing this as a relationship short story, due the language that Dash uses. Basically I had a hard time feeling the love in the relationship, it felt more like they were just good friends. Then again, this is probably what Dash would be like in a relationship so... you more then likely got it spot on.

Medi_tation

Medi_tation #4 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

things go interesting when they two get together~love it !

Regina Wright

Regina Wright #5 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

I enjoyed it.

It gave off a nice feel while I was reading. The story was like a snapshot of their relationship, the ebb and flow that make it work (or not work). I don't want to call this fic cute so how about cozy? The coziness had me wanting more but yet satisfied with what I had, you know.

Azure_Shadow

Azure_Shadow #6 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

This was a very Interresting story, I enjoyed it.

dramatic_spoon

dramatic_spoon #7 · Apr 19th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah, that was a kind of weird class.
We had to be careful what names we used, because one year someone wrote a story about a woman getting kidnapped, raped, and murdered, and the name they chose happened to be the same as someone in the class.

No matter how you look at it, that's awkward.

5881903

just out of curiosity, do you do that for all the fics you read?
because that seems pretty devoted.

Politicalunrest2400

Politicalunrest2400 #8 · Apr 20th, 2015 · · ·

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No, i generally do them for shorts I read. I do it to help the authors get a better understanding of what the reader sees.... and some times it works! haha

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