Just a guy who loves reading and writing stories...
An angeloid destined for Earth is redirected by mistake and ends up in Equestria and is found by none other than Fluttershy after he was injured protecting her. How will this angeloid react to his new home and what is his story? Read on to find out.
The "other" in characters is for Blueblood, Spike, and miscellaneous background ponies.
Thoughts are written inside 'this' notation and speech is noted inside "the usual notation". Have fun reading.
Page generated in 0.066 seconds
Total duration
790 users online
1,302,016 hits today, 2,782,760 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I thought thoughts were written inside this notation.
Assuming you're American; Commonwealth authors tend to use 'this notation.'
Is this a crossover with something? Because the lack of explanation or description of what an "angeloid" is makes it sound like a crossover, but there's no tag.
Also, 6598907 has the right idea; it's better to use italics to denote thoughts. It makes things far less confusing for the reader.
6599078
If you ask me, to me this whole story screams "Edgy!"
6598907
I will write thoughts in 'this' notation of italics inside apostrophes.
6600119
No, drop the apostrophes altogether.
6599078
Also the angeloid idea came from an anime the was admittedly a little edgy... Okay a lot edgy but the idea is a good one more will be explained as the story goes on. Please don't judge this by the first few chapters.
What is that title even...
an angeloid isn't that from heavens lost proporty
7329336
That is where I originally got the idea and name for the race because the protagonist is a cybernetic angel.