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Mcwolly


Hi, I'm Mcwolly and I've been a fan of this show for a few years. My deviantART is Wolly-Dream if you're interested! Besides writing, I also draw, sing, and cosplay.

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Princess Luna was not the sole reason for the initial appearance of Nightmare Moon. It was Celestia who had not shown her sister love and did not care even after numerous cries for help. The moon princess finally decides after raising the moon for the final time to set herself free from this sadness.

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i really like this story great job :twilightsmile:

WHY THE HELL ISNT THIS FEATURED ALREADY?!?!?!?
*sobbs unstoppably* :raritydespair:

Comment posted by NorrisThePony deleted Oct 18th, 2015

I like to see a sequel to this more please:rainbowdetermined2:

Comment posted by Mcwolly deleted Oct 18th, 2015

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I'm really glad that my first story seems to be a success! Thank you!

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Hm, I don't know what there is left to write for this story. I really just wrote it to help me feel better last night without thinking of making it more than just a one shot. Thank you for liking my story so much!! It means a lot to me

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Thank you x' D I can't imagine this story of mine being worthy enough to be featured! It means so much to me that you like it that much!!

6540991 i had a random idea you could try for a sequel if you want and it was Celestia noticing Luna wasn't around and figuring out that maybe it was her doing that drove Luna to be nightmare moon. just an idea :twilightsmile:

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That's a good idea to switch to Celestia's perspective! It would definitely drive the story towards a happier resolution if Celestia chose to solve the problem.

Comment posted by NorrisThePony deleted Oct 18th, 2015

6540993 you're welcome.:scootangel::ajsmug:
i recommend you to keep on writing this story. There might actually be a very good plot.

Luna cried.

Perfect.

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Thank you :raritywink: I knew that subtlety would really hit the emotion home after using so many descriptive words and long paragraphs.

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It's so rare to see this in stories. Keep it up!!

you need to have celesita fall into depression after luna leaves. that would work well

Have you accepted Jesus Christ into your heart. He died for our sins and rose from the dead on the third day so we can go to heaven and be healed whole and healthy! If you ask Him to come He will. You don’t have to go anywhere special to do so. Don’t delay! He loves you more than you could ever know. He already loves you so much now, but if you accept His forgiveness He will wipe away your sins so you can have a relationship with Him. He’s both the Father and loyal friend who will never leave you!✝️

I feel that luna made the right choice. She made her own choice. It is scary, setting out on your own....being your own person.

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