Luna is angry. Angry at her sister, her supposed loving sister. Oh, but she has a plan. A plan that will show her sister her pain. A plan that will make Celestia hurt as Luna did.
A plan for her sister to fear her.
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Dark_Soliloquy
As the light succumbs to the darkness at night, I succumb with it. (Formerly I-am-a-Nightmare. All of my old stories I literally did when I was 12. Please don't judge me)
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Pretty well written. Kind of a new take on the Nightmare Moon transformation/thing. I like it.
Frightening and creepy. Awesome. I really love your stories. This one shot was nice and scary.
Thank you both!
Well that escalated quickly...
Just wow
, I am not a huge fan of lets us say "unhappy endings"To make it sound less dark. But this story was beautifully written. You did not describe the scene in huge paragraphs nor did you have too much dialog. You balanced it out perfectly, for me as a reader I find long descriptions tedious and un-entertaining. You did an excellent job hope for more stories in the future about Luna or Nightmare Moon or a story that at least features one of them. 
Good luck and keep up with that amazing talent
6344663 Thank you SOOOO much!
6354043 You are most certainly welcomed.
P.S I hope this made sense. Good luck
You can has review!