As the light succumbs to the darkness at night, I succumb with it. (Formerly I-am-a-Nightmare. All of my old stories I literally did when I was 12. Please don't judge me)
This story is a sequel to Day and Night
Celestia and Luna have fallen, and soon, Equestria will fall with them unless somepony puts a stop to it. But nopony knows where the Elements are. The Nightmares are invading, spreading darkness along with them.
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741 words? In all?
what?!
It's not done yet and the word count is wrong it has over 1,000
Well I do for my longer stories I am working on but this trilogy is made up of short stories.
I don't see why this got dislikes.
I like an easy read. If I'm devoted, I'll drag my way through a 5,000 word-per-chapter book, but I like the quicker ones better.
I liked this series, it was nice.
Thank you!
Oh, it is so wonderful. But there is a bad jump between two chapters. The last one and the one bfore it.
A millennium's worth of history... Contained in a trilogy about as long as an average chapter. What?
Pretty good, although I do think it could do with a bit more work. The pacing was a little bit off, and the scenes progressed too fast. I also think that this story deserves the AU tag, as Solar Flare appearing in Ponyville is not part of the canon. The characters are not developed very well, and they seem a little too vague to be true. Between the two "Daydream and Nightmare" sisters, there isn't enough information to follow along. I know that there was supposed to be a plot twist somewhere, but I didn't find anything to "twist". I didn't know enough about them to have feelings and emotions to understand the plot twist. I noticed some spacing and punctuation errors. This was a good series, but I can't say it was great.
Celestia's evil form's name is not Solar Flare, it's Daybreaker.