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Dark_Soliloquy


As the light succumbs to the darkness at night, I succumb with it. (Formerly I-am-a-Nightmare. All of my old stories I literally did when I was 12. Please don't judge me)

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They all idolized Celestia, and she could never understand why.

Why would they praise her, why would they shower her with such adoration and glory? Celestia knew she didn't deserve it. But still, she could never bring herself to tell them the truth. She was far too selfish, far too cowardly to ever let them see who she really was--

Just a pony. A pony who made lifetimes of mistakes that still weigh heavy on her shoulders. Would her subjects accept her that way?

Maybe, just maybe, Luna can help the sun princess see the light.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

8730197
Honestly that's exactly what I thought when writing it :rainbowlaugh:

Huk

The first chapter was pretty nice and rather original. However, the second just didn't really strike me - I don’t know why I just… didn’t feel the drama.

All in all, for me the story was so-so (the first chapter much better than the conversation IMHO) - enough for a like.

8732466
I can see where you're coming from. Oh, and thank you for the like!

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