Silver Spoon abandoned Diamond Tiara's drama, and Diamond turned a new leaf soon after. Silver Spoon, however, is less than convinced. Can the two repair their friendship? What will it take? Can the CMC help?
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Suukorak
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The ending was a bit too easy, but well written.
What do you think of this idea?
6538220 Of what idea?
... or were you talking to me in the first place?
6537545
Thanks. What exactly do you mean by "too easy," though?
6538438 As in, it was too abrupt... And a convenient accident reconciled them. Sounds a bit too much like a deus ex machina to me.
Still, like I said... I enjoyed reading it... I just would have concluded the story with the pair settling their differences by talking them out. The way you handled it... Seemed rather too simple and predictable, for me at least.
6538438 It involves the CMC and Tiara and SS in a sleepover.
6538500 Okay. Can you elaborate further?
6538487 I see your point. I'm not going to revise this story right now, but I'll take that into account for the future, and for if I come back to this story at some point. Thanks.
6547651 After the CMC finally got their cutie marks and DT & SS became the best of friends what better way to start over than with a sleepover?
Short and sweet story, And it has a camping trip! That's always good in my book!
I just wish it would show more of this camping trip, expand on it and make it longer until Silver Spoon forgives her. But that's just my camping bias.....
It's also a bit rushed, but not so much that it hurts reading it. The only gripe I have with it is that Applebloom talks about a plan to bring Silver Spoon and Diamond Tiara together again, but then it's never brought up again and Applebloom, Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle do exactly nothing to help their friendship and they instead sort it out by themselves.
Otherwise, good story. But you should take care of it that things that you bring up are also continued and finished.