• Member Since 19th Feb, 2014
  • offline last seen Oct 3rd, 2021

Suukorak


Favorite pony: Sunset Shimmer. Fan of Bionicles/LEGO, Star Trek, Star Wars, Redwall, and others. Math nerd and general abstruse knowledge enthusiast.

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Applejack went on a pie-delivering trip through a combustible swamp and the territory of a ferocious chimera. But Big Mac has worse in store. He's made this delivery a few times before, but today the forest reeks of danger... and hunger.

Don't judge me too harshly from this – with the exception of one paragraph, I wrote the whole thing in about three hours!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 11 )

Great story loved reading it

4080918 Thanks! Glad you liked it.

I have yet to read it. :derpytongue2:

TRANSLATION: I've been recently busy, thanks to school and homework and computer problems and sh:yay:t. But when I have the chance, I'll read your story. Because your description is good enough for me, have my fav and like anyway. :ajsmug:

4202432 Thanks for the vote of confidence! Hopefully you'll still like it after you read.

4214639
No problem. :twilightsmile:
Hell I'll read it RIGHT NOW!!! :pinkiehappy:

Finally read it. Some errors but a pretty good story. :twilightsmile:

4214671 Errors? Please enlighten me.
Otherwise, glad you liked it! The topic here is pretty close to the kind of stuff I wrote when I was 12 or so. My new story, once it gets approved, is a better representative of my writing now.

4215932
I can't help but feel that you're supposed to italicize the thoughts or something like that.

4215936 Oh, yeah! I just remembered that it doesn't carry the formatting over from my text editor. I'll get on that pronto.

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