Applejack went on a pie-delivering trip through a combustible swamp and the territory of a ferocious chimera. But Big Mac has worse in store. He's made this delivery a few times before, but today the forest reeks of danger... and hunger.
Don't judge me too harshly from this – with the exception of one paragraph, I wrote the whole thing in about three hours!
Great story loved reading it
4080918 Thanks! Glad you liked it.
Awesome!!!"
I have yet to read it.
TRANSLATION: I've been recently busy, thanks to school and homework and computer problems and sht. But when I have the chance, I'll read your story. Because your description is good enough for me, have my fav and like anyway.
4202432 Thanks for the vote of confidence! Hopefully you'll still like it after you read.
4214639
No problem.
Hell I'll read it RIGHT NOW!!!
Finally read it. Some errors but a pretty good story.
4214671 Errors? Please enlighten me.
Otherwise, glad you liked it! The topic here is pretty close to the kind of stuff I wrote when I was 12 or so. My new story, once it gets approved, is a better representative of my writing now.
4215932
I can't help but feel that you're supposed to italicize the thoughts or something like that.
4215936 Oh, yeah! I just remembered that it doesn't carry the formatting over from my text editor. I'll get on that pronto.
4215958
Sweet.