Several conflicts are coming to a head. Visorak find a portal to Equestria in an abandoned castle just as Queen Chrysalis begins a new campaign. King Sombra, sensing the chaos, joins in. What will become of Princess Celestia's idyllic little empire, now besieged on every side?
This is a Bionicle - MLP crossover. It will be difficult to understand or enjoy it without some acquaintance with Bionicle lore. I would encourage everyone to take a look at Bionicle in its entirety, but for quick reference, here's The Bionicle Wiki.
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CANT wait for more
I enjoy how you portray the visorak and show their personalities and diolouge.
4984547 Well, I'll try to update as often as I can. I'm in college, though, so no promises.
4984894 Yes, I thought this would be a chance to explore Visorak culture some more. I put in some parallels to the Skrall with the name-earning and stuff.
Excellent writing with the Visorak.
4994624 Thanks!
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23 weeks later
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...Yeah.
Like I said, no promises.
But hey! We've been waiting for Season 5 for longer.
And for BIONICLE's return even longer than that!
All that aside, my apologies for falling so silent. I'll try to write some more.
But no promises.
5646438 yeah... I don't watch the show anymore
And you can blame a certain purple alicorn for that
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You know... that's a shame. I don't know if you watched Season 4, but it had some amazing episodes (in my opinion). Season 5 is looking pretty amazing as well. And to stop watching because of a pair of wings...
I don't understand, I guess. But Twilight seems to me less changed than you might fear. I suppose I can't order you to do anything, but I will encourage you to give Twi a chance. Honestly? It's not so bad.
5648523 it's not personality
It's that I don't like her being a princess in genreal
That giant eye sore of a castle did not help