A little over a thousand years ago Greymane had gone off in search of a group his predecessors had often taken notice of, during their time they stated that though the group known as The Order of Balance was one that should be watched carefully. Though they had shown promise of being potentially great allies they also stood the chance of corruption. The group had first been spotted by the 45th Greymane and had been under careful watch since.
Feeling that the past five generations of Greymanes had not reported this group going beyond their normal questionable motives. The current Greymane felt that it would be best to engage them and see their strengths and faults, all with the highest of hopes he would have allies he could turn to in the darkest of times. As Greymane and Sabien meet for the first time causing a seemingly endless downward spiral, for both Greymane and The Order of Balance.
Note: This is a side story to Memoirs of a Thief that helps to explain a set of events that are left out of the initial story.
This story does not feel complete to me. It may be just me, but you practically told us at the end he starts chasing after every artifact.
That is very interesting, but it does not truly end the story. I assume this is supposed to be the origin of an OC of yours or something, but it could of course be a character out of a newer episode of MLP, even though it does not seem like one that would be canon.
This is interesting, but feels incomplete. It is not bad, that it is not.
6546333 Well that's because you are correct, this is just a look into the back story of a second OC of mine, this was done as part of a writing challenge that was set up in the Rate My OC group by JumpingSpookyFrogs if you wish to join in on the fun click here. If you wish to know more then you can read my other story Memoirs of a Thief, or if you would like the summed up version then shoot me a private message.
Good fic, This reminds me of Thief.
6615165 Thank you, feel free to read any of my other stories if you like.
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7097634 Thanks for the heads up, I'll check it out now.