The Forbidden Realm

by Flutterbat276

The Darkness: Part 2 (Fluttershy & Twilight)

Twilight watched the scene over Fluttershy, gathering information on the world and any possible way of contacting her.

"Spike...you gotta see this!" Twilight said, beckoning her dragon assistant to come towards her.

"What is it?" Spike asked, curiously.

"Take a look," Twilight said, pointing to the door of the alternate castle, allowing him to see himself.

"Oh sweet Celestia! I look horrible!!" Spike shrieked, seeing himself with gray smoke funneling through his mouth and his teeth a sickly yellow.

"Well, look at our friends! They're drunk, Pinkie is knocked out, Fluttershy is...I don't know what. Rainbow Dash is a part of a gang! And Celestia...oh my..." Twilight said. Spike, curious as to what was happening, looked over Twilight's shoulder into the "pot pool window" that Twilight made to monitor her dear friend. What he saw was beyond disturbing. Celestia, her mane a dark pink and black, was wearing a horrendous outfit that looked like a one piece bathing suit from the human world, only thinner and made for a pony. She had a whip and was forcing ponies to do certain tasks, including carry her around on a contraption much like Trixie's. Her make up was very dark pinks and black, her lips tainted deep magenta. Luna was no better, however she didn't wear the atrocious get up her sister was. She had on knee high blood red shoes that had a black Shadow Bolts symbol on it, much like Dasher. Her mane was scraggly and black and navy. She had some stallions in short dresses fan her for reasons unknown.

"Dear Celestia they look horrible!" Spike screamed yet again, cowering in a corner.

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Fluttershy trotted through the hallway towards the drunken laughter and opened the door they appeared to emanate from. What she saw was Tartarus on Equestria! Pinkie pie lay in the far right corner passed out and Applejack could barely stay on her hooves. Twilight and Rarity, at this point, were not far behind. Rarity, having noticed the pegasus that walked in, smiled.

"Deary, come here! You have got to try this!" Rarity said, holding out a cup full of a clear liquid.

"W-what is it?" Fluttershy asked.

"Does it matter? Just drink the d**m drink!"

"Eep!" Fluttershy squeaked before taking the cup into her hooves. She slowly sipped it and instantly gagged. She had an extremely low tolerance to alcohol and this was certainly no exception! It was vodka, which Fluttershy despised!

"I...wanna go home!" Fluttershy thought.

"Fluttershy, join my team! I need another pony over here!" Twilight begged, tossing her beer about in her drunken state.

"I...I can't! I just wanted t-t-to v-visit for a moment! I gotta get home!" Fluttershy yelled as she dashed for the castle door. Spike was, of course, high on massive amount of crack he ingested. He was drinking a mixed cocktail when Fluttershy ran by.

"Awww...leaving the party already?" Spike said.

Author's Note:

Short but I think it gets the job done. Enjoy it! More coming soon!

Comments

[Osiris Grandeur]

No offense meant, but I've seen parallel universe fics done better. This is moving far to quickly.
Have you read On a Cross and Arrow? I'll link it here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow
I personally think it's done better here, even if it's not an evil universe. You should have introduced their parallel selves one at a time. Then see where it goes from there.
I hope this helps :)

[Flutterbat276]

6495813 actually I've seen a sort of variation of On A Cross And Arrow called Encounters of the 63rd kind. I have a plan for this which is, after she has already seen them, she will run into them again one by one, eventually leading to an overall chaotic intervention XD

Though thanks for the link. I've wanted to read that for a while

[Meadow Feather]

Interesting, keep it up

[Flutterbat276]

6620041 like I said, I'm not one to swear at ALL! Any curse word, no matter how minor it is, I censor it! Even h**l (you know what that is). Even though half the population at my school does swear like an enraged Irish sailor, I don't. I just prefer to censor out any bad word no matter what it is

Though I do hope you're enjoying it so far