After failing at becoming a Wonderbolt somehow, Rainbow becomes saddened by her defeat. A friend of hers comes and tries to help before it's too late.
WARNING! Contains: Self harm, suicidal thoughts, extreme depression, and FEELS! If you are eaily triggered by these, READ AT YOUR OWN DISCRETION!
Coverart by me, using vectors I found on google and Picsart for effects.
Hey, thanks to you all, I hit an all time record! I got 60 views in less than HALF a day! OMG Thank you!!! Enjoy this story, as sad as it may become
Chapters (5)
Poor, poor, Rainbow Dash...
6640175 I know, poor RD. She was TOO much for her dream team!
6640329
Slow down pls
6640428 why? XD
6640430 at the rate it seems your going at you will make RB's grief like a joke.
6640443 Have you not gotten the hint that I'm not the best at pacing...
reading back over this, yea it does seem fast, but I'm still a growing writer. I have to just get into the feel of things. Its not gonna be perfect the first time around. Like you and grammar issues, I have pacing ones. You can seem to slow down a lot better than I can, but when my mind says "here's and idea" I just go. It just comes out and there it is. Also, I don't do planning. I just write as ideas come to me. It is my own style, and just don't judge me on bad pacing.
6640461 I have gotten the point which is why I told you to slow down
6640470 I'll, try..alright? It's not that easy to slow down a mind that running at 400 MPH, but I'll certainly try
6640481
Well I hope you can because this topic hits VERY hard
6640489 It'll be quite a while before I write a new chapter, thus giving me time to really really work on my poor pacing
6640596 Well good luck
Why must your chapters be so short?
6641870 idk. If ya want to see REALLY long chapters, check out my other story The Story of 3 Hearts cause I think the chapters are a lot better
6640428 don't be rude shadow. flutter is a very good writer and is trying her best and you don't need to dis her. let her write her stories and don't tell people how to write
6643787 bro she's helped me with stories and I've helped her just chill.
6643787 Pencil, shadow is a good friend of mine. He's only trying to help me out. I never thought I'd see the day that the people who read my things would start to do this...but thanks for following me and trying to stand up for me anyways. I know I'd do the same too if I felt I needed to :) Just keep it nice in the comments plz
6643797 don't egg it on Shade. I know your a bit stubborn sometimes, but just try to contain yourself...for me?
6646720 fine, but only for you.
6646766 yaaay!