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Flutterbat276


I'm just here to write stories, make everyone happy, and let everyone know they are all awesome! Have a great day! (Now on Wattpad @Flutterbat276)

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Fluttershy, Twilight's willing test subject, gets warped to a completely new but familiar world that's sick and twisted. Her friends are despicably wicked and rude, untrue to the elements of harmony she knows and holds dear to her heart. The only real friend here is among the shadows and hidden in darkness.


Coverart by me! It'll need to be revised a bit before its done...heck even that's not the final image! I'll have the rest of the Mane 6 on it too! I hope y'all will enjoy it!)

Chapters (4)
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Comments ( 14 )

Pretty good so far, looking forward to what happens :coolphoto:

This seems promising, I know it's only been a day or so since it's been published but do please continue soon! :pinkiehappy:

6486212 I am actually writing a new chapter now, and the rest of these chapters til the end will be switching between Twilight and Fluttershy. It'll probably be up by late tonight or tomorrow sometime depending on how long it takes for me to finish this essay for school, which may not be that long with how quickly I type

Thanks for reading BTW! :twilightsmile:

How does Twi know she got sent to another reality?

I still enjoy this chapter. Spike the drug lord? :rainbowlaugh:

6490433 it's friggin TWILIGHT! She knows all!! XD but seriously, I think that it's just the way her magic is linked to her and I guess the fact that there was a portal type thing behind Fluttershy that FS didn't see

6490909 Ikr! Spike's a drug lord, 2/3 of the mane 6 are drunk as *squee* and dasher is like gang member of the Shadow Bolts XD

No offense meant, but I've seen parallel universe fics done better. This is moving far to quickly.
Have you read On a Cross and Arrow? I'll link it here:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/755/on-a-cross-and-arrow
I personally think it's done better here, even if it's not an evil universe. You should have introduced their parallel selves one at a time. Then see where it goes from there.
I hope this helps :)

6495813 actually I've seen a sort of variation of On A Cross And Arrow called Encounters of the 63rd kind. I have a plan for this which is, after she has already seen them, she will run into them again one by one, eventually leading to an overall chaotic intervention XD

Though thanks for the link. I've wanted to read that for a while :rainbowlaugh:

I really don't think you need to censor 'damn'.

6620041 like I said, I'm not one to swear at ALL! Any curse word, no matter how minor it is, I censor it! Even h**l (you know what that is). Even though half the population at my school does swear like an enraged Irish sailor, I don't. I just prefer to censor out any bad word no matter what it is

Though I do hope you're enjoying it so far

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