Time Turner is heading to the train station to meet his special somepony. Along the way he was bumped by a mysterious Mare, who manages to swipe his gift for his anniversary. What happens next when you involve a pair of griffons that chase after him? You get a parody of course.
Cover art was made for me by Sipioc. He is quiet the talented artist so go check him out.
This was an entry in the July 2015 Writeoff Association, Best Laid Plans.
Thanks to both Junegold and Hopeless Appraisal for the early editing and helping with the concepts of the story.
Massive thanks to Arcelia for the editing process and for making this story shine out.
Without there help this story would not have been possible.
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this was a pretty good story. i got the sense of where you got the inspiration for it a bit after one of the first cars.
6330894 Thanks for that. I hope everyone also catches on as to what this story is parodying as fast as you did.
6331149 in my defense, i saw that commercial like a hundred times. it was everywhere.
6334280 It was really popular, hence the inspiration for this story.