Sabotage is no small crime in Equestria. Especially not if a pony sabotages something of big importance for the kingdom. Like the weather factory in Cloudsdale. Several years in prison could await a pony for committing such an act. But Rainbow Dash is fine. She and Tank were alone in the weather factory when she destroyed the building to prevent her friend from hibernating. And nopony but her closest friends knew what happened.
At least that was what everypony thought.
As Rainbow Dash gets a mysterious letter a few days later, it becomes doubtful that nopony else knew what she did and questions arise.
How will she be spending the Winter now? And who is the pony that sent this letter to her anyway?
Written for the Writer's Training Grounds of Equestria Daily for "Tanks for the Memories".
The cover picture belongs to svecinkaT on Deviantart.
Well, that was unexpected. Mind if I edit this?
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Thanks for the fave!
Depends. What is it exactly that you want to do?
6305377 Duh. Fix your spelling mistakes of course.
This was a well written and interesting enough story.
My only problem with it is that it was way too easy to figure out who was really behind it.
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Thanks! I'm glad that you like it!
There's always a certain chance for it to happen that someone figures it out way too early, based on the reader's past experience with similar stories and how hard he/she is trying to guess it before the reveal happened.
Can you tell me at which point you realized who it is in a private message?
6396120 you're welcome.
And sure. I'll do that later today.
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Kind of blatantly obvious ! Like muffins really ? Might as well hold up a sign.
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Except that the proverbial sign would show a different name than the one you think of. Derpy is not the culprit, she hasn't done anything.
Thank you for reading, but, if you think it was Derpy who were behind all of this, you might wanna read the end again.
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Uh oops sorry I made that comment when I was moody so yeah
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It's fine. You aren't the first one who reacted to the fic like this, even though I resolved and explained everything very clear and straight forward at the end, and it just makes me wonder if this means I did a better job at writing that mystery than I thought I did or if no one is really paying attention to the end.
I'd like to think it is the former and that I successfully managed to tangle everything up so much that everyone must read it twice to understand what's actually going on.
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I still need to finishe reading it lol
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I thought you did.