Chapter 33: Get Over It
"Settle down class. I'd like to introduce you all to Cold Breeze," Cheerilee said to the class while presenting the white pegasus. He was standing confidently in front of the class while glancing toward me every so often. It's not my fault he got everyone to hate him; I was just a victim. "Would you like to tell the class about yourself?"
"My name is Cold Breeze," He said uninterested in the class. "My mom and me moved here from Manehatten yesterday." After that he started walking back to his seat which was right beside mine. Why did the last open seat have to be beside me?
"That's good, Cold! Now I'd like to announce that family appreciation day is next week," Cheerilee said while clapping her hooves together. I remember Applebloom talking about this awhile ago. She brought her grandma or something and everyone loved her. It's going to be nice to see everyone's loved ones. I can show everyone how awesome my... my... I don't have anyone to show off, do I?
The day went on like it normally does except this time Cold would constantly try to distract me from my work. At one point, he got up to turn in a test and purposely bumped into my desk causing me to scratch out half my work; I had to redo that entire paper in 10 minutes! Still, it's not like he can do any real harm to me.
The bell finally rang signaling that it was time for recess. Getting out of my seat I made my way over to the door where Button was waiting on me.
"Hey, Chance. Rumble wanted to know if you wanted to play with us again," He said enthusiastically.
"Sure, I want to be a pirate this time though!" I said as I ran out the door towards the fort where Rumble and Pipsqeak were currently talking to someone else. As I got closer I could see that they were talking to Cold, and they had a mixed expression on their faces. As I drew loser I could hear what he was saying to them.
"Then he slammed me into a wall, and everypony blamed me!" Cold said with complete confidence in his voice.
"That doesn't sound like Chance. Didn't he forgive Dinky for hitting his horn?" Rumble said. Cold cringed a little when Rumble mentioned the horn thing. I actually forgot about the whole incident with everything that had been going on lately.
"All I'm saying is-"
"That your trying to spin the story to make me the bad guy? I don't see how you can do that when you jumped me," I said making my presence known. "I don't think you understand that I don't fight ponies without reason."
"Yeah right. I'm surprised you haven't abused your condition here too,"
"What do you mean?" I asked. This was when I realized what he meant and I couldn't stop him from saying it.
"How you think you're a human. You didn't want them to know? oops" He said sarcastically. I froze when he said that, and all of the foals looked toward me. I could spin this in a different direction, but I had to spin this right.
"Wow, you still think I was being serious?" I asked with a grin across my face, "I admit that it was a pretty good prank, but seriously? I expected better of you, Cold."
"Nice try Chance, but I remember how you talked about your therapist," I forgot I told Cold about Insight before. Well my plan went out the window so I had to come up with something else. I just shook my head side to side before speaking,
"Whatever. You guys ready to play Pirates vs. Knights again?" I asked as I turned to Pipsqueak and Rumble who were watching the whole thing play out.
"I wasn't done talking to you!" Cold said while getting in my face. This dude really wants to start something doesn't he?
"Well I was done talking with you. Listen I'm sorry about Manehatten, but you need to let that stuff go," I said. If he's willing to give this up then I'm willing to show him around town. Instead of taking my advice he spat on my hooves. "That wasn't very nice,"
***Arrow***
"So you're in the Canterlot orchestra now?" I asked Lyra who was sitting across from me. After I dropped Chance of at school I dropped by Lyra's for a small chat.
"Yep, I've done pretty well for myself," She said as she rubbed a hoof against her chest after breathing on it. Why do ponies do that?
"You sure have. The only thing I can really boast about is Chance and that's about it," I said while taking a sip of the tea Lyra gave to me when I arrived.
"He's a good kid. He reminds me of my nephew Lucky Charm before he became a vegetable," This was news to me.
"You had a nephew?"
"Yeah, he looked a lot like Chance but last I heard he was kidnapped from the Canterlot hospital. I think that's why my sister is so interested in Chance. She can't let her son go,"
"You think she might have been trying to make Chance turn into Lucky?" I asked while looking toward Lyra who was intently focused on her cup of tea.
"Maybe. I miss him too, but I wouldn't go that far. You know, I remember when he was around 2 and he conjured his first familiar. It was a bird of all things, but for a 2 year old it was impressive. That thing never left his side,"
"I'm sorry," I said while putting a hoof on her shoulder. She just sighed before looking up at me,
"Does Chance still need a magic teacher?" I thought for a minute. That teacher Insight hired never showed up because of something in Canterlot, but would Chance even be able to stay calm around Lyra?
"He does. You want to teach him?" I asked. she just nodded before I looked at the clock. I realized it was about time to go pick up Chance and excused myself before making my way to the school. When I got there I was greeted by the sight of Cheerilee out front with a bruised Chance and that obnoxious colt from yesterday.
***Chance***
"Hehe how you doing Arrow?" I asked while rubbing the back of my head.
"What happened?" Arrow asked worried about my safety probably. It's not like I started the fight! Cold threw the first fucking punch.
"Cold and Chance were fighting during recess. I have no choice but to suspend them for a few days," Cheerilee said.
"Wow, Self defense is frowned upon? I didn't know that not letting the tar get kicked out of you was a bad thing," I retorted. I might not be handling this situation properly, but this was just plain unfair!
"CHANCE! Get over here!" Arrow said rather agitated. I don't think I made the right choice here because when I got over to Arrow he gripped my ear in his teeth before dragging me back to Button's.
"Ahhh, stop it!" I yelped as I tried to get out of Arrow's teeth by squirming around. Arrow spit my ear out of his mouth before speaking.
"Chance, what did I tell you about fighting?" I looked toward the ground before answering him.
"I'm better than that,"
"Exactly. What were you even fighting about to begin with?"
"He tried to get everyone to hate me because of Manehatten. I only said what was true so he couldn't twist the story."
"*sigh* Chance, just because he was spreading lies doesn't mean you can go and beat him up," Arrow said. In most cases I could agree with him, but Cold wasn't most cases.
"I didn't even throw the first punch!" I said when we neared Button's house. Loving and Button were currently outside and Loving had a very angry expression on her face. The only reason Button was here so early was because Cheerilee sent a letter home to let Loving know about my incident.
"We'll talk more about this later," Arrow said still agitated. Before leaving however he asked me one last question, "How bad did you beat him?"
"Knocked him down 3 times," I stated before walking over to the very angry Loving. Today was a long day, and it's going to be an even longer night.
Well the look on cold's face according to the picture, says that he is an asshole like in the story.
6466631 Then mix-up did his job perfectly.
I can confirm this is true of the school system where i am from
self defense is punished cause apparently teachers think the correct response is to take it like a bitch
Right
Your
...man, it has been a while since I did Grammar Watch
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First off, Thank you for that
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DAMN
Casual exposition is casual
I feel ya Arrow
seriously though, that feels like it came out of nowhere
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Come on Chance, Don't let some jerk get you down. just keep telling yourself if you mess up pretending to be normal you will be Brainwashed into thinking your ten year old foal and your old self will die, figuratively speaking of course
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6466646 Schools are supposed to stop all violence in the aria, they are not supposed to take side of anyone, they are supposed to be neutral party on neutral grounds and their word is law. If they do take they will alienate the other party from the rest of the student body, and it would be harder to get back to the fold. Not to mention how much of a disaster it would be if they would that a side and discover that they were wrong, it would undermined their creditability to the eyes of the students, the parents, and the school system. It is also hard to tel where the fine line of legitimate self-defense starts and just lashing out of frustration ends.
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6466636 thank you for approving it. I appreciate your comment
6466777 I have read all of you comments and would like to say that you are not the first to point out every last one of them. I'm sad about you giving it a thumbs down, but I don't really think I can change your mind on that. I do have one question though. Why did you continue reading until the latest chapter if you hate it so much? Most people give up after the first few problems. Thanks for reading, and I'm sorry I didn't provide a story you would enjoy.
6466798 Alright I get it you don't like the story. Again, Why are you still reading if you hate it so much?
6466786 I understand that much. My position on it is when a student literally doesn't even touch his attacker and he still gets suspended for fighting. This has actually happened at my school when there were at least 5 witnesses.
6466676 Thanks radio. The casual exposition was because he disappeared 3 years ago in the story so she not necessarily over it, but she wont break down upon mentioning it.
6466695 I should probably answer this comment directly. In this story she has just gotten guards. As for them not letting Chance in I will ask you something. Has Twilight at any point shown up? No, so how do we know the guards are following her orders instead of some protocol?
I get that that's how many school systems should react, but if Chance really was acting in self-defense, regardless of what anyone else said, I believe that based on his personality he would absolutely ignore or try to circumvent any punishment because he would believe it unfair. At least that's what I believe he'd do based on what I've read. It would also create some interesting sub plots on lack of authority and what ponies like Arrow have to do to get Chance to listen and stuff. I don't know. I'm just spitballing.
Anyways, I enjoyed it. This is a fun fic. Keep it up!
6466855 You know exactly how the next few chapters are going. Thanks for reading.
6466889 I will not have those types of comments here! You can criticize me, but you are not allowed to insult anyone.
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Yeah it was just late into the night, and I usually read through all the comments, but was too tired and lazy to read that (cuz i was half asleep). But yeah. Freedom of speech allows you to post whatever the hell you want. Post as long as you want :P
Oh, and hey, look! A new chapter! I SHALL COMMERCE READING
6466766 This discussion has been done in the past comments and using magic with the intent to harm an other even if it's to defend an other can't usually go unpunished. Harming or intent to harm a political authority of a country is a capital offense is in fact a capital offense, and would demand to be made an example of him. The execution part was probably to just to drive the point home of how usurious his situation was. Change go lucky that he was not seen by anypony else , and had extenuating circumstance for the way he acted, that he is a foal after all, so Celestia could allow herself to overlook this actions.
Celesetia was acting on sparse information that told that a little colts' life was in immanent danger at the time and acted accordingly.
I would also add that you could phrase your words with better civility when asking questions commenting or pointing out mistakes to the author, or when disusing with anyone else for that matter, as your comment can easily be misconstrued as being insulting at. It doesn't matter how many stories you've got under your belt, It is very disappointing to see someone how have written such good stories to comment in such an immature manner.
6466928 Sure does. Though as I just typed I will delete comments that insult anyone down here. I don't mind criticism, but anyone that straight up insults someone, I will deal with. Thanks for reading and have a pleasant day.
6466855 you're making a good point Chance disregarding rules when it's convenient for him to do so. But you have to understand that if he did follow all the rules, or common sens for that matter he wouldn't get any where in his quest to go home or freeing the three captives of the Fire Creature; not to mention it would be boring to read if he always acts like a good little colt.
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You have a pleasant day too, and holy crap I feel like Cold deserved that (ish, maybe chance should have knocked him down only twice? Lol jk. He should have knocked him down 5 times.)
Wait, can I insult the characters in your story? Cuz if so, COLD YOU ARE A DIRTY LITTLE RAT!
No fight sequence? Okay
Aaaaaaannnnnndddddddddd.................... Your story just hit more likes than mine. Good job you deserve it.
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I didn't mention anything about that. I was just talking about how his personality based on what I've seen would dictate that he would try very hard to ignore any punishment anybody threw at him because he's convinced he was in the right. I was just making a prediction on what I thought was going to happen. Sorry if I confused you.
So we get to see Jungle's true motives now, different from what I was expecting but also possibly better than what I was expecting. Everything else was good too, a good chapter.
Also just wondering how close do you think you are to the end?
This was a good chapter ones again, One of the crowd, you have executed the story it very well on this one and manage quickly to some of the questions raised in the last chapter.
Cold is really acting like a dick, he is trying to undermine Chances integrity in the school by spreading rumors about him, or telling things that only concerns him and Chance and no pony else. Cold is obviously to full of himself, and convince that he is in the right, to even realize if what he is doing is wrong and doesn’t even realize that he is doing the exact same thing that he did that got him isolated in his last school. He is trying lay in the ground work to isolate Chance from the rest of the students and starts to taunt him in to giving in to his first impulsion to fight him, that’s exactly what he wants wants, to show to the rest of the ponies that Chance is indeed a violent crazy colt. I understand that even for a seventeen year old like Chance feels that he must defend his honor and his image to the rest of the school, but he must take care to not charge in blindly, as just reacting to his taunting will only serve to encourage Cold to do more of that. Chance does not have the maturity to make a step back to see the he is playing Colds games, his feeling about him are still raw, even if he did try to give him the benefit of the doubt, he still gave in. I think Arrow would be good at playing the role of mentor and consoler on this one, as he seem to have had a tumultuous youth, so he knows what he would be talking about what not to do, and his guard experience would do be of great help to know how to deal with these types of situations. Chance is also more susceptible to lesson to Arrow as he already seems to look up to him, and would serve to show the readers in another light than just the guard how take care of his security and how likes milkshakes. When Cold falls, and he will, it’s going to be very hard.
There are three things that marshal art has thought that have served me well, when dealing with such annoyances: Pick your battles wisely; don’t come to them, let them come to you; Stay serene at all time. I won’t go into details on this, but essentially will have to sit and wait until, Cold either get tired or he makes a mistake, and that staying indifferent to his taunting, will get him frustrated eventually because he will have nothing to feed on. Also the one who throws the first punch is always lose the moral high ground in the public eyes.
Cold is obviously very stubborn in his ideas, and blames others for his mistakes and won’t relent until he is very soundly beaten. The only way that I can imagine that Cold to stop is when he realizes that he when too far with his vendetta against Chance and he sees that he has dug his own grave. He is blinded by his own pride, and won’t change his attitude until he makes a big enough mistake that his sees that his hatred toward Chance is completely irrational. After he is shattered, there hast to be somepony to pick-up the pieces of his ego, and restore his self-confidence, otherwise he will be just a shadow of the pony he was and might still not get over of what append anyway. I believe Arrow would be great mediator between the two colts and to get a good heart to heart between them. On Chances end, he also needs to let go of the past, he would have had a hooves on cold’s downfall and would need to start over with Cold. The point would not be to say who did what, who was right and how was wrong, just that they need to bearing the hatched for good. It would be very awkward at first, but I think they could still become true friends, if the only thing they have in common is that they are both stubborn minded and that they can both be very determined in with they do.
As for Family Appreciation Day Open Seas would be great to have for button, I would imagine that he would offer to do the same for Chance, to try and connect with him, but I would imagine that Arrow will take his place. It would be great to see own Chance will gush about how he saved him from jungle Vine, and that he see him as a big brother of sorts. It would also be great to have some more interaction between Chance and Open Seas, as we have not yet seen much interaction with them. It would be great to see more of the tension between Seas and Arrow and where it is going. How about seeing Gibson’s friend and band?
It would be great to see more interaction between Button Chance and Gibson; I can see all sorts of hijinks with them. I would like to know what the other members of the family think about the loss of Combo and how they have coped whit it. Unless I am mistaken, the Button family already seems to be dysfunctional in itself, and seem to do each their own thing. Why did they wanted to be part of a foster family program at all, if they can’t seem to even hold its self together? Did they feel that they lost something when Combo disappearance happened, and that they are grieving his lose, or did they move on? Is Chance seen as some sort of replacement to him? What was Combos personality like?
So, Lucky Clover was a vegetable for over two years now and Jungle Vine was devastated about it. It would mostly explain about why she tacked about being part of a science experiment. Unless I am mistaken she somehow managed to pluck Chance’s soul from his body and plastered in Lucky Clover’s body. Was she trying to mold Chance’s memories so that he would think that he is Lucky or did she genuinely think that she got her son back but his memories are gargled? In the last chapter, which talks about her, it suggests that she sees Chance’s soul as having stolen Lucky’s body against her wishes. Does she know about the Book and the Fire Creature, and that his soul is still around there somewhere?
I wander how Insight and other specialist would think that Jungle Vine managed to get the body of Clover up and about, no matter how monstrous it was made. I wander if it is possible that Chance body was actually transformed into that of Lucky Clover, instead of stapling his mind on it; it a good way to throw the reader off. I still wander why they have hid the facts from Chance the identity of his present body.
6466969 Characters are perfectly fine. Like I said Criticism is appreciated, but Being rude to other commentors isn't.
6467122 I have no idea, but we're past the halfway point. The new arc is probably going to be the last one before the finale arc so enjoy it while it lasts.
6466971 Sorry, but people kept complaining last time about everything that went on so I'm just avoiding those all together now.
6466950 You know what this is the last of your comments I'm bothering to read. It's a story for god's sake! Not only that,but only my third one and I'm just now understanding howto write them correctly. Acting like a complete asshole about everything in it doesn't help me, and it sure as hell doesn't help you. I get I wrote Celestia way out of character why do you think I mostly stuck to O.Cs or characters without a cannon personality? Also you see those tags? Alternate universe means that the laws and types of care may be different from what is considered moral in our world. I don't think that the mind wipe is moral, but I write it because that's part of the story. I already screwed up Celestia so I'm sticking with her current messed up personality instead of going back and rewriting several chapters. Thank you for taking the time to read my story, but please if you truly hate this story so much just leave. I'm not forcing you to read it that's you who makes that call.
6467608 Normally I like to break down what you said, but I'm going to try to cool off for a bit. Sorry.
6468187 no problem, you really don't need for you to answer any of my questions. As alway it is just rambling that comes out of my head.
6468090 OOOOhhhh. Someone got on your nerves.
*facepalm*
Look, I'm sorry I've been so caustic in my comments. It was late at night/early in the morning for me when I posted, and it's just really painful to see a story with promise and an interesting premise crash and burn so hard.
I'm going to try and just go over the salient points here, try to be civil, and give some advice, take it or leave it-- though I really question if the story is fixable without a LOT more writing experience.
1: Your characters are either jarringly OOC or behaving in jarringly inappropriate ways. For Out of Character, I point to Celestia. You have her violently attack and nearly murder an intelligent being for suspected kidnapping. This is a Princess who gave Discord, a destructive being of chaos and madness, a full pardon-- TWICE, and who only re-imprisoned Tirek. THEN you have her actually verbally threaten the foal she thought was kidnapped with execution for striking at her to defend the helpless creature she was pummeling. She bullies her sister Luna and violently forces her into a psychiatrists office, all the while pondering how much easier it would be if she'd just let the psychiatrist erase her sister's mind. This isn't Celestia, the royal mother-figure. This is a psychopath in a Celestia suit.
2: And that shifts us over to Jarringly inappropriate. You have Button's parent's marriage on the rocks. Button's Dad making appalling slurs and threats against a Royal Guard assigned to protect the protagonist (if that happened IRL, with say a Marine, the "dad" in question would be under investigation, possibly arrested and most likely crapping out his own teeth.) You made Button's older brother a complete prick, even though Button dotes on him.... and threw in a whole NEW OC brother so you could add some "dead older sibling" angst for Button.
Look, I'm sure a lifetime of bad television series has conditioned you to think that all these different flavors of family angst, dysfunction and drama are normal or even necessary for a good or at least popular story, but you already had psycho mare trying to re-kidnap the protagonist, an enslaved brother to rescue and a demon trying to EAT him. That's more than enough drama for any THREE stories to be getting on with!
3) THIS sin is so gratuitous it stands on its own. Your protagonist has been sucked into another world and kidnapped by a unicorn madmare who tried to MAGICALLY ERASE HIS BRAIN, an unspeakably evil act.... and after rescuing him, he is informed that the unicorns are going to "cure" him by MAGICALLY ERASING HIS BRAIN. Worse, you've made it clear that this has become a standard medical practice in Equestria for psychiatric patients who are just too troublesome and stubborn. And your only justification for it is that "Well the Princess said its okay, so it's legal."
In a Canterlot Wedding, Twilight Sparkle only suspected Cadence of TAMPERING with her brother's memories and she FREAKED. What part of "we erase childrens' minds so their problems don't bother us anymore" escapes your moral filters? No psychiatrist or healer worth spitting on would contemplate something so immoral, indecent, and medically unethical, and you have the hospital staff try to brain-wipe him at least once against his will while he's unconscious. That's about three or four breaches of medical ethics all on its own!
And you have them administer it to Dinky because she saw her family die. You had them take away all the memories of the family she loved on the whim of her adoptive mother and her psychiatrist.
This is the sort of thing you put in dystopic horror stories, not MY LITTLE PONY.
Yes, I am harping on this because it is the TENT POLE of your entire plot, and it is TERRIBLE! It requires a confluence of idiocy, villainy, and ethical obliviousness of an entire medical profession. It requires the "good guys" use methods that the VILLAIN used, and requires them to slather on an inch thick layer of vapid rationalizations to do something to CHILDREN that any civilization on earth would regard as a crime worthy of the electric chair!
4) Your characters shift emotions like a teenager with a learner's permit shifts gears. There is NO transition... the protagonist goes from fretting and scared to WRATHFUL AVENGER like someone flipping a light switch. Button goes from cheerfully oblivious to wailing about his Dead Brother Trauma and lashing out at Chance....
5)....as if up to the very point that Twist mentions Combo Breaker disappearing he'd forgotten his brother existed. Your brother vanishes in the company of three fillies you talk to every day, you're not going to FORGET who they are or their role in his disappearance. Yet we get absolutely no foreshadowing of this in the rest of the story. At all. Button doesn't even act different around them until right at the moment Twist ends her story.
None of your major plot events have any foreshadowing worth mentioning, except Chance's own Dead Brother Trauma.... which only appears halfway into the story, and has no connection to ANYTHING in the story. Just boom, there they are, like someone air-dropped them in front of the reader. "Oh, did we mention that Our Hero seems to have read the NECRONOMICON?" BOOM. "Oh hey, look, a demon!" BOOM. "Tada, Button's Dad is a dick!" BOOM. Foreshadowing is more than having some character drop a random comment one or two chapters in advance. People behave in ways that indicate there's something off screen. And they do so consistently, not just on random occasions. If Button had a brother who had disappeared, and it had affected him deeply, there would be more signs of it than one single incident of him drawing a picture of him.
The rest of the problems are.... grammatical. Sentence structure, narrative flow, object of sentence vs. object of preposition, making location, action and actor, movement and spatial references clear. That sort of thing is something versed in teaching English composition should handle, and is largely a matter of developing an "Ear" for sentences and paragraphs that sound unwieldy or confusing. And at the moment you seem to have a tin ear for it. The chapter with Button, Chance, their two brothers, the demon and (variably) a fifth pony of indeterminate name running back and forth and round about and yelling at each other to run, save themselves--- it was IMPOSSIBLE to tell who was doing what, why, or where, or what the hell was going on. And fixing that's something you can't teach with a comment post, for sure.
My advice? Take a writing course, if you can. And read more books. No, I'm not being sarcastic.... read more books. Read good authors with a reputation for great skill with words and evocative language. (Pratchett is my go-to author for that.) Reading skilled writers' work, hearing their narrative voice, seeing how they make words SAY things, will help you develop your own skills. At the very least it will expand your vocabulary.
6468251 A tiny bit. I'm trying to stay calm about it, but he is seriously acting as if my story is a plague on humanity. I'm sorry you have to see me like this.
6468322 It's cool, don't worry about it. And try to have a nice rest of your day.
6468343 It's night for me. I think I'm just going to write one more chapter than step back for about a week. I need to rethink a few things
6468368 Gotcha maybe I'll finally have a new chapter out for my story by then.
6468384 You're not getting more likes than me again!
Edit: I also can't wait. Maybe I'll be able to finally catch up while I take my break.
Oh yeah well I still have more dislikes than you, oh wait crap
6468430 I feel a little bit better now. Maybe I wont take that break, but that's only a maybe! I make no promises, and I just do what I want!
6468437 That's cool (as long as doing whatever you want doesn't include illegal activities of course). Once again have a nice day.
6468465 Still night Eon. Also I can't break the law considering the profession I'm looking at.
6466786 got bashed in year 2 by a year 4 student, i got suspended for trying to hit back. That is not neutral, it's pathetic and a failing of moral education. If that happened to me now in the real world, i would be WELL within my rights to fight back. Double standards between childhood morals and adult morals only leads to trouble.
also i disagree with your premise, schools bloody well SHOULD take sides, thats how the real world works.
6468894 where the four students suspended as well? was it longer for them for being the provocateurs? Was it obvious If that is the case then it is probably cowardices or negligence on the administration of the school part. If that is the case unfortunately, then the probably bullies believe that they can act with impunity, and that you can't count on any support from the faculty to defend the student. it is sad when a school establishment losses the respect of its student like that.
6469927 It is sad that, from the research i have done, this seems to be the norm. the discipline of Australian schooling is pathetic.
P.S they got off scott free cause they claimed i provoked them
6470570 they got off Scott free, seriously!? what a bunch of lazy cowards!!!
6470570 Really? Jesus, at least in america they have the common decency to try to arrest all involved. Seriously they tried to arrest a dude that broke up a fight at my school 2 years ago.
6471651 I didn't even realize that I did that!
Also I would like to comment on the sheer fanciness that radiates off of you sir.
*looks at picture of cold breeze*
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(Don't take that the wrong way though it's a good drawing!)
6471684 I like it. It's a lot better than some of the a rt I've seen here.