This story is a sequel to It's Time For the Truth
Pinkie has been in a terreble accident. Applejack decided that it was best to tell her something she was promised to keep a secret. Now, Apple Bloom stands at the door, of room 105 at Ponyville General Hospital...
Hmm, be sure to pace out your stories more in the future. This went way to fast. I know if feels longer when you write it but, trust me, this should have been longer.
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And take your time to revise the errors.
6373064 That as well, although I didn't notice too many.
6418766 ok, thanks!
You should at least say what it's a sequel to in the description so people don't go getting completely confused.
Some problems and a bit rushed, but I still like it.
Cool story, although I suggest checking out an editor to possibly make it better
7183196 how did you find this?!
Good story line needs a bit of spacing make it a bit longer you know build up some tension.