Chrysalis Attempts to get her Revenge

Changelings are Cinnamon Rolls206 stories ·232 members

When Spike and Discord find what could be possible evidence that a changeling has been around, and is also possibly to blame for their friend's disappearance over night, they go and warn Princess Celestia. After that... things get weird.

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Hazy Answer

Hazy Answer #1 · Jun 27th, 2015 · · ·

You have my laughter, upvote and fave.

heptaPon

heptaPon #2 · Jun 27th, 2015 · · ·

Have you considered getting an editor for this? No offense, but your grammar definitely needs a little work. I'm sure you have a decent concept for a story, but right now, it's just painful to read. Sorry.

Sigmacipher

Sigmacipher #3 · Jun 28th, 2015 · · ·

OMG my sides!!!!!

Fret

Fret #4 · Jun 28th, 2015 · · ·

6141627 Don't worry about it, I know it does. Stuff will be fixed in a weeks time... Or something.

The Sexy Barbarian

The Sexy Barbarian #5 · Jun 28th, 2015 · · ·

Cool story, bro

LuluCalliope

LuluCalliope #6 · Jun 30th, 2015 · · 1 ·

*activate nerd mode* Okay, so technically Cadance isn't immortal, at least in my head canon... *insert nerd rant* ...and anyway, I think Discord is best villain because Nightmare Moon didn't get enough screen time and Chrysalis was sooo bland and blah blah blah *insert another rant*

*deactivate nerd mode* Anywho...

This was HILARIOUS! I loved it! I can only imagine the look on Rarity's face! And don't worry, Luna, even though you weren't best villain, you'll always be best princess in my book! *hugs Luna plushie* Also, I would KILL for a picture of Discord wearing those pajamas! Seriously!