My avatar; Danny Eclipse, is a unique Batpony that is the son of Nightmare Moon and King Sombra. Despite being a batpony, he can use a unique magic power that doesn't require a unicorn horn.
This story is a sequel to Phantom War III: Insanity Returns
Danny returns from his quest in hopes of ending something that can threaten the balance of the world. Now, he seeks the help of the Equestrian Empire but something else happens. Danny and Charming are against each other, not agreeing with each other because of their medallions. Can Danny prove to himself and Equestria that he is trustworthy?
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I don't know either. Question; Will Danny and the Elements of Insanity betray their allegiance with the Equestrian Empire? This clip gave me an idea:
Here is what I thought so far:
What do you think?
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Cruel and everything but why? Brutalight and the EOI are in Danny's debt. His loyalty is to Equestria...unless your saying that the Equestrian Empire BETRAYED Team Insanity. And besides, I doubt Charming would go to the dark side again. Also, Rainbine would have detected Charming BEFORE he came to the platform. Rainbine's ear pieces do more than they just look.
6121716 I suppose you're right. Never mind.
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Anyway, I'll be spending some 8 hours today working on this so when are you going to do Equestria War IX? Or are you doing it now and haven't submitted it yet?
6121887 just finished the opening crawl. I am working on chapter 1 and I must ask; how should Twilight meet Nyx? Should it be similar from "Past Sins" or something different? Here is my cover pic:
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Oh my god, I love the picture!! And yes, I think it should be the same as how Twilight met Nyx. I've been working on the Chapter 3. Also, how can you make those pictures? I've been wanting to put pictures with my other Phantom Wars.
it's ok.
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Thank you and where have you been? Most of my time has been spent, waiting for you and I've got an hour left.
6123541 Problems with my PC at my house. Anyways, so far, the star destroyer already found the medallion of primes capsule. Now, they deliver it to Charming Thunder to examine it. What should Primus say once the necklace is on him?
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Something similar to what Unicron said to Danny. Like...
Or around there...
6122218 photoshop (if you have it) or my personal one (since I don't have Photoshop on my computer) Pixlr Editor. I use vectors of characters from the MLP: FiM series and some Star Wars stuff.
6123563
Ohh...I don't have Photoshop.
6123566 How's this for chapter 1 of Episode IX?
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You forgot to mention the "Brother" part. Before Danny took off, he mention he was Charming's Brother with the same father. Besides that, I love it! I think it is a wonderful chapter for your story!
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I can't. Video has been deleted, very bad.
6133739 Try this one:
It can be for their final confrontation.
I'm thinking of a podracing chapter for both of us. It would take place at Appaloosa. Rainbow would be participating in disguise and wins it. When Charming Thunder comes down to give the award and is about to declare her a winner by knighting her with a sword, he rips off the disguise with the sword and the troops seize her while the Mane 5 try to stop him. This is not an evil act if you are wondering it is a trap. What does Charming Thunder do to get Omega Supreme? Danny can still come save the day.
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The Pod racing is a good idea but there is just 1 problem with that. I've already wrote down the next chapter and it's about Rainbow gaining immortality by the 'Blessing of the Moon', AKA: The Bite of a Vampony. I'm almost finished with it.
6137529 maybe after that then? my guess is that Rainbow will look like this:
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I am planning to make the pod racing AFTER Rainbow received the bite. Oh, and she looks like this.
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Without the red smoke from her eyes.
I guess its Charming Thunder's turn to make an army like Danny's. I was thinking that one of them should be based on the Star Wars Transformers toys. I still want to know how Charming Thunder should get Omega Supreme. Any ideas?
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Uh, let's see...You know, I have no freaking idea. How about...Charming is training by Primus to hope wield power Primus could only provide and Primus tries to teach Charming how to summon his own guardian, Omega Supreme.
6138634 I could use the hull of the YT-2400 light freighter he hasn't used in a while to make Omega Supreme.
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True but it has to make Omega Supreme looked like a metal titan.
6138774 So more than just one ship then?
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Trypticon was created by the wreckage of both Death Stars. So, just about that much of wreckage you will need.
6138977 I should use wreckage from the downed capital ships from recent foes. Like the Valor-class cruiser from the assault at the ancient castle.
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Those could work but what about Omega's Laser? I'm referring to the Omega Supreme in Transformers WOC
6138996 Well has the superlaser from one of the death stars being used by Trypticon?
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Trypticon is fused with both Superlasers. However, here is an idea. Have the Equestria Empire make another Superlaser but without the Death Star.
6139033 Great. I was thinking of that but a star destroyer like this one:
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What the- I've never seen that one before! I think it will be a good choice for it.
6141203 What next? I have read the chapter and will add on to my version of the chapter since I prefer a thousand words or more. I should bring in Omega Supreme.
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Alright. I'll continue when you do your part after my chapter(s)
6141560 chapter posted. hope you like it.
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You like the two new chapters.
6144538 I do. I posted a chapter with Omega Supreme and his secret visit with the king of the griffins. This was the reference:
How should Charming Thunder be kidnapped by the Mane 5 except Twilight? Try not to make it too mature next time.
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You know, the next chapter will be about how Danny located the Griffin King and killing him...right? Also, for how they kidnap Charming Thunder. Lets say that Charming arrived to Rarity's place but was ambushed by a frying pan slammed on top of him to knock him out. You know...you will have to make a sex scene for Charming, because the other Mane 5 plan to rape him....Yeah, I'll leave that to you.
So Rarity hits Charming Thunder with a frying pan and he then wakes up to see the Mane 5? Can you post a dialogue you come up with so I could continue from where Charming Thunder wakes up? I am not making this real sex. I am going to make it like an attempt.
6144988 I was thinking of a chase scene between Rainbow Dash and Charming Thunder. It is during an attempt to pass the boarders without using the Eclipse. Here is what I thought so far:
The rest will be up to you if you want to use it.
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I'm not good at sex related things. Also, I've had an idea. Danny, Rainbow, Cynder, HK-47, and Duran could become Bounty Hunters if the outcome say that Charming Wins. But what if Danny wins? As for the EOI could become the new members for the Equestrian Empire. And the Phantom Consortium could be led by Brutalight since Charming can't control two factions at once.
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I like it but you know Danny wouldn't leave Rainbow Dash. He would order the retreat for damaged ships but he would have used the Eclipse to open fire on the Star Destroyers and got into his Soulless One and fight Charming. Danny is a more experience pilot, I'll point that out.
6148020 Yeah that's where he comes in during the pursuit. He tries to shoot down Charming Thunder but was interrupted by Omega Supreme in his robot form. Where should Charming Thunder wake up at after he is knocked out by Rarity's frying pan? Please post a text so I can take it from there.
6148143 Lol. I show the new chapter and laughed.
You can continue there. I'm not a sex/love person. You know what? Scratch that. I'm going to do my chapter then you can continue from there.
6148271 Chapter posted. I will be writing a chapter on capturing Rainbow Dash soon.
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I've finished writing the next chapter. Let me post it first before you change the flow. Ok, nvm. I'll have to adapted on what just happened....
6148757
Hey man. I got a new chapter on work. It's called "Diplomacy over Violence". Danny is finally handing himself in with Rainbow, hoping to discuss peace.
Please Go Easy On Danny.
Don't squander the opportunity to clear the misunderstanding and build a better relationship with the griffins.
6148976 chapter posted. I hope its what you want.