Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Yay! Another chapter update! Skipped all the human on human sex stuff as it was completely uninteresting to me personally. Indications of these two trying to sway the minds of their pony counterparts? Further indications of these two wanting to see their pony counter parts hook up? And finally yet even more indications of these two wanting to bed these two ponies in some hot pony mare on human female sexiness?
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This was fun to write and I don't regret anything!
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We really have to talk about that Twi...
WOO! MEGA CLOPSCENE!
I'm just shocked that I haven't come across this already... Wow... Just wow.
You're doing it again. You know what. It's too late now, but it would have been easier if you had just used Twilight/Sparkle in the same approach you'd already taken with RD. It's much harder to accidentally confuse the two then. This is further compounded by supporting characters referring to them by the name you've taught readers to associate with the other version which only adds to the confusion.
The reader is conditioned throughout the story to see the word Twi and think that's the human version or see Twilight and go alright that's the pony version. The only solace in this chapter for readers is that the pony version never appears so any instance of "Twilight" does not refer to the pony like readers have been taught, just the human.
Blackmail the Blackmailer. Clever. Certainly easier than violence.
And if Princess Twilight uses her horn as Dash mentioned, I wonder what would happen when alicorn magic interacts with human orgasm?
Makes me think of another story where magic can be used between mares to have foals, without a stallion.
Okay, here's what you need to do.
First, add an edgy prologue where someone dies. Slap a Dark tag on there.
Second, bring in your favorite character from something else like, I dunno, Simon the Driller, Commander Shepard, Little Pip, fucking Ash Ketchum, whatever. Slip in a Crossover tag.
Third, make sure you kill a main character about halfway through. Add a Tragedy tag.
Next up, plan a chapter where the Twilights fuse together to make some freakish human-pony hybrid, and shove that Anthro tag into your collection.
Now add a Slice of Life tag for shits and giggles.
Congratulations! You now have every tag.
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Or don't do any of those things.
To be honest, I probably would've found this chapter a lot hotter, if I hadn't been laughing so damn hard at some points. It's very bad to combine sex and comedy together at the same time.
Again with the cliffhanger God Damnit. Though great story :D
When I read the title of this chapter I immediately thought of this.
Then when I realized what this chapter was about.
That was great I really loved the scene that was playing out in my head as I read this. This chapter was one of the most interesting I read thus far Though I don't know if I should worry for Rainbow or Princess Twilight or be happy for them with the plan Dash and Twi have. I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
Yay! much talk of consent! and other stuff *Breaks eye contact blushing furiously and pretending like the "other stuff" was just an annoyance*.
I'm super happy that there is so much more though put into both the sex scene and the conversation when consent is involved... I realize that maybe previous comments might have had an effect but you did not over do it - as can happen - instead you took into consideration many of the things discussed during the previous chapter and integrated them into the story.
The bit about the smile is a nice touch, although its clear that Twi want's it, Rainbow would notice this. As a comment before talked about, this is a perfect example of non-verbal consent especially because it follows verbal consent and is used as permission to continue! As I had said previously just because someone said yes before does not mean that can't change their mind, so this non-verbal consent is a perfect way for Rainbow to know that she has permission to continue!
As far as enticing the ponies goes, it's a slippery slope. Should you have sex in front of other people without their permission... well no... should you be able to have sex in the same room as someone as long as it is in fact your room... yes?
Like I said slippery slope, especially if your as horny as these two girls.
*snare drums* Thanks i'll be here all week.
If anyone out their is trying to find out if their friends are interested in threesums (foursums, moresums) and other activities without having to put yourself out on a limb there are better options then creating a potentially awkward situation...
Adventures of Dick and Virginia Card Game
This game (or other similar ones) can provide an interesting way to introduce the idea of a threesome without outright asking and see how they react to the situations provided in the game, there by weeding out the prudes from those you might want to proposition.
All in all great chapter!!!
This chapters about sex and planning sex.
Neat.
Now onward to whatever the pony counterparts were doing.
There are going to be feathers all over the dorm, when they get back!
This is hilarious indeed XD
6212742 If the answer is "sex and planning sex", then this story just got complicated.
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Are you bucking joking?
We added more sex scenes by accident than on purpose!
I still can't believe I actually wrote some of them
I've got to ask, what is it with people thinking every woman squirts? It's a freaking rarity, and and a decent % (of the small % that can) don't like to because it 'feels weird' or other reasons.
I'm genuinely curious on this. It's used in 90% of the clop on here and makes zero sense.
something tells me some not-so-great things were discussed while they were gone, or perhaps Twilight brought up what they were talking about the night before while Twi was getting flowers and Rainbow was showerin'
6213330 Fetishes...
6213717 *shrug* fair enough. It just seems to be everywhere in here now lol
6213725 Honestly I don't like it either. Not one for cream pies or any of the messy stuff most seem to associate with an orgasm. Keep it clean! Keep it inside. Just pump her full of the frosting don't spray it everywhere.
I expected more than a shower scene but this was 9k words of lesbian shower sex.
Nice.
My only complaint is that I have to wait for the next chapter, oh and how do you write 9k words of lesbian sex, that's impressive.
Well, that happened. While I love the TwiDash, I'm not a fan of gratuitous sex scenes. But I know I'm not the audience for that. I've liked eerything else though.
6214508 one of my favorite clop scenes is 20k words, I would look it up, but don't know how long this shoddy(shitty) hotel wifi will hold up
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SON OF A.....
I even ran control f just to make sure...
Dammit!!!
corrected. thanks
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It's a lot more fun to write, it's great to imagine, and yes, all women can squirt. Not all will, some of it's training, some of it's relaxing, and some of it's just bodily functions. There's many, many posts online I won't post links to because it might get me in trouble. Well... some are contradictory so ignore that last bit lol
It's fun to write and great to imagine :)
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I wouldn't say they were... accidents lol
Almost forgot to come check out the new chapter before going to bed and having to wait an entire day for the next chance.
I enjoyed the chapter, Surprisingly long for a single sex scene. I just had to tune out all my logic about why we don't have sex in the dorm showers.
Looking forward to next weeks installment, you are too good at setting up the cliffhangers.
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That card game sounds like a fun idea.
Have had a few interesting propositions over the years but the best was when a mutual friend proposition my dorm roommate and I for an all male threesome at the end of the year by bringing a huge delicious pizza made just the way we would order but with extra sausage and then just asking flat out, If he could be the extra sausage to our pizza.
Would have been a proposition for the ages except I guess we never told him the reason my roommate and I are so comfortable with sharing eachother's personal space is because we are cousins by blood and firmly know where the lines are drawn.
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More of an issue with male showers lol
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No human/pony will be forced to do something they don't want to do.
Some may be forced to watch something they might not want to. Hey, it's a small room lol
This story still confuses me, but in a good way.
And HOLY CRAP THAT SEX SCENE!
And on that note... HOLY CRAP THE IMPLIED FUTURE SEX SCENE!!
Keep it up! (I know many of your readers will)
6214896 Fair enough Was genuinely curious as to why.
6214932 I'm glad to hear it! I'm also not upset by the choice to flaunt sex for others to see, these are young college students who may not know better after all... I think sometimes we all make the mistake of trying make each other (fan fic writers) write more responsible characters... ie characters who respect each other and ask for consent...
However, since its fiction the writer has the liberty to have characters make bad choices with out actually hurt anyone but other fictional characters... however, in that case it is the writer who must make that a choice, and be aware of the likely outcomes rather then just following what their fantasies might be.
6214898 Well did you or your cousin, at least, kick the other one out and sleep with this guy?
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No accidents?
I just say strap on
Man, Topless Tutors sounds scholasticly hot. I'm envious of Dash right now.
Hahahahaha...! I can't wait to see what they are doing ! X'D
I bet it's something goofy of a sort.
You're quite the cliffhanger man don't you ? X)
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Talking about this one?
It look like each chapter is gradually increasing in word count, oh this is going to be fun.
6216386 I can;t tell you how many chapters I'd finish and instantly start the next lol
6214919 I haven't been in too many female dorm shower rooms but the ones I have were comparably just as unclean.
6215064 Not that particular day/night. Sat down like reasonable adults and discussed it over pizza and social drinks but it was move out week and considering how hard it is to cycle the air in the dorm-rooms thanks to stupid safety windows we would have been forced to use the "Blame the smell on the roommate" trick but that doesn't work when the roommate is also a relative of the person commenting on the lingering sexual stink. Washrooms of both genders were filthiest they had been all year and no one wanted it bad enough to try and have sex in the library archives or the maintenance tunnels where you could get in trouble with the law.
6218064 My mother and father commented how the university newspaper police report for their school always had at least one report of someone getting arrested for masturbating or having sex on campus.
My Undergrad University didn't have any good places to have sex... I'm sure people had sex in the Library but it just wasn't as nice as other places... well the theater building got a lot of action I'm sure... never could get any in the main stage catwalks....
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I seem to have made an error, it was actually 36 thousand words. and it was This One
Chapters two and three are both the same clop scene as it escalates throughout both chapters.
I will have to check out the one you linked sometime.
This is the longest sex scene I've ever read. And it never got boring.
Oh shit, they must have found Twi and Rainbow's sex tape and watched it.
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Lol!!!
Love it
Moremoremoermoremoremoremoremore!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (SQUEE)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!