Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Yay, possibly first! This chapter was by far the best. Just the sexual tension and fun. Need to keep this up. And I can't wait to find out the prank. I mean, with at least one Twilight and Rainbow, it's got to be good.
Keep it up~Star
Sex drama, great...
Twilight being a understandable amount of prude, of course...
And now we have Twi, approving of pranks, weird...
Alright, next chapter.
Poor Twilight and Dashie...
Fix this first Twi, then worry about getting Rainbow back...
That was a great chapter I was hoping Twilight would finally get that release so she could feel what it is like but then she had to become very prude Twilight you should of just finished before you got all uptite Trust me you would of felt a lot better afterwards Still wonderful chapter I hope that Twilight finally figures out how release herself I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
*Reads that Spike helps with Twilight's heat*
Oooohhhh, naughty Twilight!
*Reads next part*
Oh.
Sorry, I was enjoying the story this story until the last two chapters that had borderline beastiality. I'm out.
This is basically torture towards the poor mare. Plz tell me she stops being tortured right? It hurt me to read that Twilight was crying
THE DRAMA!!!!!
Rarity would be proud. Twilight, almost reaching the holy grail of her first orgasm, only to not just ruin it, but also majorly buck up and fight with her (
girlmare)friend.All in all, nice chapter. Sexy shenanigans, and a promise that will probably be regretted. Also, am I the only one that believes the duo will start a sexual orientation revolution in equestria when they come back? In this case, the very concept of it existing in the first place, it seems XD
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As has been pointed out in many fics before this one, Human on MLP Pony (or the reverse) isn't Bestiality/Zoophilia, it would be Xenophilia. Of course some consider that against their beliefs/tastes as well and I am not at all questioning that.
Shame on anyone who wasn't expecting that.
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This kinda hits spoiler content for the next chapter, but as I feel the same as you two, I'll go ahead and say it for anyone interested.
Twilight doesn't get picked on for much longer, pretty much what you said happens, murkglow
6264151 ah i see. Its not my cup of tea. Also quite frankly, Dash's stance on the whole thing creeps me out.
Another great chapter!!!!
. Dammit...now I have another week's wait for the next chapter.
Also: poor Twi.
And Twilight still hasn't placed a silencing ward around the room. Or any sort of spell to fix that.
This all.
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That was funny, thanks!
6265338 you're welcome
6264225 Don't fight It... Embrace it....
6264166 Damn, I love that pic so much...
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Given the mentality of Dash in the show and what the fandom perceives, is it really that farfetched that in this situation she'd be like "ah buck it" and just go for it? Particularly given this stories hints that she's got latent feelings for Twilight but can't act on them?
Not much to say. Glad to hear that Twilight won't be so distressed for much longer. Enjoyed this chapter, and am looking forward to next week.
Woo bestiality vs xenophilia distinction, that is always a fun argument to have with people over MLP.
6264070 My only question is this:
Were you really expecting anything different?
And once again, Dash proves her loyalty by metaphorically kicking Twilight repeatedly in the gut. After Twilight apologized to her.
I really want twilight and dash to get together.. there seems to be a lot of tension between them and i hope to see them build that tension into something better, more than friendship, in a later chapter.
on another note, i really like the story so far! its caught my eye from the start and i cant wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the awesome work!
6266421 Subconsciously, probably yes.
6266077 its not that it's far fetched, I understand why dash would act like this given her personality and such, but it still bothers me that she's so willing to do that with Twi and justify it by saying " they're us, so it's OK", which to me doesn't mean anything as they are still different people due to experiences.
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Twilight, basically, called her a rapist and only apologized for fighting with her, not for what she said.
I've always been in the camp that while their element is a large part of who they are, they're not just that. Applejack will still lie, Fluttershy will not always be kind, etc..., etc... Just defining them by their element makes them one note characters without real emotional depth.
In this chapter Dash spent hours living in her own mind while Twilight was asleep, mewling over what Twilight told her and got so pissed that she was about to leave everyone and go off on her own in an entirely strange, dangerous world. In the last chapter the only thing they did to Twilight was give her shit about overreacting to sex. Hence the Lesson Zero analogy.
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You might have missed the build up to it.
Twi grabbed Dash and pulled her under the covers, pressed against her breasts, something Dash really enjoyed
When Twi undressed, Dash was... how do you say, interested.
Twi forced Dash's muzzle against her breasts on the way to the bathroom, something Dash REALLY enjoyed.
Ponies have a greater sense of smell then humans, the way she smelled really got to Dash on more than one occasion.
Rainbow coerced her into Trying some of Twi's cum-stained nipples. Something Dash not only enjoyed but then clopped to.
After these events and with her attitude, I don't think it's far fetched for her to not only be excited by the prospect, but also want to join in.
But it's one of those things, you'll either like it or you wont. I only replied because you seemed to imply there was no build up to this decision on the pegasus's part one so ever.
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6267636 And Dash's response to the whole scenario is, after Twilight's apology, is to go ahead and have sex with one of the humans with malice aforethought, to deliberately use her jealousy and personal sexuality issues to cause Twilight further emotional trauma to the point she's reduced to tears and not even able to use magic to find some distance. All this after Dash was driven by jealousy to the point of physically attacking Rainbow for daring to touch Twilight a bit low on the back.
What Twilight said to Dash was hurtful and wrong, absolutely; on the other hand, Dash already knew Twilight was in seriously delicate emotional territory over this entire thing, and how Twilight reacts in those circumstances, and Dash went too far too fast. Almost certainly not intentionally, but she already knew better.
I also find it interesting that Twi immediately called out Twilight to issue an apology, while not knowing in the slightest what the argument was about.
Twilight is getting roundly shat on by everyone in this, so far.
And regarding Lesson Zero, I was wrong. This is a Lesson Zero moment, but not in the way you think. The other lesson of Lesson Zero was: "I will take Twilight's feelings seriously." Though it's pretty much canon that nobody learned that one, hence A Canterlot Wedding.
6267999 So the actions of someone not emotionally mature, who often acts without thinking, and doesn't always consider the consequences of her actions.
Twi calling out Twilight had more to do with her relationship with Rainbow. The girl knows from experience that even when Rainbow is wrong, she has to make the first move to extend the olive branch as it would be (see above for reasons why). It's not a leap in logic for her to assume that Dash is the same way.
The thing about lessons is that you don't always get it right afterwords lol. Often, the same lesson has to be learned several times for it to start to sink in. Something I both love and hate about the show (Love that they don't always get it right even if it's the same lesson, hate that they seem to ignore the fact the first lesson even existed).
6268700 Dash isn't the most mature of ponies, no. Her behaviour doesn't actually surprise me that much here (she's always fallen a bit short as "loyalty" even in the show ). What's bothering me I suppose is that the way things are written is carrying a really strong vibe of "Twilight is the one in the wrong," which may or may not be your intent and is obviously subject to my own biases. From my view, other than her outburst at Dash (which was a pretty horrible thing to accuse Dash of), she's been the least-harmful in behaviour of the group.
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Personally I don't view either of them as really wrong here, and at the same time, both of them are wrong as well.
It's quite the conundrum lol
They were teasing Twilight with sex, despite her obviously being uncomfortable with it.
Dash did go out of her way to help Twilight, only to be called sick and disgusting for her actions.
However, then she purposefully antagonized Twilight by having sex with Twi.
Everyone is pretty much in the grey at this point. From an outsider's prospective it's easy to take sides, although I've always been of the mindset that words hurt far worse then actions..
6268775 Yeah, the whole "have sex with someone else in front of Twilight" (given her sexual hangups and unconfronted feelings for Dash) thing goes beyond 'antagonizing' well into 'cruel' territory. I'm kind of surprised that (human) Twi would do that to her pony counterpart.
You're right that nobody's entirely faultless amongst the group, but from my viewpoint Twilight is the least-wrong of the lot of them, and she's taking a hell of a lot more of a beating than she deserves. The others are lucky her reaction is in the 'sad' direction rather than the 'obliterate the room' direction.
you doing okay TwiDashForever? ~hugs~ you getting eaten by the critics a bit
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Oh yeah I'm fine. Whenever dealing with established characters, people will always have different options of how they will act in a given situation. This is true even in the show, there are times I've felt characters were ooc even in the canon show. If anything it's a good thing, it means the characters are not one-note characters and they're still growing.
As with everything, context is king.
As far as this story goes, whether or not people like it or not is on them. It's the story I wanted to write and it's shaping up nicely, I'd say.
6271517 ~hugs~ i think the story is good also
and yeah, sometimes characters in the canon are either flanderized or ooc, i think Pinkie Pie is one of the biggest victims, but not just her, but Rarity and RD tend to get bounced around between the writers.
i think i'll get around to reading Revenge now, i have been slacking, you need to whip me, lol
Don't worry twidashforever, I got ya back.
I don't entirely understand the complaints about the story, considering it's been pretty clear this is the direction it was heading from the start. I honestly think it's the best example of "plot with clop" that I've read yet. This is pretty tame compared to some of things this fandom pops out.
I mean, one of our most popular stories is about one character cutting up, baking, and then consuming another character, so xenophilia is the sanest thing I've read all week.
It's like they always say. "Those who live in glass houses shouldn't complain about the content of their clop"
Otherwise, nice job with the story, and I can't wait to read the rest of it... like really can't wait, so it's off to the time machine with me.
6276505 Yeah, it seems like some people were shocked that a story labeled mature/sex, has sex in it...
Who'd a thunk it?
Favorited, Tracked, Liked, and Followed. Looking forward to more of this story, and to more stories you write!
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Next chapter is out on Thursday! Hope you enjoy :)
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(Did I die while reading your fic? I'm I in pony heaven now?!)
JUST DO IT!
You're a mean one, Mr. Grinch.
Here are some errors that some people may have over looked and that bug the shit outta me
1. ""No,' Twilight said,blushing, one that only increased when she held up the next piece of clothing".
Ok for this one between "said,blushing, one" first notice the space missing between said and blushing as well as the extra space. (Not trying to be picky but just putting it out there)
2. "The smell caused her mind to go back to earlier that day when she had woken up on the sleeping
thegir'ls breasts and found her muzzle pressed against Twi's tits.No need for that extra the in there.
3. "Her eyes widened out of shock as she saw the towel pressing against the pegasus's muzzle, her hoof buried between her legs, frantically rubbing herself off." Where "pegasus's" is there is no need for that extra 's' as it than means "pegasus is" there gust needs to be the ' and that is it so fit should say "pegasus' muzzle," (I swear people will think I'm perfect in this world but define: perfect.)
4. ""I'm sure I can find some flashcards in Twi's locker!" Twilight said chipperly as she finished putting Rain ow's cloths away and went to explore Twi's locker for some flashcards."
5. ""Yes egghead, it's important, and it's something you should have been doing long before now,' Dash said, refusing to believe it, though now that the conversation had gone in this direction, she truly believed in what she said."
6. "Now run your hoof along your lower stomach."
7. ""What? No!' Dash contested Twilight's words, her face reddening in frustration."
8. "Her nose filled to the brim with the scent left on it, the scent of Twi's juices that still permitted the towel.
There will be more once I have finished this chapter... maybe
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Space added between said, blushing. That's not actully a space between blushing and one. (Fimfiction formatting ftw, it just looked like one.) Changed to make it clearer anyway
extra 'the' deleted.
Changed to:
is that correct?
Changed to:
added in
You changed to your
permeated is correct.
Permeated: spread throughout (something); pervade.
And you're so coming on as an editor when you get caught up lol
There are no more errors for this chapter and I will be back in the next. So expect more from me and this story is great by the way.
Good chapter. Twilight is developed and I like it !
Thumbs up for the "Buck yourself !" and "I'm trying !" That was epic. X'D
6264070 It's not bestiality if it talks. Unless you're fucking a parrot.
For my part, I'm trying to mentally repress the mental image of how much dust bunnies a wet sex toy thrown under Rainbow's bed must have gathered.
This must be the first clopfic that has me feel sad, turned on, then sad again...
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Just wait, it gets better. Well... more anyway.