Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Hoo boy...
More than thirty thousand words? I'll have to make sure I have plenty of spare time before I jump into this one.
It was so long!
But surprisingly it didn't took long to write.
If you ask me, this came along nicely in such a short time
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Time flies when you're having fun.
Great company helps too
And tomorrow, they're shocked to find a very tired Fluttershy outside their door.
"The way you were talking, you clearly had some kind of horsie. I had to come and see it!"
This was a damn good chapter,definitely my favorite so far; it's just so intense! Emotionally, and physically. This chapter during Twi and Rainbow's fight actually got a couple of tears from my eyes; that was a pretty damn scary moment,(for a second there, I thought Rainbow might do sonething she;d reret with Spitfire) and the impact on the ponies was downright heartbreaking. You really nailed the emotions this chapter.
The fight kind of took me by surprise though, espescially after that night on Easter Island supposedly being quite the breakthrough for Rainbow and Twi; I suppose that the tension from being so concerned about Twilight got to them.
Tavi and the Roseluck moments absoloutely precious
Not gonna lie. I kinda wanna see what'll happen if they're still there if/when Fluttershy shows up. If only Twi knew some spells to change physical sexes. I'm sure Twi and Rainbow might appreciate a bit extra spice.
Oh a new chapter, let's see... THIRTY ONE THOUSAND WORDS! Well, time to grab a drink and strap into my chair for the next few hours.
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I don't think Trixie had actual alicorns in mind when she said that lol
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Flattering me won't earn you anything^^
Btw 1000 upvotes!
The sleepless nights finally pay off.
And I was afraid that I would have to send you a bill soon, Twidash...
You know, I think this is the first clop fic that described a mate-less (in the sense of no proper stallion being present) heat, in a somewhat realistic sense. The soreness in particular would probably kill any feelings of fun in the event.
I didn't think I'd finish this chapter tonight, 30,000 words is a hell of an ask, and I barely got through it the last time (though having a working bookmarking system definitely helps nowadays). Anyway, this was a great chapter, I'm really enjoying the story so far.
Bless you Twidashforever this fic' is getting better and better!
31,000 MY BODY IS NOT READY
You know, this chapter was nearly too much! Like, I was exhausted after just READING it. There was so much jam packed in here that, well . . . it's just like the first super sex chapter, in that it was an experience, but turned it up to eleven!
Oh neat an interrobang.
Another home run!!
long chapter is long
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Place bookmark is useful!
So... after this wonderful, little marathon, where are we in the overall story? How close are we to ending it? (Not that I'm complaining, mind you, these updates make me look forward to Thursdays. I just want get an idea of how many more fun Thursday we're going to get.)
One thing bothers me about this fic, which I just have to bring up. How come we haven't seen Dash go nuts for not getting any sky-time? I mean, yeah, she's distracted by, and worried about, her marefriend (and Twi, and Rainbow), and there was a little sky-time on Easter Island, but - and maybe it's just my headcanon here - I would still be expecting by now that Dash would be chomping at the bit to go on an extended flight after being stuck in the dorm for so long.
Anyway, awesome job so far!
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That's actually something I've kept in the back of my mind. You're right, she should be.
Right now there are several factors that keep her grounded.
1. Twilight's in trouble (her heat)
2. Keeping a low profile
3. Lots of sex
4. Movies that are increasingly awesome.
5. Boobs
6. New Marefriend
7. Strange new everything
8. Another just as awesome as her in the same room (Rainbow)
9. Naps
Now, time has a way of making anything normal. Before long not even all these will be able to keep her locked up.
*cough* Ch 19 *cough*
There will be 20 in total btw. :)
Although I've already started thinking about a possible sequel
30,000 words? Whoa. That's a lot of sex.
30K+ word chapter. Challenge accepted.
I feel the strong need to ask a question here. If the cold shower helped calm Twilight down, even if just for a little while, what about ice packs to help when the others need a break? Being an athlete, surely Rainbow Dash has some available, right? The fridge has a freezer section, doesn't it?
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It does and she does.
This chapter is unique in that there are time jumps in it. As the weekend went by the 'other' methods worked less and less and the concern grew more about twilight's health than sex or breaks.
Hence the call to Fluttershy.
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Why, yes. I would like to sign up for that!
Ya know, if there was a sequel in the works, I would have to vote for the story of two certain humans falling through a portal to a certain non-human world. It's old, it's trite, it's been done before, but ya know - I think you could make it work rather well.
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When did this become a thing, and how do I do that?
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Top of the chapter, directly to the left of the live reader count.
Also, if you put the mouse to the top of the screen when you're reading, the same menu bar will pop up. Click Bookmark and then click on the paragraph you left off on.
When you next open the chapter, It'll take you right to it.
6435235 Thank you
6435250 No problem :)
I use it all the time, especially for clop fics lol
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Just a few more left? Damn...hopefully a sequel does come out of this.
Holy crap! Man that was a long ass chapter, but it was fun. Looking forward to the next one.
Great chapter as always. It took me an hour to read, so it wasn't too bad.
Wow, I should not have tried to read it all in one sitting, took a lot longer than just twice as much as I expected.
I would definitely be interested in a sequel.
6435204it could be played off as when twilight and dash go home twilight “accidentaly” brings two and rainbow along.
Reread it again. Couldn't help it. Also Twi is best moment ruiner and person in general. <3 She is my favorite in this story. Lol.
6434980 Gosh dangit TDF stop dropping spoilers you know are going to murder me. Jk. I like the pain ;3
I'm fairly certain you meant Dash there.
I really enjoyed this chapter, and can't wait for the next.
Phew what a ride!
It's nice you're keeping the real-time feel here. Often writers write like the rest of the world pauses off scene, but here everything is still moving even when we don't see it.
Keep going! ;)
I've only read one chapter that was this long in one sitting before, and it took me all night. Either this is once fast paced action packed pony story (puns! puns everywhere!), or I'm getting to be a faster reader! Well, it's 20 to 5 in the morning now, better get to sleep for an hour...
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Edited, thanks!
This isn't the girls' dorm. This is the lesbians' dorm!
Bad pun! No cookie!
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Truly the only lesbians are: Twilight, Lyra, Bon Bon, and Octavia.
Everyone else is either Bi (Vinyl, Rainbow), 'going with the flow' (the nudity), or 'college experimenting' (Roseluck and Minuette).
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Only 15 chapters... And you have almost 200,000 words... And people wonder why I like your stories? I haven't even read this one yet but I'm definitely looking forward to it.
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Haven t read it? lol
You're in for a treat.
yeah, the TiM stories are not well liked, but no one can say that about this one lol.
6444755 I don't see how to TIM stories aren't well liked. The only thing that could've been better was the series name. Granted, I haven't read the whole thing yet.
Thirty... Thousand... Words...
Well, I came, dunno about anyone else.
I just realized what this story needs more of...
... Butt plugs.