Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Awwww. So adorable. ^__^
What can I say? Its like a drug. Now what to do in till I get my next fix?
Honestly cannot wait to see more develop for the equestrian versions of them both >.<
Hopefully Twilight becomes more secure in her feelings soon and lets go, where as Dash needs to just take it a little bit calmer, stage 1 first just to get Twilight comfortable.
Woohoo! New chapter! My addiction has been fed!
Awww, and now the Twidash. So cute...
But what I really want to say is HOLY COW Rainbow's face must be horrifically sticky since she didn't wash it. Ice Cream residue (even if she did rub it on the shirt, which probably made it worse, not better) is nearly impossible to get off... I can't imagine letting it dry on your face (and probably hair) and trying to sleep with it... And oh my god Twilight's hair would get stuck to her face during the night and get sticky as well... *shudder*
Star Wars is to be watched in production order. Don't skip episode one, but make sure it has the context and contrast of the original trilogy.
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So much damn Daaaaaaaaaaww....... Gonna die from this shit!
Between the name of this chapter and Soarin's behavior followed by Rainbow warning Octavia about Soarin, I worried things were gonna take a bad turn. Glad that wasn't the case though
The ending scene was so adorable that there should be a law against it!
Good work!
That was a great chapter Glad to get a break from the other aspect gives breathing room Although you had to get the cuteness in somewhere between all the sex Still you make all work so well I can't wait for next week I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you
If I sacrifice my first born, Will I have the next chapter sooner?
Great chapter, and I bet by the end of the weekend the pony version are gonna be in love.
I would love for rainbow to speak some sense into both twi and dash because at this point twilight has already gotten her punishment but the other two have had done nothing but antagonize twilight and have gotten away with it.
Still getting that 'Twilight is always in the wrong' vibe, here. Dash did something really, really wrong, last chapter, and nobody calls her on it at all.
I hope that when dash and twilight go back to equestria they go back to an empty room, realizing no ones there they start fucking eachother and then the other main six, princesses, and family jump out shouting surprise just as things have started to heat up between dash and twilight.
Seriously, Twilight is like Luke with the other three being Darth Vader, 'COME JOIN THE SEX SIDE!'
It's even more appropriate since they plan to watch Star Wars.
For now, sexy times, barriers broken, and craziness insures.
Holy crap, I need to use that one!
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This did not happen.
Looking forward to reading this...
6290644 To be fair, she was talking about Germane, not Germany.
I think Twilight and Dash need to watch The Blues Brothers
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That crazy looking guy... I remember seeing him on the history channel years ago and thinking he looked like a stoner. Now he's an internet meme icon.
6291070 I'm talking about Germany. Just wanted to put that fact out there.
Enjoyed this chapter as always and looking forward to the next one.
Now I want to have a movie marathon with my friends as I don't have any strong feelings about the Star Wars viewing order but they would.
I am sitting here laughing at the silly idea The Morningstar inspired in me as a quick google search shows that there were Nazi scientists involved in at least one experiment to recreate a breed of equines with desirable qualities.
Twilight would be amazed by the strides Nazi scientists made in the field of breeding superior miniaturized equine workhorses, far better than the Germane eugenics society managed with their selective breeding of Earth Ponies in the pony world. AND only after she had fallen in love with the Nazis would she discover about the extermination of 'undesirable' humans.
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That's what I thought. Wasn't sure though.
I hate grammar lol
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IDK... I think the idea of 'breeding programs' might be a little too much for her lol.
I don't know, I mean I understand Twilight's reaction to what Dash did and what caused it but... She was right, it was a violation. You don't penertrate someone without permission, especially if they've never experienced it before. Of course that's going to freak them out. I know this wasn't the point of this scene, but Dash was wrong to do what she did, however well intentioned.
dammit, i'm so sorry, i should have noticed this, in this context, the spelling of 4th, should have been "fourth". i was checking my email to see if you accepted all my edits and then i noticed this when i got to the comment i made about Crystal Skull xD
but seriously, why did everyone hate Crystal Skull?
6290181 The victim blaming is fucking gross.
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I did a little extra reading to make sure I wasn't going to make a complete ass out of myself before replying to your correction. It is an accepted practice to write the possessive singular of pegasus as: pegasus's and/or pegasus'. The point of contention is that sources on grammar are often biased to the author's or editor's style, as is the case here. Also I think you may have misinterpreted the meaning behind Lord_razor's third grammatical correction. He wasn't saying to drop the second "s" in pegasus, but the added "s" after the apostrophe, as I demonstrated earlier. I also recommend, in general to all writers, to use Elements of Style, so long as you remember to ensure that it's a up-to-date version of the text.
There are just 3 corrections for this chapter alone thnx for understanding
1. "Twi’s only reply was to hum, ever so softly at the contact, a clear indicator that was
wasenjoying it if Rainbow ever heard one."2. "Rainbow moved her fingers around the girl’s lower lips, lightly running
roundsround and round, spreading the girl’s juices all over her mound."3. "As the ghost beings to emerged from the Ark and the tempo of the music picked up, another sound was added to the mix, one that had nothing to do with the movie as Twi came into Rainbow’s fingers and buried her head into the bedsheets to muffle her scream."
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1. Yep, first was should have been she. Good find, corrected to:
2, what I had was wrong, but what you put sounds strange too. It might be technically correct, but the flow is off, changed to:
3.
To emerged would be incorrect. to in this context to would be present tense, not past. And as the sentence is in past tense, saying the ghost beings emerged from the ark would be right. Saying that the ghost beings to emerged from the ark is wrong. (Maybe my reasoning is off, but it also sounds really wrong when I say it out loud.)
6292987 sorry I'm kinda horrible with post text and also I'm not to good with things atm so soz for some bad judgement calls for certain things but nice story. Lovin' it td4evr!
For some people that don't know me I'm actually really nice but have errors like most people not all but most, not everyone can be perfect even some celebrities they have errors that they to correct as well, so best that in mind.
Kind regards, Lord_razor
ps. This doesn't mean I'm done this is only the beginning. Also anyone that gets annoyed at me I don't care td4evr is a great writer pardon the flaws which is where editors come and help out with it. I'm dine here, for now. Peace out.
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I don't mean it as a form of criticizing your editing or anything. Everyone makes mistakes, even editors lol.
As always any errors that make it into the story are on me. Not my editors.
It's my story so it's my responsibility to make sure it's edited. Hence the reason why I double check as best I can :)
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It is the part I wrote actually.
And no, it was far away from violation, trust me.
Twilight never said stop or added any form of barrier to those actions, so she basically overreacted.
They also talked about it. Rainbow and Twilight.
Dash really tried to help Twilight this time, no more and no less.
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This,
Dash was--quite literally--just trying to show Twilight how to masturbate. It's reasonable to assume that Dash doesn't just rub herself until she cums. Feather play would simply be part of what she does for herself. As the training they agreed upon was for Dash to show Twilight how it was done, and Twilight not only said yes, but wanted Dash to continue being the one that stimulated her, I find it confusing that people have taken an assaulter/victim mentality here. Did Dash take it too far? Maybe. But when you ask someone to show you something, you can't really turn around and get mad at them for showing it to you.
Now Dash having sex with Twi the way she did, that was partly to get revenge on Twilight for what she said. And she apologized for it.
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I think I wrote it exactly in the right way and I stay with that.
There is no victim at all.
6293545 Dash went too far, Twilight freaked and overreacted. Dash then full-on maliciously has revenge-sex with Twi while Twilight was forced to stay and watch, distraught. Nobody calls her on this at all, and she skates with a half-assed apology. This all, of course, after Dash's apocalyptic jealousy hypocrisy.
It's all Twilight's fault, though, for her sin of being sexually repressed.
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This is the same mare that sold Fluttershy into slavery for a first edition of a book she already had.
Not exactly known for logical thinking.
Twilight has been shown to be very forgiving, (Trixi, Sunset Shimmer, etc...) when it comes to other ponies and their mistakes. All of her friends have made mistakes at one point of time or another, some big, some small, she's even almost destroyed the town a few times. They move on from it with simple apologies in the show, it would be out of character for her to hold a grudge after Dash sincerely apologized for it.
I'd say it makes perfect since that she'd be okay with Dash's apology for what she did.
Rainbow didn't take Twilight into the shower to say it was her fault, she did it so Twilight would open up, and to give her another point of view to consider.
6293914 Yes, Twilight is very forgiving. Dash, however, acted with deliberate malice toward her, a calculated attack intended to harm, and in a very intimate and vicious way that doesn't even exist in the show. On top of all her other hurtful behaviour and hypocrisy up to that point.
And that still leaves all the characters immediately singling out Twilight as the source of every problem, even when they have no reason to. Twilight, of course, accepts the blame because people with self-esteem issues are easy targets.
This is like an examination of an abusive relationship: hurt someone, then make them apologize to you for it.
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I'll give you intimate not being in the show, (It's a kids show... although this might not be true with the changeling queen/shining armor part. Not hard to believe that the changeling queen that feeds on love would have sex with her fiancée--can you say rape?)
Vicious not being in the show? I disagree with. Trixi whipped Snips and Snails (Two young colts/kids) into pulling her slab of concrete she was using as a throne (Without wheels). Took away Pinkie's muzzle (how she even breathed I'll never know), and CAGED the mayor. (These are just the ones off the top of my head--you can blame the alicorn amulet but it was her choice to put it on in the first place. Much like an alcoholic, she's responsible for everything she did while under the influence.)
Slavery, child labor, torture, disfigurement, imprisonment, and that's just what I can remember, all of these fit the bill of vicious crimes that happened and were forgiven in the show.
Having sex with someone else in the room doesn't even compare to that stuff.
Who was really going to call Dash out on it, to make her feel worse about what she did?
Dash: Realized the true issue upsetting Twilight after the fact, realized what she did wrong, and apologized.
Twi: Dash offered her help, she took it, and only realized after the fact that Twilight was really hurt by it, but didn't want to really bring it back up after Twilight accepted Dash's apology. (No point ripping the bandage off and besides, she largely has the same self esteem issues as Twilight.)
Rainbow: Who didn't think it was that big of a deal, grateful not to be the one in hot water, and just wants Twilight to open up.
Twilight: Accepted Dash's apology as a friend, realized she was (at least partially) in the wrong for the hurtful words she said to Dash, and was happy to move on.
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Yup! That's on me, I should've caught those in the editing process. I sowwee and iz sad now.
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Seriously? If you believe that I've got a bridge to sell you. Better yet, try using that term in any actual situation where, if accurate, would spell disaster. There was no deliberate malice at ALL. You've got a frisky and ignorant (yes, Dash is ignorant in that she literally doesn't know any better) pegasus with both intimacy (emotionally) issues and social awkwardness. Call it what you will, but the fact that she's oblivious to her own feelings and to Twilight's proves it. She was trying to sort the confusion out in her head and honestly thought he was trying to help her best friend. Where is there deliberate malice?
RD is displaying signs of someone/pony who is emotionally scarred and vulnerable. She has her own confusing feelings and fools around with Twi because it makes her feel better by transferring this confusion to a substitute (quite literally in this case, being another Twilight) and is only trying to assuage her own fears and feelings that seem to be unknown/reciprocated by Twilight. Whereas Twilight is a victim of the world in the sense of social awkwardness, lack of experience, and seclusion, Dash is a victim of her own mind who is honestly only trying to do right by Twilight. Twilight is smart and she knows this, is it any wonder she'd accept her apology?
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Okay everypony, let me repeat everything.
I wrote that part and I still think that I wrote it right.
There is no victim or whatsoever, stop imagining things!
The situation I threw both in is just a small heat up for later chapters, you should know that Twidash.
And with that this discussion is over, please!
6293079 thnx td4evr for understanding as I limit myself from people so that they don't know me at all and I delivery my course so that I do t get seen by people I know but thnx
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6294326 Let me sum it up this way. What's been depicted here (IMO) is wrong in the same way that The Canterlot Wedding was wrong and triggered that huge fan kerfuffle. Only worse, because I think the damage caused by direct, personal attacks of this nature are being vastly underestimated. It doesn't help that Dash and the human characters never once get called out on their errors, when they're the primary instigators of the problems.
Anyway, I understand that it wasn't the authors' intents to portray things the way I'm reading them, but unfortunately that's the reading I got from it. I'll shush now.
I like the fourth Indiana Jones yes being able to survive a nuclear bomb by hiding in a fridge is impossible but so is using a raft as a parachute is equally so Shia LaBeouf was annoying but that was the kid from the second movie was worse and are aliens really all that unbelievable compared to half the stuff in Indiana Jones. and as far as Star Wars goes can we please skip two and three as well and watch the despecialized versions of 4-6 .......
This is all for my Lucas rant.
Ah, Twilight is finally opening herself to it.
I forsee many akward situations. 8D
Akward and hillarious. X)
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Why is the topic of whether or not Hitler did or did not attempt to exterminate a race of people even being talked about? Why don't we leave our personal prattles to ourselves, yeah? It's a story about ponies and humans fucking. It's ludicrous to think anyone is arguing about anything at all in the comments right now.