Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Wow, rainbows still as abrasive as ever i see. One would think she'd treat her gf better.
I wonder what's happening on the equestrian side.
Its interesting seeing the differences between the human and pony pairs.
Was the ecchi/fan service feel of this chapter iintentional?
New chapter ! !!!!!
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She might be dating Twi, but she's still Rainbow
Intentional? More of a taste of what's to come lol (Mature and sex tags are on purpose)
The thing I could get from the double rainbow conversation was 'Come join the dark/lesbian side, we've got cookies!'
Heh, Rainbow turned bi-curious and butting heads with herself, also, epic foreshadowing on Rainbow's part, 'make out with pony self' and all, looking towards the future as the day keeps getting weirder.
Now... let's all play nice children and tell Twi what happened while she was out flower shopping.
This story officially is my number 1 to watch now. I love TwiDash, and you are awesome at writing it.
You're not wrong...
Also, is it just me, or was there a lot of commas that seem to be missing? (sorry to nitpick)
I checked on this story only an hour ago, no chapter four, and then I look at the feature box and bam! It's featured again!
Is it bad that after this chapter I kind of don't want RD and Twilight (the pony versions) to get together, just to be different from their human selves?
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'Come join the dark/lesbian side, we've got
cookiestacos!'Fixed it for you
6159473 To be fair though, I'm pretty sure it's many (not all) people's assumption that if scientists/authorities get a hold of something 'alien', then the object (espescially if it's a living creature) runs the risk of being dissected,
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Now we only need Sonata and THEN we can complete the joke.
Don't you just hate it when characters are super dense?
I do.
But damn it makes for a good read.
Soooooooo I thought I had this chapter figured out, and when RD and Twilight started going at it, I was SURE of it. Thennnnnnnnnn they got pissed. I was totally expecting some sort of revelation and the two to quite literally "come together." Stupid suspense...
good enough for me.
This reason is not good enough for me, but i can´t deny that it would be possible.
6159657 that's probably the secret to being a good writer, make your readers both love and hate you at the same time.
Hell yeah. Really liking how this story is turning out.
Another good chapter. Waiting for the next...
This. Is. GLORIOUS!!!
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Seconded! Also Dash just accept that you like her. You'll be happier when you do!
Came here for clop, stayed, because it's fucking awesome
okay, i want to say first, that i do enjoy this story, but it's a bad romance, lol. granted, i realize that sounds mean, but i don't know, i just don't "feel" the tension, the buildup in earlier chapters was a little bit more natural than this, i don't know what to even suggest, i am not a genius or anything when it comes down to romantic comedy. even so, i find this to be more worthy as a comedy than a natural romance story, and if this is part of your goal, then you have it on the right track.
there are times it can be rather cheesy, and sort of plays on the tropes of the characters, rather than fleshing them out beyond what we know from the show. i have seen a handful of stories in which through elaborate writing expressions, managed to paint a full emotional pastel scene, but in this, there is a lot of simple back and forth dialog, with not much more than words like "smile, chuckle, laugh, frown", and when we do finally get stuff like "a tear rolls down her eye" it feels almost out of place.
so yeah, the romance and drama are a bit weak, but this story makes up for in funny witty moments, though sometimes cheesy humor, it is still a fun series and i hope that you are having fun writing it as well
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Twi and rainbow are already in a set, loving relationship. They won't really be romance as far as those two go, while they're still growing as a couple, they aren't really romancing one another. As far as twilight and dash go, this is more of them seeing what life could be like for them if they got together. Literally seeing through the looking glass.
It's more of a comedy cheesy sex story with some romance :)
Decided to follow this randomly, not regretting it in the least.
Interested in seeing where things go next.
6160761 i know, i just wasn't 100% sure what your goal was, but i think i get it, and it's a fun story ~hugs~ i wait in anticipation for your next chapter
Unless human!Dash is stupid, what would be she question what foals were? I'm pretty sure she should understand what Twilight means when she says 'have foals'.
6160866 More... seeking clarification then a legitimate question.
Besides, I don't know anyone that cannot claim to have asked a dumb question before.
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Good. Good!
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She never actually answered the question. In fact, she would have only made it more confusing. Now she definitely doesn't know where alicorns came from.
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True but her question wasn't where alicorns came from but what Twilight was.
And based on the context of the conversation afterwords she knows Twilight wasn't born an alicorn and that she became one after finishing a spell that not even Starswirl was able to finish.
Sponsored by Satan.
This story has been waaay better than I was expecting. You've got the characterisation down pat.
Im not sure Ive ever read such a brilliant portrayal of Twilight and Rainbow Dash,
The characterisation is perfect.
Keep it up
The story is amazing, and my god... That... That cover art... Ish.. ISH SO ADORABU
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Thanks
While Twi was gone, Rainbow tried to rape Dash. That's what the whole last scene looked like.
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"Tell her this only looks bad!"
lol
Ugh, forced relationships...
If Twilight and Rainbow Dash declare their love for each other, just because they saw their alt selves doing it and were isolated from any other ponies by a dimensional mishap, I will be rather disappointed.
Twi and Rainbow's relationship is pretty awesome though.
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Well, as I'm working on ch 11 and they're still not together, It might be a little early to worry about Twilight and Dash just falling for each other for no reason lol
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Don't worry, I trust that you recognize that Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie are the One True Pairing.
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LOL
Best joke I've heard all day!!!
6161780 And 6 likes on your comment lol
So far, I think that fic is really cool !
Full of laugthers and feelings. And it's pretty original to, I'd never seen something like that before ! I think it's a very good idea.
I will continue to read with pleasure !
6174941 Thanks! I drop a new chapter every Thursday.
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We don't take kindly to your kind in these parts.
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Hey!!! He's intitled to his wrong opinion. lol
6,666 Words in this chapter.... that had to be intentional right?
She's so innocent.
It's a sign of 'Destiny Fulfilled'.
The same thing happens to human women when they ovulate.
Mmoving on!
You're not very bright, are you Rainbow Dash?
Going commando in public, otherwise it's just pointless.
In colder climate they also keep you warm. Even if you have a hairy body, it might not be enough.
All comedy is at someone's expense.
Sucks to be her.
Tsundre.
Whoo! Pics or it never happened.
She's the product of the Writers needing another Princess.
She forgetting the Night Pony equivalents: Nightwalkers, Saberhorns and Bat Ponies. Then there are the Little Alicorns who's magic is fueled by love and can change their shapes, I think Celestia see them as a threat to her own power and banished them before spreading nasty propaganda about them.
If she grew up with her Mommy she could have slept in a Princess sized bed whenever she was scared at night.
It sounds like Rainbow is pressuring her into a relationship.
Is it getting hot in here or something?
Big Mac, Soarin, Breaburn, Celestia's guards, the stallions you saved in Mare-Do-Well, Filthy Rich, Carrot Cake, Joe Donut, Shining Armor, Bulk Biceps, Thunderlane, Trenderhoof, every stallion at the Rainbow Falls Trade convention...That's a lot of good stallions she's forgetting.
Can I have her then?
Dash wants to go home and not be stuck in this world.
<big smile>Wait, she just got out of the shower. False alarm.
Yes Mom.
Well, I just got proof that I'm reading this when I should be asleep (and yet I'm gonna continue reading). My cross-reference obsessed brain ticked over into "find matches at any cost" mode.
(As soon as the bit about something stinking (human Rainbow's feet) was joined by a mention of a foot locker, my brain pulled up George Carlin's "and it turns out to be... one of those farts that would strip the varnish off a foot locker".)
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6556642 Rainbow think of herself as the most awesome and skilled at flying. She just admitted that she think of Twilight as her magic equivalent.