Accidents happen even to the best of us, after all, that's why they're called accidents. Yet they can change your life in ways you've never imagined.
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Well then.
I think this is the sweetest not in that way, dammit clop I've ever read.
Take my favourite. TAKE IToh, wait, I already put this in favourites...
Even though this story has been about sex for some chapters now, I really enjoyed this chapter mainly because Pony Twilight and Dash finally had a thing. Funny, I'm normally a Twixie fan, not a Twidash, but this story really made me start to love the couple
If I could favorite again, I would do so, but alas, a comment will have to do
Muh eyes! The feels! They Haunt Me! I was hoping for a stereo-typical Mexican Viewing them Through a tinted glass window
I was about to go to sleep, but then you uploaded this chapter. Damn you, you magnificent person for this amazing story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Aww, so sweet...
“PG stuff?” Dash asked.
“Softcore, not the really
“Wait… what happened while we were in class?” Twi asked. She hadn’t heard this part of the story yet.
I think you're missing something here, this bit doesn't seem to make sense....
That was amazing.
I can say nothing more. I can think of no better way to describe it.. It was amazing.
6388246 Dammit!!
I have no idea why it does that, but sometimes, when it auto-loads from google docs, it leaves out a sentence or two.
This is the first time it cut out part of a sentence though. Good eye, it should have said:
Corrected.
Finally some pony action! Yeah!
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You can only like once, but you can favourite as many times as you are willing to make individual shelves for.
panties
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This was an incrdible chapter, and if these next long chapters are anything like this one, I'm more impatient than ever for the next installment.
I think that this chapter did it; this might be the best TwiDash romance I've ever read.
FINALLY
And then twilight teleported them back and a great hotel bill was avoided.
Good work, keep it up!
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Sorry it took so long, had to... break Twilight into it lol
A lot more coming.
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That's Rainbow's idea actually lol
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corrected... did it twice actually... du'h
6388431 heh, maybe i should start reading the chapters as they are previewed
6388431 I totally understand, and I'm totally happy with the result. The build up was worth it.
this was a sweet chapter
Erm, unless her eyes have moved to her feet, she can't watch the sunset from that angle(after all, the sun sets in the west). Her feet are pointed towards the sunset, and if she's on her back all she'll see is the sky(or Twi). And for that matter, Twi can't watch it from that angle either, she's facing east too, it'll already be dark that way. So, neither of them can see the sunset from that way since their feet are pointed towards it.
The only way Rainbow could was if she awkwardly craned her neck to look around Twi, which would probably hurt after a bit and they wouldn't be able to snuggle while doing so.
This makes me wish I was Canadian, so I could get my feels checked for free. Goddamn this was cute. Hot as fuck too, but mostly extremely cute.
Can't wait for the next one
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Bravo! The feels were too much!
I wonder if that's the magical signature that's going to be traced.
6388499 Twi was the one that really watched it, Rainbow lifted her head to see only when it started to really get good.
Besides being my fav ship, I have to say that this is the most effort I've ever seen put into building a relationship in any of the stories I've read. And the clop only accentuates it. It's not there just for the sake of clop, but part of the story and the emotion behind it. I love it and I don't think I'll ever find anything to top this. This has even been inspirational to me; helping me understand what I need to do in my own writings. For that I thank you and I wish you well.
That was great Sexy and sweet at the same time The build was great when it was don it made it all the better Now on a serious note I'm pretty sure the amount of magic that just happened might be all the signiture that the older Alicorns needed. Hopefully it will be a few days before they can triangulate though I still want to see the pony Twilight and Human Rainbow get some one on one time I mean it is only fair because Dash and Twi had that twice so far granted one was because Twi just couldn't hold any more and it hurt I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
And FIN.
That is all :)
6388386 They get longer and more intense. Also. I think I'm slipping because y'all keep finding all the edits I keep missing. Sorry!
The contrast between the raw sexuality of Rainbow and Twi, against the budding romance of Twilight and Dash lend this story an extremely enticing dynamic.
I find the prospect of how the relationship of the humans will grow beyond its current standings interesting. Will it be about Rainbow's increasing displays of vulnerability? Or maybe Twi's willingness to be more open to new experiences? And despite the Ponies being versions of themselves, how much will they be able to resist temptations to attempt to influence the rate of progression of Twilight and Dash's relationship.
Time will tell.
As for the Ponies. How much are they willing to let their human counterparts lead them? How much stock will Twilight put on the parallels of the human's early stages of their relationship? What will Twi's notes say? I'm assuming that observations being recorded by Twi will contain footnotes on emotional states expressed by 'Subject A' accompanying the physical reactions of Twi's experimentations.
Will the fact they are beginning a relationship under extremely close scrutiny of versions of themselves that have been precisely where they are now adversely effect the nature of their union?
I really dunno.
Maybe I'm flamin' way off and it's just all about the rootin'.
Bring on the culminating four way!
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You're actually almost spot on. Not only will Dash and Twilight's relationship be affected by the girls (How could it not be?) But Twi and Rainbow's relationship is continuing to develop into new territories as well.
In addition... there were 2 things that happened in this chapter, they were (somewhat) subtle that will have lasting implications going forward.
And as usual, when dealing with Rainbow, or Dash for that matter, there's always room for the occasional monkey wrench.
The dichotomy and similarities between them has been rather interesting to write, much of it has developed on its own.
Expect things to get better and worse at the same time lol.
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You'd be more than welcomed!
Half expected this to turn into "Believe in the me that believes in you."
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Step One: Create new Bookshelf
Step Two: Name it Favorites
Step Three: ????
Step Four : Add this story to it, and repeat
Step Five : Profits.
I love this story!!! I already started printing it out so I can keep it
um... sure... well... dammit, i feel bad for not checking my email last night, lol...
i honestly, just, idk... let's just say it's good and move on, i have a thought, but i doubt it really matters, this is good enough as is, and i know why you wanted this in, but i can't honestly think of a better way to word it without diminishing the humor you intended, so i stamp this as "okay"
Did you mean to say that she's scratching Dash's ear, or does she have both hands on Rainbow's head?
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Should'a been Dash, good eye, corrected, thanks!
This is the FOE of Row-clop(romantic clop). It warm my heart and hardens my... Well never mind that.
Twilight should know what sunburn is, since it is not an unknown thing in Equestria.
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Yup, that happened.
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Wait, Tank died? How? Tortoises are supposed to be among the longest living animals around!
If memory serves, aren't they now almost completely broke? What, with the hospital and now the hotel, didn't they say they had only like four hundred?
Keep going! ;)
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Yep, they got like 80 bucks left (If I remember correctly) to last a week. (nowhere near enough)
And yes Tank died for human Rainbow.
temporarily
I could have sworn I posted on last Thursday but I am so excited for tomorrow.
6409159 Tomorrow is gonna be a good one :)
The feedback so far is very positive, I look fwd to reading your thoughts
"Luna de miel"
That was a very cute chapter anyway !
Yus!
I think that an egghead like Twi would know that CFC's, or Chlorofluorocarbons, were the main cause of ozone depletion.
CO2 is supposedly responsable for global warming by acting as a "greenhouse gas," basically allowing heat and light into our atmosphere and trapping it there. None of this is proven with any degree of certainty, of course.
6429354 Well, you know, when a hypothesis completely dominates the entirety of the peer-reviewed literature in the field for the past 20 years it usually is considered to have "a reasonable degree of certainty". Your comments on CFCs are on the money, but the human CO2-global warming connection is, at this point, beyond reasonable doubt.
6397161 O_O
Well then...
I almost lost interest in this story because it was nothing but just lusty sex. This chapter renewed my interest.
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You REALLY had to use that didn't you?
I will NEVER understand what the fascination is with "magical horn-cum". It makes ZERO sense and lord forbid me using this term in a story about fictional pastel colored ponies but: IT'S THE MOST UNREALISTIC THING I'VE EVER ENCOUNTERED IN THIS FANDOM!
That aside, good chapter.