Who is Derpy's mother? She doesn't remember anything except for a voice and a song, sung the night she was left alone at the footstep of the orphanage. History only repeats itself, and Derpy does the same to the daughter that she loved dearly, Dinky. Now, haunted with memories of the past, Derpy embarks on a journey for answers. What prevails in the end, motherly love or the truth?
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Edit: I forgot to put this in originally; the story is based off of this song from Futurama: Link
The actual song, including artist, etc. is here: Link
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If anyone wants to take this over and edit it, please do so. Declare it as yours once you're done, I know it needs a good round of editing and I'm to lazy to do it and will miss a lot, so if you want to edit, please do this one. I'll officially declare the story as yours once you do.
This is amazing. You are amazing. I was like
when Chyrsalis appeared but i caught the error too. Very well done
621959 Thank you very much. I was worried about this one, I'm glad you liked it.
What a sad and sweet story.
(I almost wrote 'song'. The mistake is understandable given the plot...
)
Er, is this the song from the episode of Futurama "Lethal Inspection?"
631970 Yes it is, the story is inspired from it. I forgot to put that in the description, sorry.
630322 Thank you. The mix-up is very understandable.
632301 Yay! One of my favourite songs mixed with one of my favourite ponies! Here, take this like that I found!
5/5
633102 Thank you, I never got 5/5 before.
633505 I rate on how a story makes me feel, and there was much feeling done while reading this.
Why hasn't this got more views?! It took about an our to read but it was worth it!! It genuinely made me cry. But then again, I adore Derpy.
Why hasn't this got more views?! It took about an our to read but it was worth it!! It genuinely made me cry. But then again, I adore Derpy.
704539 I do tend to write a bit too much in my stories, so sorry about the length. And thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
706206 No! The length was good!! I really enjoyed it!
Lol u said "with spear in her HAND" ponies don't got hands.