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Lover of the Light

This story is a sequel to Comeback Story

After spending the day reading the newest work of Honest Flemingway, a young colt is pulled back into reality with giant smack in the face, rejection.

Entry for the Random Fanfiction Contest

And Prequel to Comeback Story

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Europa

Europa #1 · May 31st, 2015 · 1 · ·

Short, but sweet and mysterious. Old-Speak Chryssy is unbearably cute in my mind.

Perteks

Perteks #2 · May 31st, 2015 · · ·

Thats interesting for sure

LyraAlluse

LyraAlluse #3 · Jul 1st, 2015 · · ·

I like that Queen Chrysalis is in more of a good role in this story. It was a fun read.

Solar Twirl

Solar Twirl #4 · Jul 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Hmm...

Interesting, I'd say. I'll give you a list of things I liked, and things you could have changed up a bit.

Good Things
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1) Chrysalis was a good character.
2) Accurate character portrayal.
3) I like the flying lesson, but you could have gave it more heart.
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Changing, or rather Change-ling
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1) The "Ye Olde" kind of speak, eh?
2) The story was fast-paced, and kind of all over the place.
3) It was good, don't get me wrong, but the ending was slightly rushed.

Sinclare

Sinclare #5 · Jul 12th, 2015 · · ·

6161811 Okay, I understand. Thanks for the help! But the one thing I would not change for all the views in the world is the archaic speech. I understand that people have a hard time reading it because that is not the way we speak now. But I added it because I love beauty of it. I hope you understand. And thank you again.

Solar Twirl