Elisabeth had it rough not only does she not age but she saw everyone die before her eyes. it was not easy for her she had to move forward with her 'curse' she had for along time. she still remembers her past that she wants back but she is to blame no one else. what will await her this week and so on, after she accepts a job from a person she doesn't even know.
ps: under reconstruction
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First, you didn't capitalize someone's name. Second, you misspelled Twilight.
How did you manage to misspell Tirek as Terk?
Just looking at the short description, why would I want to read this if it ruins its first impression so spectacularly?
You've failed so spectacularly in the descriptions and with your chapter lengths that you've earned a downvote from me before I even started reading. Your understanding of fimfiction conventions, narrative conventions, and the f***ing English Language is so poor that I don't even want to see what you've written.
Lurk more, post less. And for God's sake, look at fimfiction's editing guide.
? im lost.
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C'mon! The Terk incident! media3.giphy.com/media/6DQcsdmRUIlWw/200_s.gif
if you want to make a story on here, there is an unspoken rule that everybody expects the author to follow. each chapter has to be at least 1,000 words long. or else it turns people away when they see the 332 word chapter. you would only do that if you're making poems.
sorry still new at this i will try to think about rewriting it in the near future thinks for telling me those things that need to be fixed plus I'm pretty bad at spelling :b i also kinda rush the story and tryed to fix it guess i still need to work with this one