The Human Changeling

by doomcody

My past revealed

After we all got back to Twilight's home “we took a different way so I don't freak anypony out” and got something to eat I started to tell them about my past, and what I use to do for a living before coming here. I told them about the incident that led me to change my form that, and when I figure out that I would not age thinks to the spell being a healing spell it would not even let me be “harmed” by father time and how I got my two jobs as well why I acted in the first place at the end Fluttershy was the first to speak.

“ oh you poor thing “ she said and gave me a huge an that help me calm down my nerves after telling my life story to them. " you had it really bad."

“so that why I saw you all hurt Elisa” twilight ask wide eye with tears coming out. All I did was node.

“ It also because all my traumas that I suffered I tried everything to get over them but nothing work I would have ended my life if I could but this curse” I said pulling down my shirt showing them the mark I have from the spell and twilight got closer to see it better.

“I've never seen a mark like this it's not in any books” twilight said and I nodded even though I know it is not a mark that's anypony been seen before.

“I know but I feel allot better coming clean about my past” I said happy finally having someone know me for real as I turn into a 7 year old girl.

“Hey nightshade why did they call you by that you're “friends?” pinkie pie said then became nervous after everypony except me was glaring at her for asking that question.

“oh that's easy its because I love being outside, and awake at night looking up at the stares and sleeping most of the day” I said to pinkie who seem to have some plan for me soon but I dismissed it feeling like she harmless.

“So this is what you really look like?” Twilight and Rarity both said at the same time when I revealed what really I look like a 7 year old look girl.

“what else can you do” Rainbow dash asked before I said any thing I saw a look on Twilight's face that said she was carious as well as she grab some paper and quells.

“ I can use invisibility spells” I said as I disappear and appear right behind Rainbow dash while yelling boo.

“aaahhhhh” screamed Rainbow dash jumping up scared. “ I wasn't scared just surprised” as she saw and heard me laughing.

“oh ya I almost forgot this is spike.” twilight said showing me her dragon assistant who seem nervous to see me but tried to play cool.

“ Hi I am her NUMBER 1 assistant.” he said boasting about his statics. Then he yawn he must be tiered.

“ I think it's getting late” I said as I just notice that it was getting dark out and we all started walking to the door but I change into a pony version of my self. Then out of nowhere a loud noise like a cannon firing followed by a bunch of confetti and pinkie pie yell “surprise!” the moment I steeped out side.

“how whe did you “ I stammer as trying to figure out how she did that when I just told her what I was like.

“That's pinkie pie for you she never fails to surprise anypony with a party out of nowhere” they all said as pinkie was coming up to me and the others with a cupcake.

“I was wandering Elisabeth way are y'ah a pony?” Applejack asked looking at my new pony form with a curious look.

“How would you think everypony would react if I look like my normal self?” I said and the others thought it was a good ideal since nopony had seen me yet by pure luck. As I gestured to all the ponies that are out even at night.

As the party went on till after what I thought was hours Twilight and I did some star gazing and ask about over a thousand questions if it wasn't for pinkie pie wanting to experience being invisible I would have “died” of boredom. Everyone laughed when pinkie appeared behind Applejack and fired a party cannon out of nowhere ( not at A,J ) it was funny for everypony except Applejack who wanted to get back at her but knows that’s impossible.

“ This is so much fun” I said then after the party and everypony help clean up we had a sleep over at twilight's. I can't wait tell tomorrow!!!!!!

Author's Note:

i don't know if i should continue or just end it plus if i do I'm still thinking of how i do have an ideal but still working on it

Comments

[wille179]

You've failed so spectacularly in the descriptions and with your chapter lengths that you've earned a downvote from me before I even started reading. Your understanding of fimfiction conventions, narrative conventions, and the f***ing English Language is so poor that I don't even want to see what you've written.

Lurk more, post less. And for God's sake, look at fimfiction's editing guide.

[Shocks]

6066992

But before the Terk incident.

C'mon! The Terk incident! media3.giphy.com/media/6DQcsdmRUIlWw/200_s.gif

[Skalula7]

if you want to make a story on here, there is an unspoken rule that everybody expects the author to follow. each chapter has to be at least 1,000 words long. or else it turns people away when they see the 332 word chapter. you would only do that if you're making poems.

[doomcody]

sorry still new at this i will try to think about rewriting it in the near future thinks for telling me those things that need to be fixed plus I'm pretty bad at spelling :b i also kinda rush the story and tryed to fix it guess i still need to work with this one