in this story i will pray till about a little girl after switching with a genie will be having a bit of a tough time adjusting will she go mad or will she make new friends.
read and find out.
i may add stuff to the story later on to fix it up if mistake were found.
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I'll just be honest, I don't think I can read this. So i'll just.. Leave. :\
The only reason why i am not sure if it is a good thing that she can´t hurt anyone, is because she probably doesn´t even can defend herself, or help if someone is in danger right? I mean she could not try to attack a Villain.
I noticed some words that are wrong, which language do you speak? just curious, i wanted to show you one example, but i didn´t found that word again.
I don´t want to call it bad, but till now it is nothin special.
6237344 i speak English and think you for telling me i am just bad at spelling so this helps allot
>> Kuno rude
if its bad just say so.
FYI that's no 'random genie girl', that's Shantae from the titular series of handheld games. She is amazing, this is not.
No
I will say this now... You need to brush up on your grammar.
A lot.
This does not mean you are a horrible author. I have seen many people with great concepts fail due to the age old problem of grammatical proficiency. I would give you a pass for this. I will not give you a pass for horrible execution. Do us a favour. You know that guide at the top of the 'Create story'? Read it. ALL OF IT.
Thank you.
One word; EDITOR!!!!
Ooh, interesting Idea. Will keep reading.
~The Great Zoroark
This hurt my brain to read.
more please!
what gonna happen next chapter?
6501811
well i am thinking of having play out near the fruit bat thing but i am right now lost of how to go with it
PS : i may not be able to continual this until another sorry
i just going slow because i rush thing and bad at spelling and yes this story will be with Zecora 
6520946 great chapter my friend can't wait for more
7 long years SEVEN