Hi I am Elisabeth but most people call me “Nightshade” for the fact that they mostly see me at night and well here's a little secret. I have an uncanny ability to change what I look like and if you guys or should I say ponies had not realized yet I am not on earth anymore the thing is I had a good life with theses powers that I got by practicing magic but it went wrong. I did in fact wake up with a symbol that was in the center of my chest and tried to translate it but I failed.
I am the type that is always trying new things mostly magic and had a lot of time since I learned magic at a young age. I made spells for cleaning cooking reading and seeing what is on others minds, And yes I did screw up most of those and got badly hurt but they turnout fine in the end.
Well anyway when I was trying to fix a broken arm and leg that will be explained in the story I didn't know what went wrong but after a week my body heal. I started to find out what happen I could change my form at will. First I was terrified of it and I found out it is permanent.
So I tried to do stuff like help people and do it my way. I do admit the power went to my head and did allot of bad thing since, my life lasts a lot longer than humans I've outlive all my friends and that what broke me then a being that I didn't know she called her Celestia and she wanted to help, and “NO” she was not in pony form she was in a human one. I did not believe her and well tick her off a little and that is why, and how I am in Equestria and this is my story and how it begins and then ends. or does it?
First, you didn't capitalize someone's name. Second, you misspelled Twilight.
How did you manage to misspell Tirek as Terk?
Just looking at the short description, why would I want to read this if it ruins its first impression so spectacularly?
? im lost.