• Published 3rd May 2015
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Birthday Surprise - Harmony Split



It's Luna's birthday and Twilight is invited to participate. After getting some help, she's got something planned for the princess. Will her plan succeed or fail?

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MORE!!!!!!!!!!!:raritystarry:

5935868 It does rather beg for a sequel, doesn't it?

Whipped cream, yummy! Hot, naughty pony-lesbians, covered in whipped cream and lick it from each other, I love it! Didn't expected cream play with Luna and Twilight. I always think that Celestia into it. Anyway, Twilight gave Luna a best birthday present ever. Will be there a sequel? Mabe with threesome? You already know that I am a big fan of twilunestia. More whipped cream, more cute cream play!

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Since ya all are asking that nice.
Yes, there will be more at some later time.
Sadly, I'm not really into that threesome pairing.
I'm more strictly onto the TwiLuna Rail.
Expect Twilight's Birthday somewhere end this month/next month

I could do more TwiLuna like this... As long as you keep it just between the two of them.

PHR

To be honest, I didn't expect a quality story and quality clop squeezed into less than 4000 words.

On the other hand, a box of Nestle Smarties is likewise evanescent, but delicious and memorable — just like this story.

Well done, Scratch. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Comment posted by Melody Knight Shadow deleted Dec 1st, 2015

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Seriously, what the Buck is wrong with you?
Your comment is unneeded and I don't care if you hate me.
I write what I want and like :pinkiehappy:

6684821 I am sorry that was a dick move of me and I hope you can figure me for my Rude comment I fell like a jack ass for that comment please for give me :twilightsheepish: so ya if you can forgive me that would be great and again I am really sorry

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Kk.
Just think please before posting a comment

6686381 wow, the story was awesome! the plot itself was hard to guess, it really lighten up my week! :pinkiehappy:

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