One chapter. Sorry.

See Twilight.

See Twilight reading a book.

See Twilight reading a book slowly.

See Twilight still reading the book.

See Twilight look up.

See Twilight see you.

See Twilight scowl.

See Twilight scowl and her horn glow.

See Twilight’s house.

See Twilight’s house with a now broken window.

See the sky.

See a pink cloud blot out the sky.

See Pinkie Pie.

See Pinkie Pie drag you.

See Pinkie Pie drag you as she speaks.

See Pinkie Pie say something.

See Pinkie say you’ll be fine.

See Sugarcube Corner.

See a chair.

See a table.

See a table with a cupcake on it.

See the crumbs of this cupcake.

See Pinkie Pie.

See Pinkie Pie as she smiles.

See Pinkie Pie as she smiles because of your compliment.

See Pinkie Pie hug you.

See Pinkie Pie hug you and your bruised ribs.

See Pinkie look concerned.

See Pinkie with bandages.

See Pinkie with no bandages.

See Rarity.

See Rarity gasp at the mummy.

See Rarity shake her head.

See Rarity grab the bandage.

See Rarity grab the bandage and drag you.

See Carousel Boutique.

See Carousel Boutique's door.

See Rarity.

See Rarity apologize.

See Rarity apologize for the door.

See Rarity grab a pair of scissors.

See Rarity use the scissors.

See Rarity use the scissors to cut the bandages.

See Rarity help undress you.

See Rarity blush.

See Rarity go into the back.

See the interior of Carousel Boutique.

See the nice pony mannequins.

See the nice pony mannequins that stare at you.

See Rarity come back.

See Rarity come back with new clothes.

See Rarity come back with new clothes for you.

See Rarity give you the new clothes.

See a suit.

See a silk suit.

See a silk suit on you.

See Rarity.

See Rarity smile.

See Rarity smile at you.

See Rarity rub your arm.

See her frown when you stop her.

See you pet her.

See Rarity beam at you.

See Rarity wave you goodbye.

See Carousel Boutique.

See the outside of Carousel Boutique.

See Ponyville.

See a Ponyville street.

See a Ponyville street with ponies.

See a Ponyville street with lots of ponies.

See Roseluck.

See Roseluck smile at you.

See Roseluck wave you over.

See Roseluck ask you about flowers.

See you point at roses.

See Roseluck grab the roses.

See Roseluck wrap the roses.

See Roseluck wrap the roses and hand them over.

See Roseluck smile at you.

See Roseluck frown.

See Roseluck put out her hoof.

See Roseluck continue to hold out her hoof.

See Roseluck continue to hold her hoof out, scowling.

See Roseluck sigh.

See Roseluck look at you.

See Roseluck agree to a line of credit.

See Roseluck pull you in close.

See Roseluck pull you in close and threaten you.

See Roseluck let you go.

See a Ponyville street.

See a Ponyville street with ponies.

See a Ponyville street with less ponies than before.

See Bon Bon’s Sweet Shop.

See Lyra.

See Lyra trotting towards you.

See Lyra trotting towards you with stars in her eyes.

See the floor.

See the floor’s crack.

See the floor’s crack with a single beetle inside.

See the beetle within the crack chirp.

See the spinning of the room.

See Bon Bon.

See Bon Bon holding you.

See Bon Bon holding back Lyra.

See Bon Bon ask why you are here.

See Bon Bon watch your hand.

See Bon Bon nod.

See Bon Bon trot.

See Bon Bon trot with her tail still.

See Lyra trot.

See Lyra trot beside Bon Bon.

See Lyra’s tail swishing rapidly.

See something you shouldn’t.

See Bon Bon grab some chocolates.

See Bon Bon raise an eyebrow.

See Bon Bon stomp on Lyra’s tail.

See Lyra howl.

See Lyra howl and run out.

See Bon Bon hold her hoof out.

See Bon Bon hold her hoof out and not smile.

See Bon Bon scowl.

See Bon Bon scowl and put her hoof behind her head.

See Bon Bon’s hoof.

See the floor.

See the beetle again.

See the beetle chirp.

See the door.

See the door approaching quickly.

See a Ponyville street.

See a Ponyville street with ponies.

See a Ponyville street with lots of ponies.

See a Ponyville street with lots of ponies staring.

See a Ponyville street going by very quickly.

See Twilight’s castle.

See Twilight’s castle door.

See Twilight’s locked castle door.

See Bon Bon.

See Bon Bon very angry.

See Bon Bon raise her hoof.

See Bon Bon raise her hoof and yell.

See the ceiling of Twilight’s Castle.

See Bon Bon.

See steam coming out of Bon Bon’s muzzle.

See Bon Bon look up.

See Bon Bon look up and growl.

See Bon Bon yell.

See Bon Bon yell at another pony.

See Bon Bon stop yelling.

See Bon Bon stop yelling and mumble something.

See Bon Bon take some bits.

See Bon Bon turn away.

See Bon Bon trot away.

See Twilight.

See Twilight scowling.

See Twilight scowling and asking what you did.

See Twilight look over.

See Twilight look over at a box of chocolates.

See Twilight sigh.

See Twilight sigh and look in the other direction.

See Twilight sigh and look in the other direction, only to see roses.

See Twilight sigh and look in the other direction, only to see roses you bought from Roseluck.

See Twilight smile.

See Twilight smile with a tear in her eye.

See Twilight shake her head.

See Twilight help you up.

See Twilight hug you.

See Twilight sigh.

See Twilight sigh and explain about her book.

See Twilight smile.

See Twilight smile as you pet her.

See Twilight guide you upstairs.

See Twilight’s bedroom.

See Twilight’s bedroom and a giant white wall.

See Twilight pull out a paint roller.

See Twilight pull out a paint roller with orange paint on it.

See Twilight paint the wall.

See Twilight paint the whole wall.

See Twilight lay beside you.

See Twilight lay beside you and watch the wall.

See Twilight smile as you pet her.

See the wall.

See the paint drying on the wall.

Author's Note:

I hoped you enjoyed this, Happy April Fools, and support my brand of insanity here.

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Lady Lorelei

Lady Lorelei #1 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Ok for April Fools...

No it's not that the prank is bad or anything, just April Fools jokes have been lost on me since the year my Art Teacher Did a fake death prank.

I'm not kidding eithier...weirdest day ever-it bugs me to this day and it happened back when I was in the 8th grade.

I read this though took a few min- the spaceing made it hard to read after it kept going for a while- the white background started to hurt my eyes lol.

Now i'm just ranting- here have a Cupcake.

~Hands over Cupcake.~

And have a hoofs up!

Michael Hudson

Michael Hudson #2 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

5817050 Yay for a cupcake. Also, I know the feel. I'm a day late because of deep depression trying to get this fucker out gave me.

Cerulean Voice

Cerulean Voice #3 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Y'know, this was actually amusing in its own right. It gave me a few chuckles, particularly the bit about Roseluck.

Sorry the other version wasn't allowed, but this is a nice compromise.
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You can always change the background to be a little darker. There's lot of options.

TGM

TGM #4 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

7.8/10 too much seeing -IGN

Lady Lorelei

Lady Lorelei #5 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

5817056

Lol well it's out now!- that's the good part.

I know the feeling too trying to get things out at a certain time but can't, I'm already like two days late on a update but I just have soooo much to check out-to make sure it looks at least halfway decent and everytime I read through my work I see more and more mistakes.

But take a smile in that it's finished and not a frown that it took more time then you wished.

Michael Hudson

Michael Hudson #6 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

5817074 Yeah. Thank you.

Lady Lorelei

Lady Lorelei #7 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

5817061

Thx for the tip.

Fire__Wolf

Fire__Wolf #8 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

I laughed too much at the paint drying part

Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #9 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · ·

See something you shouldn’t.

Probably the best line.

This was, well, very different from what I usually see around here, and that's not a bad thing. That's not a bad thing at all. There's so much not said in this, and I like that. I like stories you have to think about. Stories that don't spoon-feed you everything like you're some kinda fool. This was very simply written, with barely any detail, but just enough to be able to piece together what's going on and why. I'm sad to see this got rejected before. It's rejections like that which stifle creativity by stomping out new ideas and experiments. Perhaps not new in this case, at least not in general, but it's fresh around these parts. I, for one, thought this was a very interesting read, and I had a lot of fun reading it. Nice work.

Michael Hudson

Michael Hudson #10 · Apr 4th, 2015 · · ·

5820114 Yeah. I've been told that some liked the fact that it ended up like this, but getting the one sentence per chapter style rejected hurt. *sigh* Thank you though. It means a lot that you enjoyed this so much.

Bootsy Slickmane

Bootsy Slickmane #11 · Apr 4th, 2015 · · ·

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Yeah, that's a terrible reason for rejection. There's no rule against only having one sentence per chapter, just like the previous story did. That was part of the original joke, part of the charm. I mean, yeah, it takes longer, but that's the point. It's slow. Oh well. At least you were able to get it out at all. For what it's worth, I still think it was a fun read, even if you couldn't maintain the style.

Michael Hudson