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"The worst case scenario with any good person, is when they go insane."
Luke is the first human in Equestria. However, Murphy's law comes in to play when some unexpected side effects of his arrival take play. Old doors reopen, old pains surface, and the truth is revealed. Twilight and all her friends are determined to help, however they can.
Friendship has been proven to truly be magical...
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Good job so far.
Its good.
This is a very powerful story that has given me a lot to think about
Man....it must be hard...having all of that inside you all those time...
The story is good, i really like how you wrote it though there was off feeling when i read a couple of sentence i guess?
all in all, good story. and the meaning and lesson from it. Keep up the work!
5844292 Thanks, the next chapter will be coming out possibly on the weekend, education just seems to slow down the writing process, but I'm determined to get it out soon...
I read the whole 1st chapter today and loved it. I felt like I could relate to it. It kinda made me think of the things I've gone through and are going through. Can't wait till there is more chapters.
I enjoyed that! I love deep thoughts in stories, especially about these subjects.
(Though I feel like it was a bit fast paced. But that might just be me.)
5846802 The second chapter might explain why the first chapter seemed fast pace... I hope your interested enough to keep reading and find out new info...
Thanks for the comment, I'm glad to hear people enjoy the story :)
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This actual feels good it was a nice slice of life that stands alone and if there's another chapter then hell I'm down for if.
I am intrigued and shall read when I feel more awake.
5934123 sleep is good, it is important...