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Kinari_23
Been writing for a few years, figured I post some old stuff for the community for feedback and possible improvement and future projects.
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I'll be blunt: you need an editor. It was okay other than the grammar mistakes, though.
I won't be downvoting, but I shan't be upvoting either.
Thank you, Lord Faggot! That feels really insulting to say, I'm sorry.
Dekkonot, I humbly agree with you. The truth is, this was written 2 years ago, and I like to believe I have improved ever since, but I still think I need more improvement to keep an eye out for my own errors. If I can find someone to assist me with my work, it'd be an a great boon so I can offer the community higher quality material. Thank you for not being negative and I appreciate you were upfront with your opinion. =)
I'd like to thank everyone who has favorited this. I honestly did not expect anybody to really enjoy it!
The thumb ups are a boost of confidence, the thumbs downs are within reason I assume, hopefully the next fic I publish will be more positively received!
Big thanks to the three followers too, I hope to bring something new to the table soon.
Honestly surprised at the number of down votes. I personally thought the story was quite good.
I am inclined to agree with others stating that an editor of some sort would be worthwhile. It would improve the readability significantly.
I think some of the downvotes are within reason. Maybe they simply don't like the concept or OC's paired with canon characters. It's their opinion and I don't oppose them.
I once again agree with the editor. Although this was written 2 years ago in two days for a friend, it doesn't excuse the mistakes. Thank you again for your compliments and input!
This story was dank. 10/10
can you put a link to the cover art?
Certainly, send me a PM if you haven't already found it.
No negative comments, please. This is not a self-insert-OC by any means. Of course, those who leave such comments are arrogant enough to think so because it's not themselves in my character's place and need to hate somehow instead of be supportive. He's apart of it per request, otherwise it would have been another canon character.
I'm not dead, by the way. Just very very very busy. Should be able to release something this summer, goodness knows I need to.