If Rainbow father died, that was hard to deal with. She knew that she had to cry in some point. But who will help her with it? And does she get over it, even for little?
I am now 21 (I was 12-13 y/o barely english-speaking kid) and I apologize to everyone who has ever read my stories :).
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Please fix the grammer/spelling and I will continue reading. You have SO much potential with this story, im not saying its bad but you could make the chapters ALOT longer. Not trying to be a hater just stating my opinion,okay.
Is English not your first language? If it's not, I can't really blame you because these are mistakes made when English is a second language. If it is, well... try to improve on your tenses.
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