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PonyStory
I am now 21 (I was 12-13 y/o barely english-speaking kid) and I apologize to everyone who has ever read my stories :).
PonyStory
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i like it and PonyStory is going to be more chapters for this story
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Yes there going to. Just working on one.
6023876 ok
I have a few problems with this story right now; pacing, grammar, and how the story is portrayed. Now don't be discouraged, it's just that it seems like you rushed the story just to say you wrote one. As for the grammar, get an editor, it can only help. For the portrayal, they start out making jokes (good), then they ask where they learned said jokes (still good), and finally, Rainnow spills her guts with no prompting or internal conflict (this is called lazy writing). I don't dislike the story, just nitpicking on the 'odd' things. Other than that, keep up the good work!
I now have the urge to hunt down these two and beat the living shit out of them for walking out on their daughter... Weird.
Yeah, so instead of going back to your daughter, that you left when she was only 9 years old, their excuse is that they were afraid of how she would take it?! These two shouldn't even be allowed to have children, like WTF?!?!?!!!!!!?!?!!!!!!!! (If you're able to make me this made, that means you're doing something right). Good job BTW.
Worst Story ever! EVERYTHINGW AS BULL**** she up and forgave them with out even getting mad seriously!!
She shoudl bucked her fatehr and moher hard! If they wanted to win hr over they should gone thru hella nd back not I"m sorry i abandoned you but we felt bad so everything ok.
REALITY CHECK, NOTHING IS OK! Tehre laws about abandoninga child that young!