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PonyStory


I am now 21 (I was 12-13 y/o barely english-speaking kid) and I apologize to everyone who has ever read my stories :).

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Gilda comes to Ponyville. She looked for Rainbow Dash. But that meeting ends with yelling and tears. And it will have good ending.

NB: Pretty much one day job. Didn't really looked for mistakes and so on. And it can not really logical. and most of these things what Gilda did is made up.

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Comments ( 7 )

The English language was butchered here today let's all have a moment of silence.................

Gilda still the best!

I don't remember Gilda trying to burn down Fluttershy's cottage.

If Fluttershy starts indict then things are got serious.

I just think I did wrong decision.

I should had listen you from beginning. I have forgiven you now.

I did wrong decision too, reading this... this...

Please... please tell me this is a trollfic.

5901780 I know I wrote this in a somewhere, but I just needed more things what Gilda has done to everyone, except jelling at Fluttershy and calling Rainbow Dash a flip-flop.

Is English your first language? I'm not trying to sound mean or condescending towards you, but it seems here like you need a lot of help with it. Not to mention plot, characters and story structure in general. I can help btw

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1) English is my second language
2) I started to learn this in class 2
3)I'm in class 6, so I have learned that like only 4 years
4) Even if I'm best of it in our class, I still need to learn.
5) How can you help me with it?
6) And you aren't mean :pinkiesmile:

Last time she saw her was then when she yelled at her at Pinkie Pie's party. And she called her a flip-flop.

So yeah, that's my review of this story.

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