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Conquest is already making a really angry!
This fics is a lot better than the nonsense it's based on, gg.
Holy Crap.
Holy Crap!
You're one creepy-ass mother, Rhymey.
HOLY CRAP!
Burn in the seven hells, all of you.
Seriously, what is up with Celestia and Leilani?
Damn. When you said they were going to the central prison planet I was hoping to see your take on Cerise.
This chapter was a mixture of the heartwarming and the nightmare-inducing, but you made it work.
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One must wonder if it occured to Celestia that any of the reasons she agreed to the Grand Ruler's alliance and marriage proposals was due to him mind controlling her...
You've outdone yourself! Great job! I'm glad to see poor Starla finally trying to get stronger! And I LOVE how Celestia tore into Grand Jackass! You know, if she finds out and can prove that she was mind controlled, that make technical treaty null and void. That's when the filthy will REALLY hit the fan! Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Wow, this is so pathetic, No one ever got drummed or drafted into Starfleet in my verse (everyone who joined joined by choice and under no obligation. They're even allowed to quit whenever they want to... again by choice)
Slight Editor's note: In the current chapter, I kinda accidentally let the misspelling of Dementia slide. That is my fault, I'm sorry. You see, I didn't bother looking up Mykan's spelling of names when I edited this, because I wanted to stay as far away from Mykanland as possible, so I let name misspellings slide because that is how I thought they should be spelled. The same goes for Inquirus.
In retrospect, Dimentia is probably a better spelling for her, because why in Surak's name doesn't Dementia have mind powers to go with her name?
PS: I also let Unicornian slide instead of Unicornicopian because in my thoughts, Unicornian is most likely their actual species name. That, and Unicornicopian sounds stupid.
PSS: I also want to say that if there are any design changes from Myky's verse, it's also my fault, because I most likely went with a completely different color scheme for each.
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Wait, you actually read this fic!?
Edit:That's right, you only read the comments.
Also, you never said if ponies could be drafted.
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What, "Nobody is drafted" isn't clear enough? and I'm not an Adolf, calling me that the way you do is no excuse, but you want more, here...
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/660097/lets-pick-on-me-mykan
http://www.chatzy.com/81136363955563
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Mylan I have asked you before to focus only on the fic and to leave my fans alone. I have asked you to please nor badger the ones who love this story.
Quite frankly I think it is very telling when the only cmoments you have given are on other people's comental rather than the fic in question. Now since you cannot be a big boy and respect others opions, you are blocked. If you have a problemishes with the important things like characters and the story, then kindly talk about it in a blog. Until then... please leave.
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You said nobody ever got drafted, not that they can't get drafted.
Stop being an ass, Adolf.
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While I see where you're coming from, I hope you don't make a habit of it purely because I think Dementia looks better. Dimentia looks...weird somehow, when its written down.
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Don't worry, I'll try not to make it happen again.
So what happened to Abra Kadabra? He just kinda disappeared after Trixie ditched him.
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He got raped by a boar that when trying to escape the battle stumbled upon him. And because Abra was an idiot who thought Starfleet had anything under control, he died with a big boar cock up his pooper.
My favorite part of this story is with Pinkie. You do a good job of making her sound like she is attractive. Also the part with the food fight and story was cute. I wonder if Artie is into her? They did seem to have some chemistry and he probably did need that towel over his lap in that scene...
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Yes, the bit was a reference to Digimon Adventure. I just that series so much, heck that's why Cheerilee is reading the first movie "Our War game" in one of the chapters.
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I'll admit, I love working with the Pink one myself. She has been really great so far to help with some of the themes of this story
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I know in an earlier chapter you worried about how you would depict how Pinkie would fight but I think you did a good job. Pinkie needs to be creative and if possible include some comic relief when possible. She also works really well predicting what the opponent will do and should have some excellent agility, speed, and more strength than you might think. Heck in the hoof ball episode I think it shows that when Pinkie does not over think it she can be more skilled in physical activities than you might think. Personally I think she is a great character to have everyone not think is great at fighting but she is actually far more skilled than you could believe (in many stores she is often one of the strongest in the group in a fight though she does not always fight in the standard way).
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ITs interesting you mention that Pinkie is the strongest, because I don't see many adventuring fics where Pinkie is busy kicking ass. Most of that action is given to Applejack, Twilight Sparkle, and Rainbow dash. Pinks is usually regelated to having fun and being silly. Actuall y the only one that comes close to Pinkie kicking ass with th best is "The Immortal Game."
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Yea she does kick some ass in that story but there are others...
Meet the team pony fortress 2 has Pinkie as the flame wielding Pyro. The Pyro is among the most feared in the entire story and there is also a twist here as well showing off even more skill in combat.
Brittle is a Sombra universe story but it has some good scenes of Pinkie being skilled, tough, and the comic relief.
As Twilight Falls has Pinkie being descended from a group of Ponies that were changed by Discord to be great warriors but went insane. This is how the story tries to explain Pinkie's crazy powers.
The Amultet of the King Fellowship of the Amulet has Pinkie as a funny but great warrior of the strider type.
This Platinum Crown has Pinkie as very silly but still manages to be a highly skilled duelist defeating some tough individuals (though her fighting does not happen until the middle and the end it is not often but what she does is great).
Pony Age Origins Pinkie is a stand in for Hawk and she is actually very skilled in combat while still not liking combat.
Pinkie and the Spy[/url has several scenes where Pinkie shows how her reality warper powers makes her one of the two most powerful of the Mane 6. Daylight Burning is the story before that and it has several moments that show how powerful she really is and how those in the know target her first to try to take her out because she would seriously mess anyone up that tries to hurt her friends (in a funny way of course).
Mare Do Well Regeneration has Pinkie starting out as Mare Do Well and she is a very skilled martial artist due to her Pinkie Sense.
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Dark Descent has Pinkie in her Pinkimena personality as extremely strong though of course violent.
Crisis Equestria has Pinkie with some of the most amazing powers filled with call outs to various games and TV shows (Pinkie pulls out the Buster Sword from FF7 for instance).
There is also a web comic by a person named Mauroz called Friendship is Magic and Pinkie is definitely one of the strongest there too and when she got trully mad when her friends got hurt she was frightening to her friends and enemies. I recommend this comic if you like Japanese style Manga characters and action stories (has a fun magical girl flavor to it).
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I have seen others as well but these are a few I have stored away in my folders. If you want more I can find some.
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Yes, please give me more, I need more awesome Pinkie, perferably in a PM...don't want to clog the comments
POST THE NEXT CHAPTER ALREADY!!!!! >:(
Aw! Great to see the ponies everyone usually despises getting moments of awesomeness like Zephyr Breeze and Lightning Dust.
War can bring out the worst in people...or sometimes the best.
I reckon when Rhymey comes back for Fluttershy, Angel ought to spring out and brain the mouthy little git!
Serves him right for forcing Flutters to abandon her pets.
7511859 Well, I've just had a thought...
He failed to keep Trixie in line and now she's a suspect in open rebellion.
I reckon Grand Gasbag would be none too pleased about that...
Just another thought, if I may.
An odious fellow like Steel Balls () makes me wonder if there are any other secondary Unicornicopians who more epitomise their callousness and single-mindedness than the major Starfleet members who are currently becoming more sympathetic (Barring Rhymey of course )
If I were you, I'd have Grand Crapbasket start relying more on a different Starfleet team of really unpleasant (And poorly named) individuals who he sends into missions when he needs something horrible done. A team who really don't make an effort to act like heroes and just enjoy hurting non-Unicornicopians, looking to show up Lightning Dawn and his team for hogging all the attention all these years.
It'd just add to the fact that Unicornicopia is still quite threatening in itself, despite their recent failures in the field. Gives the Umbra Circle a bit more work to do.
Is that an idea or a bit unnecessary?
Let me know what you think.
Just one last thing. Couldn't resist.
Our ears have been granted mercy!
Just realised how ironic it is that Zecora, the true mistress of rhyme and remedy, made the potion to block off Rhymey's cursed claptrap.
For the first time ever zephyr saved the day!
Not bad, although there's a problem with Cheerilee being the one who pulls Carrot top into the smoke, because in the scene, the hand that pulls her into the smoke was green. Cheerilee is purple.
Also, in some parts, the characters are described as having hands and hooves.
Just pointing that out.
As for the rest of the Chapter, it's nice to see that Fluttershy has gotten Rhymey out of her house. He treated her like some kind of toy.
As for Celestia getting angry at Celesto for creating an image of her that told Lightning Dawn that it was Twilight's fault she died, let's just say it makes more sense than Celestia herself blame Twilight for her own death.
And it appears Starla has learned that Starfleet's previous fights weren't what she thought.
Also, I do hope Lightning Dawn will finally tell everyone what really happened to Starla.