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Huh, I like this episode. Lower Decks type chapters/episodes are always fun to see. Give insight to the other characters in the story and their place and thoughts on things. I should do this type of thing for one of my own stories...
What? Only 19,000 words? Stop slacking off :)
Actually this was the perfect size to read on the bus home from work, so thank you very much for the end-of-week treat.
To be honest, I was kind of hoping that more of the story's mysteries were going to be unravelled here, but I quickly warmed up to the dossier format and it was nice to learn some new things about the Umbra Circle. I have to admit that Trixie was the only one who really stood out to me before now, but after this I think Lyra is probably my new fave.
I know you only wrote in the antelope bit to show the scope of the war, but it would be so, so deliciously ironic if the antelope prince was the one to finish this bastard off when all of this is over.
Although it would also suck to be Starla in such a scenario. Hmm...
I predict that at the end of the story Spark and Belle will re-unite to become Twilight again, thus disproving Spark's confident assertion that she is dead for good. Either that, or they'll become a new person, but combining will definitely happen.
If we hadn't seen his father (before Rhymey, y'know, murdered him) I'd suspect that Rhymey might be a golem or something with the way that the Grand Ruler can apparently use him as a conduit for his powers.
It was nice to see a reference to Serpentari's inspiration by making it a robot snake spaceship again.
And I just have to say
Ahh, dammit. Serves me right for writing so slowly.
Another great chapter. And I see that there is a new story up as well. I missed that the first time.
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Thanks. I was starting to feel like the b team weren't pulling their weight, so I wanted to give them their chance to shine. They are kind of like my personal Team JNPR or Red team.
To be honest, when I wrote this, I had to be careful because I was worried I might look like I was ripping you off.
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You should. IT, like you said, helps to world and character build. I also find, from a writer perspective, give you a chance to mess around with some side characters and gives you a chanc to look at your characters from another pov.
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If we both have the same ideas sometimes it just proves that they are good ideas (and natural ones, considering the source material); that said, are you pleasing to use Kitty Snip at all in the future?
Here's in an interesting fact (if you didn't already know): DC retconned Barry Allen's backstory that his mother was killed and that his father was convicted of the crime in order to give him more appeal as a character. The retcon was made by Geoff Johns, the creator of the Hunter Zolomon Reverse Flash. Kind of makes it even harder to make a good argument against that line, doesn't it?
On another note, have you ever thought about creating a Reverse Flash expy for this story?
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I know about the retcon (I'm up in air about it as Johns is one of my favorite writers in DC and Barry has been my Flash for ages, but I wonder if it doesn't hurt Barry a little by giving him something tragic and making Zolomon right.)
As for a reverse flash expy...maybe
Ah, deeper and deeper down the rabbit-hole.
I look forward to the moment Grand Ruler realises he's been played a fool by...let's face it, everyone with more than half-a-dozen brain cells.
Finally found out what happened to that imbecile, Abra. Seems I was right about Grand Gobshite being a little ticked off with him.
You're only second-rate, you creatively-bankrupt misogynistic whiner, and that's all you'll ever be!
I absolutely love Torch.
Ooh, that black dragon looks like trouble.
Ah, I've got Antelopia in my fic (Ancient Egypt counterpart). The capital is Addax Ababa.
Whup, more dastardly bastardly deeds from Grand Ruler and his best flank-kisser.
Crush them! Make them suffer!
I'm liking Lightning Dawn's development. And I'm interested to see who next joins Starfleet (And how long they last)
Vive La Revolution!
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What did you find Heartwarming in Checker?
And please, feel free to talk about what you loved in the other chapters
The Grand Ruler is starting to remind me of Lord Kaan of Sith lore. He was such an inept leader that he needed to mind trick his legions into following him rather than actually prove his own strength in combat. Then he gets tricked into using a power that killed a ton of his enemies, himself, and all but one of his followers.
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Not going to lie, this is still one of my favorite chapters to write.
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That she cares. She denies, but she cares. Having read "Getting Back on Your Hooves", I find that most heartwarming.
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That's because Rhmey offends Zecora that much. But that is why she is awesome
Zecora:Since you think I am so sublime
How about some screentime?
heh...sorry
8124604 Well, if it's on offer, I do quite like Zecora.
This smug and self-entitled fraud needs putting in his place.
My luscious limericks will wipe the smirk right off your face.
No Contest!
Another great chapter😊 and huzzah for lighting to take the first step
i like the story....But for the love of god, re-read and correct your errors ! It is painful