Not that I mind stories that try and "fix" bad ones, (I like them, really I do) but why not start with the very first My Brave Pony story?

Just read the most recent chapter and I'm in process of rereading the previous chapters. I'd forgotten how much I despise Mykan and everything he stands for.

One thing I have to ask is the fate of Celestia's children. I can't help but think about how all of this might affect them, especially when the Grand Ruler is gone. Not to be melodramatic, but there's got to be at least one person being in the land who'll want to A: Smother them, B: Drown them, C: Smash their heads in, or D: Any combination of the first three. That's what happened to Caligula's year-old daughter. And if they're spared, who's to say they won't grow up resenting their mother?

Maybe I'm just thinking too much into this. Keep it up, LegendBringer.

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Don't worry, I have 'special' fates in store for the children. It won't involve death, but it will be something that no one will see coming...that is, unless they read the subtle hints in the previous chapters. And they won't be resenting their mother.

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Because this becomes a lot more fun for me.

Well done on making us feel a little for the poor sod. I can't say I was weeping over him, but I understood why his brother was upset, mostly. And it was nice to see him let his anger out a bit.

But I have to ask: where does the idea that Trixie is a super powerful mage come from? Is that a Lunaverse thing?

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Well done on making us feel a little for the poor sod

Thank you, I was hoping for that reaction

where does the idea that Trixie is a super powerful mage come from? Is that a Lunaverse thing?

Yes, its sort of a Lunaverse thing mixed with how I like writing Trixie. In the Lunaverse, Trixie frequently admits to being strong in one field, Illusions. Everything else she struggles with. I basically play Trixie off in that she is kind of like Mandrake or some other pulp hero maician, she is the best at crafting illusions and trickery, but in a duel of fireballs and lighting...she's a utter whimp. Basically, she couldn't hope to match Twilight or Sunset,but she can be tricky. Also, I love writing magicans who can use tricks and traps to fight.

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They might not be about to die horribly but it has occurred to me that there must be something up with those kids, becasuse Celestia keeps forgetting that she's got two of them.

I'm not sure what it means but I'm confident that it means something.

And the Oscar for "Best Performance in Chapter 8" goes to....

(opens envelope slowly)

Mr. Dyno Enrico Sebastian LA Guava!!!!

Congratulations, Dyno! Your outburst was indeed a stunning emotional display!

YAY! FANCY AND FLEUR!!!
Please let us see more of those two!!!

On a side note, Dyno's outburst was pretty close to the chest and I like how Dementia and Starla's relationship's developing and I especially liked how Dark Conquest breaks his affably evil façade and is genuinely pissed off at Trixie.
Grand Ruler's guilty of monumental ignorance but it looks like Dark Conquest may have to up his game a little as well.

*clap clap clap*beautiful this is just beautiful.first,poor dyno dude needs a rest and Trixie they need some me time,second more conquest moments I thought when he stare at Trixie it was the one time he was serious,three,bravo for the mane 5 plus belle and I approved on how they handle moondancer they did it beautifully and commendably, 4 you handle the characters beautifully legend

I just realized Conquest reminds me of hazama from blazblue

Dark Conquest smiled as he drank his wine and looked over his shoulder, “Oh, come om. You knew this was coming. It was just a question of who was going to die first.”

James Woods as Dark Conquest. Prove me otherwise.

I have to be honest, Ive never read the original starfleet stories, so I’m asking, are they really that bad? Cuz I’m having a hard time believing a team like that (if you wanna call that unit a “team”) can properly function like that. Sounds good on paper, but a really mess in execution, as this chapter explains, RIP Myte, he and Dyno deserved better.

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Yep! They are that bad.