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Holy...Huh...I...WOW...
So much happened.
I think I'm going to need to take a moment to process all this before I really go over it but...all I can say is...
100% Awesome, my man!
Damn... Just damn. That... That was... Well, it was something. (And I have to say, I did think you beat Fallout Equestria's Shadows of the Ministries chapter in length. Now, try and aim in beating Project Horizons in word length!)
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I am just feeling sorry for whoever decided to do a reading of this.
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I live for reactions like this
Best response to being woke up ever
Okay, collected myself a bit. I'm ready to offer my thoughts.
Oh that Angel.
Lepine, I think. Lupine is wolf.
Am I alone in thinking Meadowbrook would talk in a smooth Irish accent?
Boy, that must have sounded very oddly specific at the time.
Funny how things work out.
Special Agent Fleur De Lis is on the case. Love it!
KISS HER YOU FOOL!
U Mad Bro?
Insert Downfall parody here.
Those new recruits sound familiar.
Can't wait to see how they buck it up.
Dude, I legitimately envy your writing skills! This was another amazing chapter!!
Your chapters are so absolutely enormous that it's hard to know where to start with them sometimes.
Although she wasn't in this chapter at all I'm going to start with my Leilani prediction of the week: she is some kind of magical vessel and instrumental in Celesto's Board Wipe (I never thought that the words Board Wipe could sound ominous before). That's why Celestia ignores her.
Dude, he's actually getting better! Don't give him up for dead now!
Actually, do give him up, you're a terrible influence.
You've done very fell in working a blatant Super-saiyan ripoff into the mythology and lore in a way that fits.
HAH! Well, turnabout is fair play I guess. Cheers.
I can't find a quote but that scene with the replacement squad members...it was brilliantly done and so sad, the way that Celesto has just found these proximate facsimilies of all the dead guys and just stuffed them in there like a really bad TV show where the actors quit and get replaced by a new guy with a new name and the exact same characterisation as the one who just left the show. Shows just how little of a damn the Grand Ruler gives about his troops.
You know, reading the flashbacks I kind of wish that we had gotten to see more Harry; he may have been a faithless, amoral, murderous psycho but he was also a complete badass by the looks of it and it might have been cool to have him as a villain here. In some ways he's cooler than evil!Rhymey, if only because of how much he accomplished in a short space of time.
So, let me get this straight: Casca is from an AU of the Berserk!verse where Griffith didn't become the Godhand and sacrifice the Band of the Hawk, but Guts and Griffith where both killed by the others members of the Godhand anyway so they fled to the world of the Sailor Moon fanfic, but Dark Conquest killed all the Sailor Scouts and destroyed that world too? Because that was really confusing until I got the author's note at the end.
It is nice to see a Casca who isn't insane after being gang-raped by demons, however. I know this isn't a Berserk crossover but I feel like she and Starla should spend more time together; they can probably relate.
A bit off-topic but you opened the door to it with the McCloud family: have you seen A Fox in Space?
If Terra was the warrior and Titan was the intellectual then why did Titan fight against the Grand Ruler? Had he killed Terra? Is that why she's not around?
Lastly: holy crap those fight scenes were epic.
So... is this the penultimate chapter? :D
You put me in the story? I am so honored! Thank you! -BIG HUGS!-
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No problem mother.
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Oh, I have plans for them, muhahahaha!!!!
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Thanks. It did kind of bothered me how, in the third season, we hear that Lighting is descendended from some sort of acient race and yadda yadda but, it was established that Grand Ruler made the Space Alicorns and Lighting's people came to Harmonia and were descendended from them. I think this kind of works better in my eyes.
You know, I kind of had that problem when I was writing this moment. After it was done I was sitting back and going "OH man...I really feel bad for killing him off like I did."
Especially since I wonder how he got along with Starla's mother since they were best friends
It isn't the only one I still regret killing *Looks back at Buddy and the missed father daughter moments and sighs.*
Nope, haven't heard of it.
Terra, doesn't really know about the problems yet. See, Titan may or may not have gave his wife a chance to relax at a disant planet to rest her hooves while he handles Grand Ruler for her. He knows that if she gets involved...the story would be over faster than if I bring in the doctor.
Hmmm...maybe a one shot for that one.
OH DEAR GODCAT CELESTO JUST DIDN'T...
That's it, I posit that Hot Shot'll be the reason Starfleet fails (again.) He's just that edgy.
Sorry I took so long, i still have to catch up reading the other chapters before I could get here.
Wow how intense this chapter is, it started with Rainbow and Fluttershy dating, childbirth, to secrets being revealed, plans for rebellion, mythril armor and-- me!
I'm honored Legend and a bit embarrassed to have this privilege being in your fic. Thank you Legend! I'm also amazed you know how to write about the miracle of birth.
By the way, had I read this sooner before I crafted your pony self, I would have made it more accurate with a different background.
I'm sure this is pure coincidence. Sword of Instant reminds of of Instant from Pokemon Adventures, a sword capable of reflecting any kind of attack and the armor reminds me of Eternity, an armor that can slow time.
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Yeah, pure cociendce. I have never heard of those until now.
Huh, strange minds.
It's probably a bit late to bring it up, but in an earlier comment, I mentioned that Castor and/or Leilani might grow up resenting Celestia for overthrowing their father. Now I've only just thought about what might happen if Fluttershy was discovered to become pregnant by Rhymey (Not that I'm suggesting it be put into this story). Best case scenario I can see, considering that the potential foal would be a product of rape, is that Fluttershy decides to have the baby and she and Rainbow Dash either decide to keep it or put it up for adoption. But Rainbow might not want any reminders of Rhymey around.
Back on track, the reason I brought up Castor and Leilani resenting Celestia in the first place is that they might not be at the age or in the mindset to understand that what Grand Ruler is doing is wrong. I mean, I hope not.
Just food for thought.
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Truths are revealed, memories are restored, and the Mane 5 have proven that Equestrians can fight without Starfleet, finally earning the Space Ponies' respect. All in all, things are looking pretty good.
The Story Teller scene was a fine example of a fourth wall joke done good.
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Thank you, this was a pretty fun thing for me to craft and I enjoyed bringing out the Space ponies showing their respect.